The Unsolved Mystery(AR) EPILOGUE PG-101 02/05

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Posted: 16 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: cute_trish
hey pinky
awesome part.Update fast

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Posted: 16 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan
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I REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL Y LOVED THIS PART.

LOVE U SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: swetha10
Lovely update... nice to c tht Rahul, Muski, Atul n Anjie r also there... hope the c the mystery unfold soon.. PLzz continue soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Robin_M
looks like the psycho has started his work! what a scary phone call!! poor ridz! and now whats in her room?!! very curious to know!
the AR scene was hot! hehe what a kiss! so sweet :)
angie is so rude, i feel bad for poor atul! RM are great! im glad u introduced them!
continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: dmgrock
hey...it was an awesum part.
rlly enjoyed it.

wonder wats wid anjali.

i cant w8 2 read da next part n know dat wat is in ridz room.

plz continue sooooooooon.

n thnx 4 da pm.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
hey amezing update..OMG..cant wait to know why ridz screamed so loud....wow they had their most passionate kiss..how cute....lol..update soon...thankc 4 the pm..
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Posted: 16 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL
jeez!! lady, ur creeping me out..and cliffy??? im gopne get revenge fpr that..HAHAH!! lolz..jk!! loved the update..but i still hate u for the cliffy and love u for the part..lolz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#138

hey
just came across ur ff..pls add me to ur pm list nd continue soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: ridzi830
hey
just came across ur ff..pls add me to ur pm list nd continue soon...

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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RECAP:
AR meet RM & AA.They all go to London.Ridz gets a call from the mysterious man.She is scared & tells armaan.Some cute AR scenes.After dinner ridz comes back to her room & is shocked & screams.
PART 4:
Everyone heard ridz scream & gathered in her room.She was too scared & standing with her mouth open.Muskaan was the first one to reach her room.Even she was shocked at what she saw & was trying to control ridz.By the time other girls behind her were busy gossiping about her.Armaan,atul & rahul also came & made their way towards ridz.They were also shocked when they saw what was written on the wall.Someone had written something with blood.It read: "YOU ARE DEAD"
As soon as ridz saw armaan she hugged him tightly & started crying hysterically.
Ri: armaan maine kahaa tha na koi toh hai jo mere peeche padaa hai….
Armaan exchanged worried look with rahul.Muskaan saw this.
M: yeh tum dono ek doosre ko aise kyu dekh rahe ho???
Ra: woh…. Actually…muski….(looking at armaan & questioning what to say)
Ar(closing his eyes): I'm sorry ridz….main nahi jaan ta tha tum itna dar jaogi…
Ri(leaving him & looking into his eyes): kya matlab????
Ar: woh…. Yeh sab…actually maine aur rahul ne kiya….it was just a small prank…
Ri(couldn't believe her ears): tumne…..tumne yeh sab kiya????
Hearing this all others groaned as to it was a waste of time to stand there & it was a stupid prank.They went away giving stupid looks.Anjie was heard telling 'showoff' as she disappeared with the crowd.Muskaan was fuming with anger & gave a disgusted look to rahul & went to her room.Rahul followed her for apologizing.Only AR were left now in their room.Ridz went away towards the window not knowing what to do or what to say.Never in her life had she been so scared & today the person who removes her fears is the cause of her fear.She was too angry with armaan.Armaan made his way towards her.
Ar: dekho ridz I'm sorry….main jaan ta hu mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha…main nahi jaan ta tha tum itna darr jaogi….maine aur rahul ne yahi socha ki thoda mazaak karenge toh yahaan ki life mein bhi jaan aaegi….please ridz kuch toh bolo….
Ri: leave..
Ar: kya???
Ri: maine kahaan yahaan se chale jaoo….mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni….
Ar: nahi jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karti main yahaan se nahi jaooga….
Ri(turning around): AAKHIR TUM CHAHTE KYA HO????MERI JAAN NIKAALKAR TUMHE KHUSHI NAHI MILLI KYA???MAZAAK…..ITNA GANDHA MAZAAK KARKE TUMHE LAGAA KI YAHAAN KI LIFE MEIN BHI JAAN AA JAAEGI????MERI JAAN NIKAALKAR SHAYAD TUMHAARI LIFE MEIN JAAN AA JAAGI MR.ARMAAN MALLIK PAR TUMHE YEH SAB KARNE KA KOI HAQ NAHI HAI…TUM JAANTE HO PEHLE SI HI MAIN KITNI DARRI HUI HOON…HAR WAQT MUJHE LAGTA HAI KI KOI MERA PEECHA KARTA HAI….AUR WOH PHONE CALL WOH TUMNE KARWAAYA HOGA….KYU MR.MALLIK???
Ar(shaking her): pagal ho gayi ho kya??main yeh sab karooga???tumhaari jaan nikaal kar mujhe khusi millegi?tum jaanti ho tum meri life mein kya maainey rakhti ho….mera yakeen karo mera tumhe rulaane ka koi maksad nahi tha…tum jaanti ho tumhaare aankh mein aansoo aaye toh mera dil kitna rota hai….mujhe lagta tha tum bahut bahadur ho aur main rahul ko bhi yahi bataana chahta tha ki tum darpok nahi ho….
Ri: haan main darpok hoon….jab mujhe lagta hai koi mujhe tumse door kar dega tab mujhe darr lagta hai….jab mujhe lagta hai tum mujhe chod doge tab mujhe darr lagta hai….aur aaj kal mujhe yeh ehsaas ho raha hai ki mere saath bahut bura honewalaa hai….kahi kuch bahut galat honewala hai….aisa lag raha hai ki humme koi alag karnewala hai…..
Ar: mere hote hue tumhaare saath kuch bura nahi hoga tum jaanti ho…aur humme kabhi koi alag nahi kar paega….maut bhi nahi…..
Ri(crying): pataa nahi kyu par jabse main yahaan aayi hoon mera mann bechain ho raha hai….tum nahi samjhoge…
Ar: toh samjhao mujhe tumhe kya ho raha hai???
Ri: main nahi samjha sakti…mujhe har baar lagta hai jaise koi mujhe dekh raha hai…koi mujhe sun raha hai….koi pal pal ki khabar rakh raha hai….yahaan kuch toh hone wala hai….
Ar: kya honewala hai?
Ri: pata nahi par kuch bura…bahut bura…
Ar: yeh sab tumhaara wahem hai…
Ri(crying more): main jaanti thi tum yahi kahoge isliye main tumhe kuch bataana nahi chahti thi…
Ar: tum fikar mat karo main tumhaare saath hoon….aisa kuch nahi hoga…shayad tum thak gayi ho isliye aisi behki baatein kar rahi ho….thoda aaraam kar lo….
Ri(hugging tightly): waada karo tum aisa mazaak dubaara nahi karoge….
Ar: pakka waada…aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahi hoga….
They sat for a while talking here & there.Then ridz saw bandage on armaan's feet.
Ri: yeh kaise lagaa??
Ar: woh tumhaare kamre mein aaya tha tab galti se glass vaas gir gaya aur mere pair pe lagaa….
Ri: bahut achaa hua….serves you right….mujhe darrane ki sazaa bhagwaan ne pehle hi de di….
Ar(smiling): haan unhe bhi mera mazaak achaa nahi lagga….
Ri: toh yeh jo tumne deewaar par likha hai woh tumhaare khoon se hai???
Ar: pagal ho kya???yeh mera khoon nahi balki sauce hai…
Ri: par tum sauce kahaan se laaye??
Ar: yaad nahi dinner ke waqt main aur rahul dus minute ke liye gaayab ho gaye the???
Ri(wide eyed): tab tum mere kamre mein aaye the….
Ar(making puppy face): sorry…waise main jaanta tha tum naraaz jaroor ho jaogi….isliye tumhaare liye gift bhi saath main rakhaa tha….
Ri: kahaan hai mera gift???
Ar: ab zaroorat nahi…ab tum kahaan naraaz ho????
Ri(faking anger): dekho meri naak(nose) abhi bhi lambi hai aur gusse se fool rahi hai….iska matlab main abhi tak naraaz hoon….meri gift do warna yeh naak lambi hokar tum ko maaregi….
Ar(chuckling): achaa baba yeh lo…
He removes a box & gives it to her.She opens it to find a beautiful bracelet in it.She jumps with excitement & hugs him.
Ri: thank you thank you thank you.Ab tum roz aisi harkat kar sakte ho….
Ar: kyu???
Ri: toh roz mujhe manaane ke liye ek gift milegi..
Ar: jee nahi….main tumhe dubara rote hue nahi dekh sakta….par seriously aaj tumse zyaada main darr gaya tha…mujhe lagaa tha deewar par yeh padhkar tum gusse se uss insaan ko dhoondho gi jisne yeh likha aur jab tumhe pataa chalega yeh maine likha hai toh tum mujhse naraaz ho jaoogi aur main tumhe gift se manaoga…..par tumne toh saare plan par paani daal diya….yuhi rone lagi....
Ri: jo hua usse chodo…chalo ab raat bahut ho gayi hai….jaakar so jaao…kal subah jaldi bhi toh uthna hai…
Ar: Ok.
Saying this he slept in her lap.
Ri(shaking him): yahaan nahi…apne kamre mein jaaoo….
Ar: par mujhe yahaan achi neend milegi…
Ri: shut up aur apne kamre mein jaoo……warna maar padhegi….
Ar: theek hai pehle meri good night kiss toh do…
Ri(kissing his cheek): khush ab jaoo…
Armaan bought his other cheek forward too.She kissed that & pulled him to the door.
Ar: ek aur baaki hai (showing his lips).
Ridz pushed him out of the room.
Ri: tumhaari sazaa…aaj ek kiss kum….(& closed the door smiling).
She felt relieved now.Armaan met rahul on the stairs.Even he had a hard time with muski.
Ra: tum nahi jaante mujhe kitna badaa lecture sun na padaa hai….mere kaan abhi bhi dookh rahe hai…aaj ke baad aisa mazaak kabhi kissi ladki ke saath na karoo….
Armaan laughed at his look.
Ridz wiped what was written on the wall with a cloth & laughed at her stupidness to believe it was blood.Then she looked at the side table & saw broken pieces of glass.There were footmarks of blood.She felt bad looking at the footmark.She thought about the pain armaan must have felt when the glass pierced his leg.She felt bad moreover about the attitude she showed to him.Never had she been so angry with him.She looked at the footmark going towards the wall.But she noticed there was another pair of footmark as well.This footmark was going towards the bathroom.She followed this footmark & went in the bathroom.The footmark ended near the washbasin.She looked upwards & was horrified to see something written on the mirror.Something written in shining red blood.It read:"WELCOME TO HELL"
She was once again shocked & then got angry.
Ri(to herself): yeh armaan bhi na…..bahar ek kaafi nahi tha kya….par iss baar main nahi daroogi….
Saying this she took a bucket full of water & threw it on mirror to remove the writing.Little did she realize there was a lot of difference between the 2 red colours.The red colour of sauce & that of blood were clearly different.
2 days passed by quite nicely.AR & RM got very close & so did atul.Anjali was still alone.Everyone got busy attending workshops.They were being taught various things they had no clue about regarding modelling.But like the 2 days the 3rd day didn't last good.Ridz started getting dirty & disgusting messages from 'private number'.She wanted to show them to armaan but thought better of it.She felt it was some random model who might have got attracted to her & is sending these disgusting messages of sleeping with her.She decided to ignore the messages.She didn't want to trouble armaan with something as stupid as this.Not did once she think about the 'serial killer'.But things were getting out of control on the 4th day.The cheapness of messages was increasing.She then started getting calls from private number.Initially she ignored the calls too but the more she was ignoring the more they were increasing.She was so angry that she decided to bash up the person so that he doesn't repeat this.4th Night she angrily received the call.
Ri(shouting): hello
M: tut…tut…kitna gussa karogi???itna gussa achaa nahi…
Ri(still shouting): kaun ho tum aur kya chahte ho????kyu mujhe tang kar rahe ho….
M: sirf tumhe chahta hoon….
Ri: bakwaas bandh karo warna police ko tumhaare peeche bhijwaa doongi….
M: hahahahaha…….police aaj tak mujhe pehchaan nahi paayi hai toh bhalaa mujhe pakdegi kaise???
Ri: aakhir kaun ho tum????
M: 26 days….
Ri: kya?
M: tumhaare life ke aakhri chabbis din baaki hai….jitna jee sakti ho jee lo….
& the line went dead.Ridz decided its high time she tells armaan about this.This guy was getting on her nerves now.Just then she received a MMS.She opened the MMS & was shocked to see a video clip.In the video clip someone(face was not seen) was drinking alcohol & a girl was sitting clotheless begging for her life & crying.The man was in total black clothes but the video didn't reveal his face.The man finished the bottle of alcohol & went towards the girl.The girl begged him to leave her but he only laughed.The remaining part of the video was covered in black & only the girls screams of letting her go could be heard while the man kept laughing.Then the man moved up & the girl's body could be seen lying on the floor.The girl was in deep pain.She couldn't even move.Then the man took the bottle of alcohol he had just emptied & hit it on the girls head.
Ridz was sweating after she saw this MMS.The girls body resembled something but she couldn't pinpoint it.It was something she felt she had seen before.She was scared as well as felt disgusted at the person who did something like this.Just then she heard a scream of someone from the same floor.She ran & so did other girls & boys who heard the scream of terror.Everyone were terrified at what they saw.In the last room of the floor a girl was lying naked while her friend who had screamed on seeing the dead body was crying while sitting near it.Her dead body lay in the pool of blood.Ridz was shocked when she realized it was the same girl or rather the model whose MMS she got few minutes back & then it came to her mind the dead body was in same condition as was sapna's.That meant the guy who was after her & calling her was 'the serial killer'.Ridz fainted thinking about this.
Finally part 4 updated.Hope you like it.I tried keeping it not much scary.Thankssss to all those who love my ff & keep commenting.😊