Piyu 's OnE ShOts ~ MaYuR~My FiRsT kiSs Pg 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
WOW😲 LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE this Sajan story!!! Its a sad ending, but this is sooo unique..I mean its like a movie script😃..this shud BE a movie.

ur AWESOME at this stuff what can I say.....
This is exact same quality as ur Mayur first part of the one-shot....
👏

what a story.
Plz plz plz add me to the PM list honey (to Sajan as well).
Also I wanted to ask u a question- do u write FFs regularly???, I mean continuous ones as well??? I wud love to read it (do giv me the link plz)!! If u don't then u shud start!!!

U can write really well. Usually I gt fed up wid people's FFs coz they don't write in good Eng. bt ur writing style is awesome!! This story had everything, most importantly a modern, well-written storyline (I mean what an idea👏- text chat)

Thanks so much 4 posting, I honestly, honestly enjoyed reading this!!😃

Kanya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Knowalot2

WOW😲 LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE this Sajan story!!! Its a sad ending, but this is sooo unique..I mean its like a movie script😃..this shud BE a movie.

ur AWESOME at this stuff what can I say.....
This is exact same quality as ur Mayur first part of the one-shot....
👏

what a story.
Plz plz plz add me to the PM list honey (to Sajan as well).
Also I wanted to ask u a question- do u write FFs regularly???, I mean continuous ones as well??? I wud love to read it (do giv me the link plz)!! If u don't then u shud start!!!

U can write really well. Usually I gt fed up wid people's FFs coz they don't write in good Eng. bt ur writing style is awesome!! This story had everything, most importantly a modern, well-written storyline (I mean what an idea👏- text chat)

Thanks so much 4 posting, I honestly, honestly enjoyed reading this!!😃

Kanya😊



thank u so much kanya.....but i don't write ff......iam not good at stretching the stories😆i will surely add u.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
I was crying during the sajan one shot!!!!!!!!!!! NO GUNJAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is beautiful.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
its awsome 😭.put me to the pm list.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajan_forever

its awsome 😭.put me to the pm list.



thank u😊i will surely add u.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sajan4Ever

I was crying during the sajan one shot!!!!!!!!!!! NO GUNJAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is beautiful.



sorry i made u cry😭thank u so much for reading...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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piyu... great yaar ... count me in for pms even if it sajan one...

yaar very very sweet and touching ...😭

wonderfully portrayed.............. how to strangers came to mean so much to each other .👏.. how gunjan when needed little lov she got it from unknown source👏 and how the same love can cross the boundary of death and can touch u ..👏

piyu u r very very talented ...👏

my advice to u is give ur one shots... for voting purpose ... many be it will get nominated .....👏

last line was too mature and too good😉... u even give me advice with that one😳 ... and how true ... Piyu ... both of us can relate to it ...😉

u r wonderful 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
add me to sajan oneshot pm list.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow amazing, please do pm me. thanks sana for sending me the link jan.
Senny thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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piyu please please please keep them together, please don't have nupur gone away. this wasssssssssss sooo touching man, please please do conitinue, it was just too good. mayur simply rocked.

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