Fate's Cruel Game [AR ff] ~ *Part 13*page 95(10/9)

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Hi everyone. This story just came into my head and I could not stop myself and I penned it down. I know that this is my second ff but don't worry I shall continue that one too.
I would like to thank Yachu di, deepu, swaancy, ankita, sanjana and aman di for going through the introduction and encouraging me to post this. I have changed my writing style a bit.
Introduction
Never in their dreams did they think that something like this would change their lives forever. Only if that incident wouldn't have occurred in their lives, they would have been so blissful, pleased to live. But fate plays games with everyone. This time it played a game with them. But such a big game? Who would have known that a single incident will alter their whole life?
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He sat in his office trying to read the words on the page on the file but it made no sense to him at all. There was only one reason for that - his mind was elsewhere. He was so deeply absorbed in his thoughts that it made him forget everything that he was going through. All the pain and suffering was forgotten in a single second. Although it had been two years since the incident had occurred his life hadn't gotten any better. In fact it had worsened. But still the happy memories that he had with him always helped him get out of any tension he was facing.
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"This can't be happening mom!!!" she shrieked. She could not believe her ears. How could he do this to her??? He knew what she was going through but still how could he do this to her?
"I tried to reason out beta but he didn't listen to me. You know na that once he takes any decision it cannot be changed, not by me, not by you, not even by god" her mom replied trying to explain it to her.
"But how can I marry someone I don't love? You know that I hate him from the core of my heart. But still you want me to marry him? Please mom I can't do this" and she started to sob.
Her mom took her in her arms and tried to soothe her by rubbing her back. She herself was helpless. She had never been able to defy him not even when she knew that this marriage was occurring against the wishes of her daughter. She had always dreamed that when her daughter would get married it would be with someone she loved. But now she saw that all those hopes were being shattered. "I'll try and figure out something beta but for now you will have to agree to marry him otherwise you will anyway be forced into this marriage.
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He suddenly realized that his phone was ringing. Why can't people stop calling? Why do they always have to disturb me when I'm so happy be it even if I'm dreaming? Although he was irritated he picked up the phone as it could be some very important person.
"Hello" he said his voice showing clear irritation. "How is the work going on darling?" she asked trying to be as seductive as possible. He gritted his teeth listening to the one sound he hated more than anything in the world. "Very well thank you" he replied trying to be as polite as possible. "Great then. Meet me at our restaurant in another half an hour" she said sounding very excited. "I'm sorry but I'm very busy. I still have to work on the evening meeting'" but even before he could complete his sentence she said, "Don't worry about that I'll ask uncle to cancel it. So you are meeting me in half an hour okay." "Ya sure" he said already realizing that he's going to hate the meeting. "See you soon. Come fast baby I'm waiting for you" she said and hung up.
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She went downstairs and softly said, "Papa". He looked up from his file and smiled looking at his daughter. "So what have you decided?" he asked. "I will marry him. Don't worry. I won't go against your wishes" she replied trying to stop the tears from flowing down her cheeks. "That's like my child. I knew you will always agree with me unlike your mother who was against my decision" he said frowning as he thought of his wife opposing him. "Don't worry papa, everything will happen as you wish" except one thing she added in her mind. Then she slowly walked into her bedroom, closed the door n fell down on the bed crying uncontrollably.
So please tell me if I should continue or not. Comments and criticisms are welcome.
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Here is the link to my first ff if you would like to read that too
Kya Yahi Pyaar Hai - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1101669/kya-yahi-pyaar-hai-ar-ff-episode-23-pg117-26-4
waiting for your replies
loads of love,
soumya 😊
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Index



Introduction - page 1
Part 1 - page 8
Part 2 - page 14
Part 3 - page 20
Part 4 - page 27
Part 5 - page 35
Promo - page 40
Part 6 - page 48
Part 7 - page 56
Part 8 - page 67
Part 9 - page 72
Part 10 - page 81
Part 11 - page 85
part 12 - page 91
promo - page 93
part 13 - page 95

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Edited by soumya_dmglover - 16 years ago
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Nice concept
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Sounds gr8!
Wonder who the person who called that guy was...And who is the guy?
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Hey soumya;

That sounds cool dear, I Hope it would be 'AR' getting married. Aaah they hate eachother, they will make hell out of each other after marriage. It would be fun to see them fight.
would love to read more. waiting to know about the incident they are talking hope they are connected.
Best of luck with it.
Thanks for the pm and do continue. Nice concept.
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Originally posted by: fiction-writer

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Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Sounds gr8!

Wonder who the person who called that guy was...And who is the guy? u'll get ur answers soon
Cant wait 4 the 1st part...Do begin soon sure
And if possible, do PM me as well when u continue...Thanks! sure will do so
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Originally posted by: Rohit86

Hey soumya;

That sounds cool dear, I Hope it would be 'AR' getting married. i'm goin 2 b tight lipped about it😊 Aaah they hate eachother, they will make hell out of each other after marriage. It would be fun to see them fight.
would love to read more. waiting to know about the incident they are talking hope they are connected.sure
Best of luck with it. thanx bhaiya
Thanks for the pm and do continue. Nice concept.
Thanks for advance wishes dear. ur welcome

Love ya loads luv
Rohit🤗 soumya 😊

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