*DMG-Ahabharat* FF by Seeta Part 4/Page 9 - 15/09

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Trisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Wah Wah!!Kya part tha Seeta Jee...Hum ye padh kar bahut khush huye!!Ye Anjali aur Rahul ko toh.......ugghhh..Antim wala part ne humara gussa thanda kar diya...Dhyanyavad..PM bhejne ke liye aur itna khubsurat part likhne ke liye..

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: cute_trish
Wah Wah!!Kya part tha Seeta Jee...Hum ye padh kar bahut khush huye!!Ye Anjali aur Rahul ko toh.......ugghhh..Antim wala part ne humara gussa thanda kar diya...Dhyanyavad..PM bhejne ke liye aur itna khubsurat part likhne ke liye..

Dhanyavaad mahodaya. Hume ye jaankar ateev prasannata hui ki aapko yeh lekhan pasand aaya. Humara sada yehi prayatna rahega ki hum aapko isi tarah manoranjit karte rahein. Dhanyavaad.

LOL 😆

Thanks alot! 😃

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

heya seeta...

kya part tha...la-jawaab..atisundar...wah wah !! hamare mann ko tho bahut hi lubha gaya...rajkumar armaan aur rakumari riddhima ki besabri aur mohabbat bahut hi ache se depict(sorry dunno its equivalent word in hindi) ki hain aap logo ne...

anji and naani and rahul being mean and not letting the love-birds talk but the eye-talking during the song was sooo cute...and the rain part...finally they get to be alone and have a convo...

amazingly written guys...all that hindi and all...btw i hope my hindi here is right...

thanks a ton for the pm:)

and continue soooooooooooon....

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Neeta

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
heya seeta...

kya part tha...la-jawaab..atisundar...wah wah !! hamare mann ko tho bahut hi lubha gaya...rajkumar armaan aur rakumari riddhima ki besabri aur mohabbat bahut hi ache se depict(sorry dunno its equivalent word in hindi) ki hain aap logo ne...

anji and naani and rahul being mean and not letting the love-birds talk but the eye-talking during the song was sooo cute...and the rain part...finally they get to be alone and have a convo...

amazingly written guys...all that hindi and all...btw i hope my hindi here is right...

thanks a ton for the pm:)

and continue soooooooooooon....

Depict = Darshaya 😃 😛

Dhanyavaad Sunaina jee! Hume yeh jaankar ateev prasannata hui ki aapko humara yeh bhaag pasand aaya, humara hamesha yehi prayatna rahega ki hum apnne lekhan se aapko ruchit kartne rahe! 😃

*Next part up in a few hours!!!

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Neeta

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Hello folks!!! so Seeta are back with another installment of DMG-Ahabharat!! 😃 😃 we hope you all like it because..well, because we're awesome, and this fic is awesome..and since everything is so awesome, we need ur awesome comments 😎 LOL..jk =P

PART 4

[The rain slows down and comes to a stop, and the moon that was hidden behind the clouds finally peeks out spreading its pearly light over the garden and the two lovers]

Ridhima - [Embarassed for being caught dancing by her rajkumar] - Uh... Rajkumar.. hum.. woh...

[Armaan keeps gazing at her as no words seem to come out of his mouth. As if the dance wasnt enough to attract him, he feels like he's being struck by a tornado when he sees her milky complexion glow under the moonlight]

Ridhima - [Not daring to meet his gaze] Aree aap to... bheeg gaye hain!

Armaan - [Finally coming out of his trance] - Ati sundar!!

Ridhima - [Blushes] - Jee.. woh... hum to..

Armaan - [Still keeping his gaze on her] Bahut sundar naachti hain!

Ridhima - [Still blushing..] Aur aap bahut sundar gaate hain! Pehele to kabhi gaya nahi hai...

Armaan - Isse pehele humein prerna (inspiration) dene wala koi nahi tha.. [Gazes at her intently]

Ridhima - [Finally looks into his eyes and knows what inspiration he is talking about... but decides to play along] - Accha? Kisne prerna di hai aapko?

Armaan - [with a naughty glint in his eyes] Jiske liye maine woh gaana gaya tha..

Ridhima - [Fakes annoyance and turns around] - Woh to andar bhojan kar rahi hai.. (referring to Anjali) aapko unke paas jaana chahiye. Yahan kya kar rahe hain?

Armaan - [Comes closer to Ridhima, who's back is now facing him] Aur kya yeh zaroori hai ki maine unhii ke liye gaana gaya tha?

Ridhima - [Senses him coming closer and whispers] - Toh phir kis ke liye gaya tha?

Armaan - [Whispers in her ear] - Aap acchi tarah se jaanti hain ki woh kaun hai..

[Ridhima is lost in the moment and doesn't realize that Rajkumar Armaan has left]

Ridhima [Slowly opens her eyes and turns around]: Rajkumar Armaan kahaan gaye..?

[She remembers the small moment they had shared and blushes. Hitting herself lightly on the head, she grins and walks away]

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[Armaan is returning from the garden, remembering the moment he shared with Ridhima, when Anjali comes into view]

Anjali: Arre Rajkumar Armaan, aap itne bheeg kaise gaye ? Aur aakhir aap chale kahaan gaye the ? Itni der se hum aapki prateeksha kar rahe hain..

Armaan [Broken out of daze]: Woh..Rajkumari Anjali..hum..uh..Haan, Hum shauchalya se waapis aa hi rahe the ki humne socha agar Sanjeevgad aaye hi hain toh unke rajya ke ghodon (horses) ko bhi parakh lein..(shows his teeth) hehe...

Anjali [all wierded out]: Ghodon ko ? Toh ghodon ko parakhne ke liye aapko varsha mein bheegna bhi sweekar tha ?

Armaan [grins sheepishly]: Ji woh..hume Ghodon se ati uttam prem hai..bachpan se hume ghodon se kaafi lagaav raha hai..

Anjali [nods at his wierd behaviour]: Accha, ab aapne ne unhe parakh liya ya aur nazdeek se dekhna chahte hain ?

Armaan: H-Haan..chaliye, andar chalte hain..

[On the other hand, Rahul bumps into Ridhima]

Rahul: Arre Rajkumari Ridhima ? Kahaan thi aap itni der se ? Hum saari shaam bas aapki hi..[blushes]..prateeksha kar rahe the..

Ridhima [doesn't realize what he's talking about]: huh ?..um..woh..hum..hum aap hi ko to doondh rahe the! [regains confidence] Kahaan kahaan nahi doondha aapko humne, aur batao, aap yahaan khade hain..

Rahul [surprised]: Kya ? Aap hume doondh rahi thi ? Parantu kyun ?

Ridhima [tongue tied]: Woh..hume..hume aapse gaajar ke halwe ke baare mein baat karni thi!

Rahul [Wierded out ALOT]: kya ? gaajar ke halwe ke baare mein ?

Ridhima: Haaaannn...humne suna ki aap bahut swadisht gaajar ka halwa banate hain, kya yeh satya hai ?

Rahul [flushed]: Nahi..aisi koi baat nahi..hum to bas aisi hi, kabhi kabhi..shauk mein bana lete hain..

Ridhima: Ab zyaada baniye mat, Hum pata hai ki aap ek bahut acche bawar-..err..mera matlab halwa banane wale hain..

[And she engages him in a conversation about Gaajar ka halwa]

[From one corner of the daawat, Nani maa looks at Rahul and Ridhima engaged in a conversation, and smirks to herself, congratulating herself on the success of her plan, unknown to the fact that Armaan and Ridhima had already met]

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Krupya shesh do shabd humare is bhaag ke liye zaroor chhod ke jaayen, ya phir 'Pasand' dabaayen, hume ati uttam khushi hogi.

Didn't understand ? Dude how many times do we have to translate the same thing ????

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Really nice part!!!

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!!!!!

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

heyyyyya seeta....

what an awesomely amazing penned part...ati uttam aur ati sundar...

riddhima and armaan's moment...their teasings and their convo was really sweet...

and then armaan and riddhima both bumping into the wrong people after their meet...armaan mumbling abt the horses and riddhima abt halwa....that was funny...

and the evil nanni...m happy she doesnt know abt AR meet...

really well penned girls...

loved it...

thanks for the pm...

continue soooooooooooon :D

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lavienrose

@lavienrose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

muahahhahha atti uttam 🥳 humne aapki ''ahabharat'' ke saare bhaag (parts) padh liye hain 😉 kripya kar ke agli baar hame bhi ''sandesh'' bhej dena 😆
hum aapse bohat prasann hue hain! isliye ye ''gehne aur aabhushan'' aapko bhent mein dete hain.