Pablo's Muse [I] -AR- Pt. 25/Pg 143 May 9, 11 - Page 110

Originally posted by: ammygurl

Dear Aria..

Thank you for the kind reply! :)

This part what really err.. unexpected. In two ways. First, I was about to ping you for the update and then I saw a cute little PM sitting innocently in my PM box saying PABLO Updated :)

Second, I thought Riddhima would tell Armaan about her fears this time. IT didn't happen, Did it? But this part was cute nonetheless, Armaan's point of view is always welcomed..

I don't think Amar's second wife ( Armaan's step mother) is evil. Really now. She seems err.. non-wicked 😆

Hope she is.

I want the confrontation part! *pouts*

One thing - There's a line called where you wrote she couldn't but admire the man's..

Right.. You omitted the word. help. She couldn't help but... So :) Rectify lady ! 😛

This part was as amazing as a strawberry rhubarb pie . And I missed my sweet cheeks 😆

Update soon !

Take care

Kiddo

Originally posted by: imshveta

Nice part. I am happy now they are talking. And this would help their relationship a lot. Issues would always hang on your head unless you address them. Good of Ridhima to understand this and Of Armaan to follow suit.
Continue soon if that's Possible.

Shveta

Originally posted by: Laila.N

Amazing part ! Hope they both tell each other everything soon ! :)

Do continue soon please

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hi!

Good to see you writing this after so many months. I had to refresh myself with the previous part to continue reading further with this.

I am glad that AR have started on treading together. Eager to know all the pasts, both good and bad.

Do not take too long to give us the next part. Please.

PS: I know I have still not commented/read your other fics. Its just that I am not able to come around for some new stuffs. Pardon.

Originally posted by: nksweetgirl

first of all thank you for not leaving this story in the middle...
love the part ..finally getting some things clear between these two...
plzz continue soon now...been waiting forever lol...

Originally posted by: anjie22

Superb part...continue soon..

Originally posted by: DMG fan

Awesome update! The description of art was so vivid that I could just see it in front of me and then I was as awestuck with the art as was R. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!

RT

Originally posted by: bushrayou

oh please please continue SOON... there is so much more that needs to be said between them and so much more that needs to be accepted!

loved the update and can't wait for more! thanks for writing!

Originally posted by: spln

I really liked this part A.

It was a very evocative blend on several fronts, and in several emotions. For me, I think, this was Armaan and Ridhima at their engrossing best (in terms of reader interest) in this fiction so far. (Perhaps just a little of that tall claim comes from how my memory of the past great impacts has slightly faded, but still. I'm sure this is the best thus far).

At work right now - and doing this stuff from my phone is so painful, that you need to excuse me for keeping this short - I'll reserve to get back with my 'favorite' parts quoted!

ps: in case I wasn't obvious about this, I like parts with conversation - not the light bickering in the element stuff, which is nonetheless very entertaining - but the candid spot on kind. Even just two sentences through, for all the preceding revelations that bring them on, and all the succeeding revelations that they bring on!

be back soon,
NJ