Fate's Cruel Game [AR ff] ~ *Part 13*page 95(10/9)

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

great start. nice concept. so AR created some problems for abhi that is why he is on a revenge plan!! in the second part i guessed it to be muskaan. believe me i really felt there is some thing wrong and the girl cannot be ridz. AR not even in same country! thats soo sad. poor things when wil they meet. looking forward to read more. thanks for PM

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

wow!! superb!! mindblowing!! amazing and fantastic part.......

i loved it loads......ur doing a gr8 job soumya!! keep it up!!
ah, well, i was right about d motive of shashank and yash for getting their child married to a person.....just for money....dat is too much!!

how could a father be so selfish?? how?

and, den abhi-ridz part.......was ummmm....abhi was hell...i hate him....and his ego...he is very arrogant!!

ok.....now again what had happened two years back?? plzz reveal it soon!!

and i thought dat gal would be Riddhima..but how could it be possible......umm...anyways.......its Muskaan, and she came to meet her boyfriend...ok, first i felt it would definately be Rahul Mallik, i thought......Rahul cn be Armaan's bro too.....but when she hugged him and said....dat she wanted to meet him....den i was so confused!!!

bahut zyada confusion ho raha hai.......

plz plz continue soon!!
cn't w8 more....

thnx a lot for d pm......

dis ff is too gud!!

keep writing!!
i love it!!!

-love sanjana

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

hi,
i won't be updating this ff for a few days as i am nervous as my results are going to be declared today (yikes!!!!) and butterflies are flying in my stomach
the other reason is that i'm planning to go out for a few days so i'm not able to write
but i shall surely update as soon as i finish writing the next part
i shall also reply to all of you after sometime as the time of my result is nearing
bye
tc

love soumya 😊 (keeping my fingers crossed)

Edited by soumya_dmglover - 16 years ago

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

best of luck for ur results!

i hope u get gud marks!!

don't worry...dey'll be gr8!!

n we will w8 for ur ff........

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Ankita Raj

@Armi-Shilpa

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Don't worry Di.....

Ur results will be fine.....

Waise result kya hai??????????

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Armi-Shilpa
Don't worry Di.....
Ur results will be fine.....

Waise result kya hai??????????

thanx anku
mere results bohot acche rahe
i got 92.14% n m damn happy as its above my xpectation

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Hima

@k_anjali12

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

hey dear😊 CONGRATS............👍🏼

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Hey Soumya,
The part was awesome, I really loved it.
Abhimanuy is such a jerk, I hate him from the bottom of my heart.
One thing I am sure about that something happened between Armaan and Ridhima, like a misunderstanding or something, I really want to know it.
I hope the plan Muskaan was talking about is to bring together Armaan and Ridhima.
Armaan and even Ridhima's dad are jerks, I mean just for a deal they want to get their childrens married to another rich businessman child, I hate those kind of parent, who give more priority to money then the happiness of their child.
I hope Armaan and Ridhima meet soon.
Pls do continue soon and thanks a lot for the PM.

Kashish