The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: styleislife13
Hey ...........Pinky
Awesum update sweetie....... thankssssss a lot....😊

Really cute scenes b/w MayUr....aww....pure love...just loved those scenes..... i'm glad u liked it....

And glad they have sum really gud frndz.....

Mayank takes care of Nupur soo much....M...for muderere...oh...oops!. M stands for both mayank & murderer....i dint realise it would cause confusion.....will make clear from next time....😊

Its getting really exciting now......

Keep it up.... thankssss 😃

Best mystery FF ever..... thankssssss 😳

TC...

-Ayesha-

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
PINKY iam getting this feeling that mayu is the serial killer..... well thats a secret 😉
pata nahi aise hi lag raha hai......
plzzzz if hes not then don't make him from my stupid prediction😉 actually i'm very clear about who is supposed to be the murderer....it may or may not be mayank....i dnt want to reveal any suspenses now so just wait 😉
chodo woh......the part was as usual awesome.....mayur are so sweet......and that person is a moron......actually more than that(gali rules ke against hai toh chup rehti hoon) thankssssss a lot i'm glad u liked it 😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.i love reading ur ff.....it really creates fears,suspense.....i can say u r suspense queen😉thats a lovely compliment....yay i'm the suspense queen
plzzzz update soon. will update by thursday pm me😳 surely 😳

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: anurikita
hey pinkz actually when am reading
i was like wt is gng to happen next....

its really unsolved mystery.....poor nupz......

hope mayu will help her.....dont make mayu as negative character....

i cant wait till mayur find who is the serial killer is....

waiting for ur next part .....luv ur writting...

really impressed.....continue as soon as possible....

thankssssss a lot for your lovely comment......i'm glad u liked it....thankssss for your compliment.....will update by thursday.......😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Lilmizz_Rahela
same here

yes i will.....😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Lilmizz_Rahela
wow dis part rockz cant eyt 2 c more fab 1nz

thankssssss a lot for your sweeeeet comment......i'm glad u liked it.......😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wow tht was amazing and thril part i am wondering who was serial killer is he always kill models same way now again wondering wht going to happend nupur.

thankssssss a lot for your sweeeeet comment.....yes he only kills models.....😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: .x.Shilky.x.
hey lol
itz gd.

do continue more!!!

thankssssss a lot....will surely update soooon.......😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s
woww!!!

just caught up with ur FF its too good!!

do cont soon!!

me waiting....

thanksssss a lot for your lovely comment.......i'm glad u liked it. 😊......do u wish to be added to the pm list?????

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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RECAP:
Nupur told mayu about the serial killer.The group makes friends with sonia who is elissa's friend.Someone corners nups in the washroom & its completely dark.
PART 6:
Nups was standing completely shocked.The person had covered her mouth & pushed her on the wall.She was pinned between the wall & the person.The person was searching for something while nups was trying to push him.He removed something from the pocket & bought it near her face.Nups thought it was a knife & closed her eyes.But then she felt some heat near her face as if something was burning.The person had left her mouth.She opened her eyes slowly & was captured in the intense brown eyes.Yes it was mayank.His face was glowing in front of the lighter.Nups face was all wet with a mixture of sweat & water.She was drowning in his deep brown eyes & so was he.She saw the passion of love in his eyes while he saw a mixture of fear replaced by relief in her eyes.He was standing so close to her that for a person at a distance it would be like seeing only one person rather than two.Their bodies were touching other with no gap for air passing in between.nupur was so drowned in his eyes that she could hardly speak.she could only mouth 'tum?'
Mayu put the lighter out & kept it back in his pocket & went more closer to her & spoke in her ears with a voice full of passion & sexiness.
M: tumhe bahut miss kar raha tha….
Nups closed her eyes as soon as he came near her ears.A smile played on her lips on hearing what he told.He kissed her neck softly.Just then the light came back bringing nups back to the present world.Nups just realized he had scared her a few minutes back & pushed him back with full force & he fell on the ground.
M: ouch!!!!!ye kis liye tha????
N(giggled): mujhe daraane ki sazaa….
He tried getting up but couldn't as his leg got injured.He started moaning in pain.Nupur realized because of her stupidness she hurt him.She quickly gave him her hand to make him get up but he was smart.He pulled nups down on the pretex of trying to get up.This made nupur fall over him.Nups was lying over him.
N(hitting his chest): tum bahut bure ho…mujhe laga tumhe sach mein chot lagi…
She tried getting up but he pulled her back & catching her waist rolled over her.She was now pinned beneath him.He was giving his killer smile.
M: ab kaise jaogi???
N: mayank….chodo na….
M: itni jaldi nahi….pehle tumhe jee bhar ke dekh to lu….aaj puri duniya hamaari dushman thi…kissi ne mujhe tumse milne ka mauka hi nahi diya….par main bhi aashiq hoon….(winking)….apni mehbooba ko milne ka raasta khud banaa sakta hoon….
N(smiling): achaa Mr.Aashiq tumhe is waqt kya chahiye???kyu apni mehbooba ko tang kar rahe ho???
M(mischeviously): bata doo???
He bought his face more closer.Nups realized what he was about to do.
N: nooooo…..mayank koi aa jaayega….
M: koi nahi aa sakta….maine darwaaza lock kar diya hai….
He captured her lips before she could say anything more.Soon they were kissing each other.Not a passionate one but a soft kiss full of love.No sooner did their kiss get over & nups pushed on the floor.He was startled at her sudden behaviour.She started laughing at his confused expression.She knew he wanted to kiss her more but she also knew this was not the time.She still had her practice going on & moreover this was a girls washroom.If anyone caught him here he would be making it to the Breaking news.
M(getting up): very smart….lagta hai mere saath ka finally kuch toh asar hua tumpar….lagta tum mein thode brains aa rahe hai….
N: ha ha…very funny….waise main tumse subah se baat karna chahti thi….
M(holding his heart): haaye…..aaj tum mujhe itna yaad kar rahi thi….meri toh kismat hi chamak gayi….
N: shut up aur apna melodrama bandh karo….tumne inspector se baat ki??
Mayank became serious at this topic.He then remembered he had come to talk to nups about this but looking at her went to completely new world.He mentally kicked himself for being so stupid.Nups noticed his expression becoming serious.
N: kya hua??
M: haan maine unse baat ki….unhe serial killer ke baare mein kuch nahi pata tha….unka kehna hai woh elissa ki body ka postmortem karenge aur Mumbai ki police sa baat karenge…..agar khoon ek hi insaan ne kiya hai toh pata chal jaayega….aur ab yahaan 24 hrs police guard karegi aur sab par nazar rakhegi aur tum par khaas….Manager nahi chahta ki serial killer ke baare mein abhi kissi models ko pataa chale kyunki usse darr hai sabhi models yahaan se jaana chahegi….
N: par yeh toh galat hai….woh apne show ke liye models ki jaan khatre mein nahi daal sakta…
M: jaan ta hu…..isliye humne decide kiya hai ki jaise hi humme proof milega ki in sab ke peeche woh serial killer hai hum iski announcement kar denge….sabko saavdhaan karna zaroori hai….
N: waise iske baare mein kab tak pataa chalega????
M: inspector aaj puri chaan-been kar raha hai….kal tak pata chal jaayega….tumhaare mobile se woh video clip police ne le li hai…..shayad usse koi proof mil jaaye….tumhe koi aur message ya call toh nahi aaya na?
N(nodding): haan aaya…..
She showed her the message.Mayu hit his hand on the wall in anger.Nupur got shocked at his behaviour.Never had she seen him so angry.
M: ek baar pata chal jaaye kaun kar raha hai yeh sab……chodunga nahi usse main….
Just than nupur's cell rang.For a sec she thought it would be the killer but than she saw the name flashing.It was gunjan.
N: haan gunjan….woh….haan main theek hoon…..main washroom mein hoon….abhi aa rahi hoon…..chal bye…
M: kya hua???
N: bahut der ho gayi hai…gunjan ko fikar ho rahi thi….main chalti hoon…bye….
She left to complete her practice while mayank went to do his own.Dinner time everyone were enjoying while pulling each others legs.Turn by turn teasing MN & SG while they were having intermediate eye locking sessions.Yet again mayu caught RV stealing glances at dia.Mayu wanted to ask him as he thought now they were friends enough & RV could share his feelings with mayu atleast but he decided he would ask when they are alone.Everyone bid goodbyes & went to their respective rooms.Nupur was about to fall asleep when she heard her cell ringing.It was private number.Scared she simply cut the call.She was in no mood to take his nonsense.But the person kept calling & calling.Frustrated she was going to turn off her mobile but at that minute a message popped up.It said "Jab tak tumhaari awaaz nahi sunuga neend nahi aayegi…..kab tak mujhe ignore karogi???agar tumhe apni aur apno ki jaan ki fikar hai toh mera call uthalo….waise kaafi achi dosti hui hai tumhaari gunjan aur sonia ke saath…..aur tumhaara lover boy bhi bahut chaalak hai par mujhse zyaada nahi….inki salaamati chahti ho toh mera call receive kar lo….warna…."
Nupur got more scared reading this msg.He could harm her friends.He is a mad person.Her cell started ringing again.Scared she received the call this time.

(M= murderer & not mayank 😆)
N: hello…
M: hahaha……toh tum darr gayi….bahut pyaar karti ho lagta hai apne doston se….
N: tum chahte kya ho???kyu mere peeche padhe ho??
M: tut….tut….kitni baar yahi sawaal karogi???kitni baar batao main ki mujhe kya chahiye???
N: kya chahiye???
M(slowly): tumhaara shareer…..aur thoda khoon…
Nupur was speechless hearing this.He was seriously & madly after her.
M: kyu bolti bandh ho gayi???fikar mat karo tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki tumhe tumhaari maut pata hai warna main doosri ladkiyon ke saath itni hamdardi nahi dikhaata…unhe itna lamba samay nahi deta…..par tum khaas ho…tum alag ho…..tumhaari jawaani main itni jaldi khatam nahi kar sakta…..tumhaare life ke aakhri pachees(25) din….tum jitna jee sakti ho jee lo aur main jitna darra sakta hu daraaoga….aur ha apne uss loverboy ko kaho ki zyaada hushyaari na bataaye aur iss case se alag ho jaaye….usne inspector ko yeh toh bataa diya ki meri pehchaan kya hai par agar usne mere maamle mein aage se tang daali toh uski aisi haalat kar doonga ki tum mein se koi usse pehchan nahi paayega….
N(shouting): TUM USSE KUCH NAHI KAROGE…..KUCH NAHI….MAIN TUMSE DARTI NAHI…..NAHI DARTI MAIN….& she cut the phone in anger & threw it on bed & started crying.

She kept crying & crying.His words were repeatedly ringing in her ears.She kept thinking & thinking of what to do.Her friends could be in danger because of her & mayank……her heart ached thinking about him…What if he hurts him…She didn't know what to do.All she knew now was he indeed is the serial killer & can harm any of his friends.He even knows that mayank has told everything to inspector.He has his eye on her 24*7.But how can he??He needs to be very close to her.She knows nothing about him while he seems to know everything about her.Thinking & thinking she drifted to sleep without realizing.She got up in the morning with a knock on the door.She looked at the watch.It was 5:30 AM.Her head felt very heavy.She went to the door & opened it.It was gunjan.
G: arrey tu abhi tak tayyaar nahi hui???
N: tayyaar…..kisliye????
G: tu bhul gayi kya????kal humne kya decide kiya tha???ki aaj hum sab jogging ke liye jaayenge….sab already tayyar hai…
N: Oh!!!nahi main nahi aaogi….meri tabeeyat theek nahi….
Gunjan saw her eyes were swollen & red & she was catching her head.
G: kya hua???
N: bas mera sir dukh raha hai aur thoda chakkar aa raha hai…kal raat theek se soi nahi….abhi thoda aaraam kar loongi toh theek ho jaayega….
G: pakka tujhe dawaai nahi leni??
N: nahi baba…mujhe bas neend ki zaroorat hai…..
G: theek hai par agar tera mann kare toh peeche waale gardern mein aa jana….
N: par please kissi ko nahi bataana ki meri tabeeyat theek nahi khaaskar mayank ko warna woh yuhi pareshaan ho jaayega aur tum log ke saath jaayega nahi…sabse kehna main thodi der mein aa rahi hoon…
G: par yeh toh jhooth hua….
N: nahi yeh jhoot nahi hai….main poori koshish karoogi jaldi se theek ho kar tum logon ke paas aa jaoo…..par main nahi chahti meri wajah se tum log ka plan bigad….main jaanti hu mayank jogging ko lekar kitna excited rehta hai…ghar pe bhi har subah mujhe jaldi utha deta hai aur hum jogging ke liye jaate the….please gunjan….
G: theek hai….par tu jaldi se theek ho jaa…..bye…
Gunjan left & told others Nups will join shortly.Here nupur didn't go to sleep.She sat on the bed holding her head.She recalled all the last night moments.A lone tear fell from her eye has she remembered her friends.She was too confused & too messed up.She wanted to stay away from others until she cleared the confusions in her head.She opened the drawer & removed a calendar.She counted 24 days from today & marked a circle around it.She realized the date.It was the last day here.It was the day when the fashion show would take place.But it was also a special day for her as the date was extremely significant in her life.She wondered if the murderer knew about the importance of that day in her life.All she knew was that the biggest day of her life would probably be turning into her last day if she didn't do something.She heard a knock on the door.She opened it but there was no one.She looked here & there in the passage but didn't find anyone.Then she saw a red envelop lying on the floor.She opened it & was shocked.Her hands started shaking.
Finally part 6 done….hope you enjoy.Please comment/criticize……😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#150

ohhhhhhhhh noooooooo waht's in thAT envelop.......😕
mayur scene was very romantic☺️
yaar tu muhje confuse kar rahi hai......ki mayank killer hai ki nahi.....i wish na hooo..
waise keep it up.....and iam first to comment.yay!!!!!!!
PM ME.👍🏼

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