Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7

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Niks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Hey Rohit,

lovely part......

Veru bad for Ridhimma.....i was having this feeling that her Dad would die.....but now feeling very bad for him and her......

Hope u bring AR together soon.....

Sorry for writing very short comments these days as i am really bust with the Audit......

Will write big comments once i m done with the work.....

Love ya,

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

bhaiya ab main kya batao ki kaisa tha???
samajh hi nahi aa raha hai
i mean this part was just outstanding👏👏
👏i felt very bad for riddhima 😭
at last THE ARMAAN MALIK falls in love😳
thanx 4 d pm
plz update asap
cant wait 2 read further

luv,
soumya

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Absolutely awesome part.. they were almost close to a confession but happened otherwise... keep going dear... thanks for the PM and continue soon...

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suvi_rox1

@suvi_rox1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

hey rohit so finally u unleashed the suspense.n .it was a fantastic prt
thnx fr the pm....

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

seriously bro............aapke FF hi hume rulate hai hasate hai...........aapke FF's se hamara ek naata sa jud gaya hai......aisa lagta hai...................

Mere paas shabd nahi hai........aapki tarif karne ke liye.......

its awesome bro.............

thanx for pm..

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Prit_0987

@Prit_0987

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Hey Rohit bhai;

A rocking part again Rohit, you made me cry. *sniff*😭😭 It was so emotional. Armaan was feeling guilty, but what is use of that?? He did that to her, it was horrible.

I caught the blooper there, it is a night time and there is sunlight falling on riddhima's face.?? 😆😉

She thought him to be angel that was really emotional she cried her heart out. Yeah i too think that hugging part had to be elaborated. it would have been outstanding one then, but still it was Phenominal update.

Thanks for update, you took time for us here. and thanks for pm.

update soon😉

Priti😃😛

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

Thanks guys for your Lovely comment i will reply soon for both the parts...!!
Love you Guys🤗

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

woah R.S🤗 its mind blowing one⭐️ superb dear😍 so Daye Jaane's daughter is not well😆😆😆 having fever who is tha thanks for taking my name😳😳 really sweet u😊 so u remember i m not well😛😛 so touching one😭😭 and i wish soon AR r together😍 he loves her so much😛😛 den why don't he confesed & her dad is no more so sad😭 very bad time she is facing😭 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"My Friendship Is, Not A MOON, Not A SUN, Not A STAR, Because They All Are Disappear, My Friendship Is Like SKY, Which Will Alwayz Be Watching Over U.."

"Unke saath rehte hai par izhar kar nahi sakte,
Unse pyaar karte hai par keh nahi sakte,
Yeh kaisa pyaar hai mera,
Unhe chahkar bhi pa nahi sakte."

"Mujhe yakeen to nahi magar yehi sacch hai,
mein tere waste umrein guzaar sakti hun,
yehi nahi k tujhe jeetne ki khuwahish hai,
mein tere waste khud ko b haar sakti hun."

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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Sonia Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

this part is also very emotional. but not as emotional as the previous part. i am glad that i didnt have to cry. however armaan feeling sad dosent make me feel bad or cry😡. i didnt understand why armaan left in the morning🤢. i felt this update is short. porr ridz,😭 she lost her father too😭. i knew he would die but i wished he was alive atleast for some more days.

one mistake. you wrote sunlight instead of moonlight

Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago