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Posted: 16 years ago
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Uske baad Raj kaam par lag gaaya,sab kuch bikhara padha hua tha.Alekh dopohar ko khana le kar aaya.Alekh kuch zaruri kaam se gaya tha.Dono ek saath kha rahe the.
Alekh- aapne to sab samhaal liya.kamal hai.
Raj sirf muskurata hai.
Alekh- aapne bataya nahin aap iss gaav(village) main kyun aaye hai?yaha par to koi aana hi nahin chata.sab doctor banke badhe badhe hospital dhundte hai practice ke liye, yaha par to minimum facility bhi nahin hai.saher se aanewale log kehte hai yaha par kya insaan jee sakta hai?
Raj- kyun yaha par jo log jee rahe hai woh insaan nahin hai?main ek doctor hu.logo ke zindagi bachana hi mera kaam hai.tumne subah mujhe kaha yaha ki logo main awareness nahin hai,jab tak koi accha doctor aayega nahin,unki madad karega nahin, tab tak log bhorosa kaise karenge medical science par?
Government plan to bohut acche karte hai, par dukh to iss baat ka hai usse thik se execute nahin kiya jaata.Aur raha sawal mere baare main, main shayad yaha par aapne aap ko dhudnne aaya hoon.mere baat choro tum aapne baare main bolo.
Alekh- Iss gaav main ek chota sa school hai, mere pitaji woha padhte the.pitaji chate the main higher study karu,isliye gaav ke school main padhai khatam karne ke baad usne mujhe saher bhej diya,ek Government school main padhta tha.Uske baad collg bhi khatam kiya,par kismat dekho koi naukri nahin mila.gaav laut aaya,uss school main padhata hoon, aur bhi ek ladhka hai,main Science le kar padha tha,isliye pehle yaha par jo doctor the usne mujhe aapna compounder bana liya.tabse aisa chalta hai,aur jo paisa milta hai mera aur meri biwi Neelu ka aaram se chal jaata hai.
Raj- hmm, vaise Alekh ek baat puchu?
Alekh- kya??
Raj- yaha par to bachpan main hi sab ki shaadi ho kara diya jaata hai,tumare shaadi bhi kya bachpan main ho gaaya tha?
Alekh- arre nahin nahin, pitaji ko yeh bilkul pasand nahin tha,mere shaadi bachpan main nahin karaya gaya.par bachpan se Neelu mere dost thi.
Raj- not bad, childhood sweetheart.
Alekh- aap bhi naa......
Raj- plz Alekh, aise aap mat bolo, tum keh kar bula nahin sakte kya?
Alekh- haa, tum hi kehna parega, kyuki mujhe lagta hai hamari acchi khasi dosti jamnewali hai.
Yeh baat sun kar Raj thora udhas ho jaata hai.
Alekh- kya hua?kaha kho gaaye?
Raj-..............haa, nahin to kahin nahin.kya bol the tum?
Alekh- main jaa raha hu, kuch kaam hai, tum kab nikloge?
Raj- Alekh, thora kaam abhi bhi baaki hai, main thori der baad aata hu.
Alekh- tum bunglow main chale jaana, main wohi par tumse milta hoon.
Raj- no problem Alekh, main chala jaunga, tum jao.
Alekh ke jaane ke Raj phir se kaam pe lag jaata hai.
After sometime, Raj kaam khatam karke bunglow jaane ke liye nikalta hai.Raj Idhar udhar dekhte dekhte chal raha hai.Gaav main Panchait election ki taiyari chal raha hai.Raj dekhta hai idhar udhar poster lagaya gaaya hai.Kuch log campaining bhi kar rahe hai, aur bechare gaavwalo ko samjha rahe hai kyun unki party ko hi vote dena chaiye. Raj aapne aap thora muskurata hai.
Raj bunglow main laut aata hai, aaj usse aapne beeti hui zindagi ki kuch baatein bohut yaad aa rahi hai.

Flashback
Raj & Ritu dono ek coffee shop main bethe hue hai.Pehle to kiska kaam kaisa chal raha hai yeh sab baatein ho raha tha.Phir shuru hua sabse controversial discussion- about politics.Garam Garam coffee ke saath hot discussion bhi chal raha tha. Achanak Ritu ne sawal pucha-
Ritu- Raj tum itni der se politics politics kar rahe ho.What is politics??
Raj sawal sun kar confused ho jaata hai, sach main usse to iss politics term ka defination hu nahin malum.
Raj- uhhhhhh..........hmm...i mean..........
Ritu- nahin pata,hai naa??
Raj- naaaa
Ritu- khair, main batata hu.Ek family ka simple example de kar tumhe samjhata hoon.
Raj- ok, samjhao.
Ritu- ek family main ek 14 saal ka beta aapne papa se puchta hai, papa what is politics?papa kehta hai, dekho main paise kama kar laata hoon, to main capitalist,tumhare mummy uss paise se ghar chaliti hai to woh hai Government.Jo aunty tumhari dekh bhal karti hai woh hai working class,tumhare bhale ke liye hum yeh sab kar rahe hai to tum public(aam aadmi), aur tumhari choti bahen hai Future.Ab raat ko woh baccha dekhta hai uski choti bahen bistar main susu karke ro rahi hai.to woh jaldi se aapne maa ko bulane jaata hai dekhta hai uski mummy so rahe hai.Aunty ko bulane jaata hai dekhta hai Aunty & uske papa bohut intimate ho kar bethe hai.Woh ladka chala aata hai.Phir subah papa aapne bete se puchta hai kal tumhe maine politics samjhaya tha, tumhe kuch samajme aaya?bete ne jawab diya, haa samaj gaya,Government sota(sleep) rehta hai,Capitalist working class ko exploit karta hai,Public idhar udhar madat ke liye daudta rehta hai, aur future aise hi ek khone main padha rehta hai.
Raj- huh??
Ritu- u don't agree with my point of view?
Raj- haa, tumhe agree naa karu,meri ittni himmat,vaise baat to sochnewali haa.
Ritu- dekha tumhare saath baatein karte karte main to bhul hi gaayi,mujhe kuch zaruri kaam hai, main chalti hoon, bill pay kar dena, mujhe ek under develop country & khud ko united state samaj kar.
Raj( muskurakar)- Yeh Ritu bhi naa.kabhi nahin sudraghi.
Flashback end

Raj & Ritu pehli baar Kolkata se Mumbai jaanewali flight main mile the.

Flashback
Raj Durja Puja ke waqt Kolkata aaya tha.Puja ke baad Mumbai wapas jaa raha tha, uske paas do ladki aakar bethti hai.Thori der baad woh ladki hi baat shuru karti hai.
Girl- hello, i am Ritu.Aap?
Raj- hello, i am Rajveer
Ritu- nice to meet u Rajveer.Aap Kolkata kisi kaam se aaye the?
Raj- nahin yaha mera ghar hai, puja ke waqt enjoy karne aaya tha family ke saath.Ab kaam pe jaa raha hu. Aur Aap?
Ritu- main to kaam pe aaya tha, NGO ke kuch kaam se.Iss kaam main koi chutti nahin hota.
Raj- waise doctor ke kaam main bhi chutti nahin hota.To aap NGO main kaam karti hai, thats good, kis tarah ke kaam karte hai aap log?
Ritu- Hamara organisation basically ladkiyo & baccho ke liye kaam karta hai, vaise bol kar samjhana muskil hai, aap yeh rakh ligiye.Yaha par hamare organisation ke baare main details main hai.
Raj- Thanks, vaise Mumbai main paunch kar aapse contact zaroor karunga, bhala iss zamane main kaun dusro ke baare main sochta hai.
Abb Mumbai airport paunch kar jab Ritu aapna saman taxi main rakh rahi thi, tab Raj aata hai.
Raj- Rituji plz if u don't mind aap mera ek confusion clear kar dengi plz
Ritu- confusion?????????
Raj- Yeh aap Kolkata se Mumbai ki duri plane ki wajah train se cover kar sakti hai, isse paise bachenge,afterall logo ki madad karna zaruri hai, khud ki comfort nahin. sochiyega zaroor.Bye.

Uske baad Raj Ritu se hospital main mila tha.Raj subah round de raha tha,patient ko check kar raha tha.Tab corridor main kisise takra gaya.
Girl- Yaha ke log aapne honesty ke saath saath aapna aankhen bhi kho diya hai kya??
Raj - arre Rituji aap?.....yaha par.. aur yeh kya keh rahi hai aap??
Ritu- i am sorry, main bhi kya bol raha hu.
Raj- relax Rituji, aap yehi rukiye, yaha par ek patient hai usse main check karke aata hu, phir baat karenge.
Thori der baad in Raj's cabin,
Raj- haa, to aap itni gusse main kyun hai?aur yeh honesty khone ki baat...
Ritu- kyun naa karu, ek ladki ka rape hua hai,aur yaha ke doctor sab jaan kar paise kha kar report de diya, everything ok,kisi par bhorosa nahin karna chayiye.
Raj- main aap ki madad kar sakta hoon, trust me, aap uss ladki ko mere paas laiye, main bilkul sahi report dunga.
Flashback end

Tabse Raj & Ritu ki dosti,Raj aise bohut saare case main Ritu ki bohut madad kiya hai.Dono ki dosti gehri hoti gaayi,dono aapne personal baatein bhi share karne laage the, sab kehte the unn dono ke beech affair chal raha hai, par Raj ki dil main aisa kuch nahin tha, he respected her.Ritu kehti thi Raj aaj bhi hamare desh main child marriage hai,drowry system, iss patriarchal society main jaise ladkiya exist hi nahin karti.aur sabse badhi irony yeh hai yaha par log aurat ki puja karte hai, pattar ki murti bana kar.Achanak darwaje pe knock sunke Raj aapne khayal se bahar aata hai.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thats all for today, waiting for u'r comments, & also thanks to all for replying, by the way agar boring laage tab bhi batana.& sorry for the late
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Luved Raj n Ritu's flashbacks. Their first meeting was interesting specially wat Raj said to Ritu. But I really luved the definition of politics. That was too gud.
W8ing 4 the next part. Pls try to continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Accha hai ke Raj aur Aalekh ki dosti ho gayi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So Raj can't cook even though he has stayed away from his home for so many years!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne kaha ke woh ghar ka kaam karne ke liye aur khana banane ke liye kisi ko dhundh lega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Its sad that the state of the village is like that aur waha ke logo mein koi awareness nahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Toh Thakur saab ka lafanga beta hai Huda aur yeh insaan ko insaan nahi samajhte!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Seeing Naina there Aalekh rightly guessed ke unlogo ne Naina ko phir se maara hoga!!!!!

Raj Naina ki aisi haalat dekh kar chauk jaata hai!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj Naina ko dekhkar uski ankhon mein kho gaya like always!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is even more shocked to hear that Naina is a widow!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

A child marriage is disgusting!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj is shocked to know ke abhi bhi ish gaon mein yeh sab chalta hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina ka sasur woh kameena Bhargav hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate Naina's in-laws!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

They are so cruel aur uska haath jaal diya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Uske pati ki maut ke baad se uspe torture karte hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I like the whole idea of Naina being a widow and a love story blooming between them like this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne accha suggest kiya ke Naina would look after Raj!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure it will be other way round and Raj will look after Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
nice update..
its good that raj aur alekh ki doosti ban rahi hai..
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
that was really nice
thank god ki Raj aur Ritu me koi love sove nahi tha
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
loved it......raj ritu flash back was good1.......

waitin to read ahead
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ne toh sab bahut acche se sambhal liya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊!After all he is the best!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aalekh told Raj about himself!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was nice to know that Aalekh ke pitaji ko bachpan mein shaadi karana pasand nahi tha toh he was not married then!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He and Neelu were childhood sweethearts!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Accha hai ke Aalekh aur Raj ki dosti ho rahi hai!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is remembering Ritu after coming back to the house!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Ritu's discussion was very interesting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊I really loved the defination of politcs!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣That was too good!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ritu ka dialogue bill pay kar dena mujhe ek under-developed country aur khud ko United States samajh kar was too funny!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj and Ritu's first meeting was interesting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj ne bhi Ritu ko advice de hi diya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It was nice to know that they had such a great friendship!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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please update soon...its almost been a month since your last update

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