Forever and Always....DMG fan fic- Part 12-13 updt

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FOREVER AND ALWAYS

Hey guys im new to the forums. Ive been reading all the fan fics and i decided to start my own. I had made it an open fan fic but i decided that let me only write. We will have an open fan fic later! This fan fic starts from may 7ths scene. It starts from the ending of May 7th epi!

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Part 1- Pg 1
Part 2 - Pg1
Part 3 - Pg 2
Part 4 - Pg 2
Part 5 - Pg 4
Part 6 - Pg 5
Part 7 -Pg 6
Part 8 - Pg 7
Part 9- Pg 9
Part 10- Pg11
Part 11-Pg 13
Part 12- Page 16
Part 13- Page 16


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Indiaforumisode 1: Finally after everything Riddhima has now come to Dr. Abhimanyu's room.

Riddhima: Sir apne mujhe bulaya tha?

Abhi: Haan Dr. Riddhima woh naye Sanjeevani ke patients ke files dikhane the. You have to be thorough with them before you can start helping me.

Riddhima: Ji sir. I'll go through them and make reports. But iw as thinking since Dr. Nikita had done research can i use her help?

Abhi: Why? Cant you do it on your own? Aapko apne aap banana hai yeh reports. No help and all that.

Riddhima: Ji Dr. Modi

Abhi: Aur haan ham kal hi kam shuru kardenge so be quick. Vaise bhi i have given only 2 files na. Tomorrrow morning report here at 8 o clock and working hours will be 8am to 9pm. Samjhi?

Riddhima: Par Dr. Modi yaha ki working hours hai 8am to 7pm..

Abhi: Aapko jo kaha gaya vahi karna.

Ridzi: Teekh hai. She leaves the room and is going to search for Armaan as she knows he will be angry as they cant spend time together.

Suddenly she sees Armaan going to the locker room so she runs to catch up.

Ridzi: Armaan, Armaan ruku.

Armaan turns and smiles. Armaan: Haan meri jaan kya baat hai? Dr Modi ke saat meeting kaise rahi.

Ridzi: Armaan mujhe tumse baat karni hai.
She pulls him to the fire escape.

Armaan: kya baat hai basket?

Ridzi: Tum naraz mat hona please?

Armaan: Teekh hai kaho to.

Ridzi: Armaan woh Dr modi ne kaha ki naye Sanjeevani mein timings 8am to 9pm hai.

Armaan: Kya? Us stupid idiot ko main nahi chodunga. He is almost leaving to go tho Abhi's room.

Ridzi: Armaan tumhare jaane se kuch nahi hoga. Hame kuch sochna hai.

Armaan: Haan yaar basket. Ab ham kab mil payenge.

Ridzi: Haan..Thinking...IDEA!




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey itz gr8 start... I like da way Abhi sush ridhima... plz continue soon
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Ill try and write good update
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Okay im continuing! Thanks to those who commented! Keep commenting it encourages me!

Riddhima: Armaan mere pass ek idea hai

Armaan: Turning towards her and holding her face. Haan basket bolo kya socha hai?

Riddhima: Hume worry karne ki koi zarurat nahi. Tum daily park ate ho excerise adi ke liye aur mein bhi jogging ke liye ati hoon to hum waha milte.

Armaan: Kya basket...(Holding her and looking into her eyes) Utna samay mere liye bas nahi hai tumhare saath...

Riddhima: Arm-aa-n!! Hume kaam ke liye karna padega....aur vaise bhi bad mein----

Armaan: Coming closer to her. Kya basket? Bad meing kya?

Riddhima: Blushing! Woh..Actually woh...Bad mein hamari jab shadi hogi toh--uh..

Armaan: Oho..koi shaadi ke bare mein bohot soch raha hai!

Riddhima: Mera matlab tha ki jab shaadi ho jayegi to hum aapke hi saath rahenge na?

Armaan: Ha meri jaan aap hameri saath hi rahengi..hamesha!

Riddima: Haan Hamesha...

They both hold hand together and asmani plays in the background. they keep staring at each other and there is an eyelock as usual.

Tring Tring.. Suddenly Ridzi's pager rings and then Armaan's.

Ridzi and Armaan: Mujhe jaana hoga...

Armaan: Bye jaan! Raat ko kya tum aaj ghar mere saat chalogi? I want to show you something phir mein hi tumhe ghar par chodunga.

Riddhima: Blushing. Teekh hai Armaan. Bye

----

Rahul is walking in the corridor. Suddenly one girl is coming in the opposite direction and they clash and rahul holds the girl. The girl is wearing a miniskirt and make up and she has brunette hair. Rahul was lost in Muski's thought so he just holds her and lifts her up.

Rahul: Sorry!

The girl: Its ok. Jab handsome ladke galati karte to maaf kiya ja sakta.

Rahul smiles at her and is about to walk off as he sees Muskaan and he wants to talk to her.

Girl: Ruku. Apne naam to batao.

Rahul: Kyun? Vaise bhi im Rahul.

Girl: Im Sneha.

Rahul: Nice meeting you. Mujhe jaana hai.

Sneha: Same here.

They walk off but by that time Muskaan had gone so Rahul is upset.
Voice: Saare interns nurse station mein report kare. All the interns arrive at the nurse station and Dr Keerti and Dr Modi are standing there waiting for them.

Dr Keerti: Interns hamne aapko isliye bulaya kyunki Dr. Moodi ek announcement banana chate the.

Dr Modi: Haan mein aapko Nisha se milana chahta tha.

Rahul thinks to himself: Kahi wo Nisha to nahin? Nahin Nahin nahi ho sakta wo kyun milna chahegi hamse.

Dr modi: Yeh he Dr.Nisha. Kyunki mein nayi Sanjeevani mein busy rahunga to tab tak Dr.nisha yaha sambhalegi. To behave yourselves.

Dr Nisha: Hello interns. Will you introduce yourselves.

Anjali: Hi! I am Dr. Anjali.

Muskaan: Hi! Main Muskaan.

Nikita: Hello! im Nikita.

Atul: Hi i am Atul.

Armaan: Main Dr Armaan!

Nisha: Nice to meet you Dr Armaan. Im sure we will share a good rapport.

Armaan just ignores her and Riddhima is happy to see that.

Riddhima: Hi! Im Dr Riddhima.

Nisha: Oh lekin aap to ja rahi hai na?

Riddhima: Haan!

Nisha: To unluckily hum ek saath kam nahi kar payenge. Anyways may be next time.

Nisha moves on after shaking hands with everyone and arrives at Rahul.
Nisha: Hi Dr Rahul!

All interns are surprised to see she knows him. Rahul just nods. But Muskaan turns her head and is hocked that Nisha knows his name. Nisha takes his hand and shakes it.

Nisha: Teekh hai main ab se sab interns ko supervise bhi karungi. Id like to start with Dr. Rahul phir Dr Armaan phir Dr Anjali phir Dr Muskaan aur phir Dr Atul. Now you can get back to work!


Edited by PrincessSonshu - 16 years ago
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heyy
just went thru both the parts.
they r 2 good.
pls continue soon and pm me if possible.
luv
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heyy
u write so good.
both the parts r beautifully written.
pls continue soon and pm me if possible.
luv
kinnari.
Edited by kinnari2295 - 16 years ago
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Okie i know that im updating for the third time but its becoz i wont be updating tomorrow! So here's another part! Treat for you'll!

Nisha: Dr rahul aap rukiye vaise bhi min aaj apko supervivse kar rahi hoon toh saath mein chalte hain and you can show me Sanjeevani too.

Rahul: (He doesnt want to flirt but he sees Muskaan so he does it to make her jealous.) Of course Dr.Nisha, agar aap itne sweetly puch rahe to kyun nahin? Chaliye is taraf. He catches a glimpse of the jealous Muski.

Nisha and Rahul leave. Muski storms from there and rest go for duties.

Armaan and Atul in General Ward
Riddhima- no duty as she has to go through files
Nikita: ICU
Anjali: Emergency ward.

Armaan: Kya yaar Nana yeh Modi bhi! Use maar dalunga mein.

Nana: Mar daalega ya khayega?

Armaan: Nana woh fluke se jeeta. Woh sab chodo ab dikhao mujhe injection lagwana.

Nana: Nahinnnn....

Armaan: Nana mein Dr.Keerti ko buladonga

Nana: Teekh hai main aata hun.

Atul: Armaan idhar aana....Signals to Armaan

Armu: Kya yaar?

Atul: Woh ab tak Sasurji se puch nahin paya. Kya karun? Ab dating week bhi khatam ho chuka hai.

Armaan: Mujhe kya pata. Kya main love guru hoon?

Atul: Haan! Tumhare itne GF's the. Aur aaj Dr. Nisha ko bhi dekha na? Kaise dekh rahi thi tumhe aur Rahul ko.

Armaan: Kaun? Oh woh Dr.Nisha? Woh kitne batameez hai na? Short skirt sab pehenkar aa rahi. Yeh sanjeevani hai fashion show nahin. Koi use samjao!

Atul: Aba bataana!

Armaan: Oh! Badmein ab mujhe Ridzi ko ghar chodna hain. Aaj aakhre din hai ki main usko ghar chod sako raat ko!

Armaan rushes to meet Riddhima! What happens there next part!
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heyyy
awesome part.
loved the way rahul is trying 2 make muskaan jealous.
pls continue soon and pm me if possible.
luv
kinnari.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANKS SO MUCH!

Thanks to all those who have read and commented! Its nice to hear people's thoughts on what u write good or bad! I await more comments!

Will update soon!

Love
Sonshu
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hey sonshu,
the 3rd part was amazing.
pls continue soon and pm me wen u continue the next part.
luv
komal.

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