I LUST You Part four- Page 14 UPDATED FINALLY!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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not a prob...
they might add more spice to ur fick
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

All throughout the flight Riddhima thought about her boyfriend/Fiance (Ex- Boyfriend/ Fiance). She didn't think about if she made the right choice or not. She knew that the crap called love didn't exist. She just thought of how stupid her Ex was. "I mean I told him it was not a serious relationship and I told him how I felt about this Love crap. It doesn't exist!" Riddhima mumbled angrily to herself.

Few days later

"Riddhima Beta are you sure you want to go to college?" Sashank stepped in front of Riddhima.
"Yes papa I'll be fine. And plus Anjali is there so I'll meet her." She hugged him and continued, "Did she come back from Vacation?"
"Yeah she came and left early in the morning with her friends."
"Oh darn I missed it. I wanted to meet her." Riddhima headed towards the door and she walked into her car. She slid into the drivers seat and drove to school with directions that led her to the school (She really hated directions but she had no choice).

"Armaan! Armaan! Abhi! Abhi! Armaan! Abhi! Abhi! Armaan! Armaan! Riddhima stopped her car with a screech and looked at what the commotion was. She walked, squishing through the excited crowd. Then she saw it. Two bikers gripping the handle as they bid each other good luck.
A girl in shorts and a very slu*** top walked in front of them waving a checkered flag. She waved it until she was at the end. She winked at the one in a blue and black and blew him a kiss. "Ready, set, go!" She announced and then she waved it hard and the bikers zoomed one.
After a minute or so, Riddhima returned back to her car. What was the point in waiting? Or caring?

Armaan tightened his grip. He curved his bike to match with the rocky, and curvy line. He had lost Abhi a few minutes ago. Just then he heard a faint sound. Like a cry for help. He focused on the road but he kept hearing the sound. He got frustrated. He wanted to win this and all this sound going through his head bothered him. This time the cry got louder. He stopped the bike and dropped his helmet on the ground. He walked and the cry got louder. He stopped on a hill. The cry of help was not quit. In fact the cry was very much desperate.
"Anyone here?" He looked around.
"HELP!!!" Riddhima yelled. "Are you stupid?" Riddhima asked.
"Just tell me where you are?" He turned around.
"Idiot where the hell is the voice coming from?" Riddhima asked this obviously retarded rescuer.
"Oh please cut the crap and tell me where the Fu** you are? So , I can rescue you. You can thank me. And then I win this race," He waited for a response.
"No!" Riddhima replied childishly.
"What?"
"I said 'NO' meaning I won't tell you till you say sorry," She nodded.
"Okay, so let me get this. You won't tell me where you are. Obviously begging for help. I try to help you. You won't tell me where you are. And I'm in a race. So you want me to ask for forgiveness to a stranger who I know nothing about?" He was obviously shocked at her rudeness.
"I said say sorry. How can you assume I'll say 'thank you' to you?" She kicked her legs. "I mean how do you know I won't just walk away?"
"You would say 'thank you' because I saved your life," He cleared his throat.
"Did I ask you to come here?" She asked kicking her legs again.
"Yes," He replied.
"No! I said help. I never asked you to come here and become my 'night and shining armor' or something," She fumed.
"Fine! Then I'll leave!" He stomped his feet but never actually left.
After a few seconds Riddhima softened her voice, "I know you're here." She smiled.
"Can you please tell me where the hell you are?"
I'm hanging by a cliff," She heard a snap coming. "Hurry it's breaking!"
Armaan raced over and saw her head. Her dark and thick black hair that coved her worried face. Luckily and surprisingly enough he found rope. He tied the rope around his bike and threw the rope towards Riddhima. She struggled to climb but Armaan helped her get up by going further from her.
She finally got up and fell flat on her stomach and she laid there and did not look up until Armaan said, "Are you okay?" He bent down.
With a flip of her hair she looked up at him. His eyes were blue like the ocean and Armaan noticed how beautiful her Emerald eyes were. At that moment no one said a thing. They just looked into each others eyes. They kept staring until Armaan's phone rang.
He ignored the three rings the picked up. "Talk." after some one answered he asked. "He won? How? I was just' and then I'" He didn't wanna say how he was rescuing a girl. He hung up and he looked back at Riddhima. She was covering herself with her arms and he could see a few rips and smudges on her clothes.
Armaan didn't know why. But he took off his jacket and put it around Riddhima's shoulders. He gave his favorite jacket (Who no one but him has worn before) to a complete stranger.
She zipped it up and the jacket was big over her and you could barely see her mini skirt sticking out of it. "Great choice of clothes Ridz" She mentally kicked herself for wearing a skirt and heels. She walked towards but she fell (Into his arms). He held her firmly and once again the whole looking into each other's eyes again.
"You can let go now," She whispered. Armaan still held her protectively. "You can let go now," She said again. She got annoyed now, "You can let go NOW!" She yelled in his ear.
"Uh. Oh. Um. Sorry," He straightened.
"Thank you! I KNEW YOU'D SAY SORRY!" She smiled.
"Umm. Miss don't forget you said thank you," His smile was smug.
"I didn't mean it like-" She was cut off.
"I didn't either!" He turned around and stomped his feet.
Riddhima stomped her feet angrily for no reason at all. "What was with that? I was so haughty to the guy who saved my life." She turned around to say sorry but he and his bike were out of sight. She had to say sorry to him. And she didn't even know his name.

Short Part- I know. I know my writing is bad. But anyways here's the 2nd part. Hugs and kisses

---Sonam

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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
woah🤗 that's really a cool one⭐️ superb😍 AR meet rocking🥳 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Socha na tha ke kabhi dosti hogi,
Dil jiske liye ro sake waisi ulfat hogi,
Ab jannat ki galiyon ka rasta kyun dekhu,
Jahan aap ho whi se jannat shure hogi."



AngelsHeaven thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
nice part....
interesting meeting....
good going...
conitnue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
cute part!
cant wait to read more of your fan fic!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe great first meeting! im sure they left an unforgettable impression on one another! looking forward to more sonam, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hehe totally love the 1st interaction of AR!

Great update!
Natasha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
*reserved*
will comment soon!
hey sonam, i am back!
d part was nice, not at all bad dear.....
so finally AR met...i liked dere interaction.....gud job!
but one doubt....ridz was going to college....den how come she was using d directions to school??
-luv sanjana
Edited by Tanyarox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

hey sonam!!!!

why do you think your writing is bad???? you can't judge yourself!
it was a nice part...
keep writing longer parts for us!
love
sumedha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
Part two was damn cute. Them and their arguements.

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