FF:Contract Marriage[MayUr]Pt23 pg113 4/8 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ now the plot thickness.... after 1st chapter i can now once again say it ... i wish i was watching aa movie ...
great yaar 👏.. so how did they end up married...??? let me check the next chapter !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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feed back on second chapter .... but before that Rohit ... I can't find ur index ... yaar i am having trouble finding the chapters.......have to go through all posts😭 ...
Now coming to my feedback...😆😆😆
🤣 '🤣chipkali..🤣..........
tum tum ... nahi ... hum tum🤣🤣🤣..........
benji Type😆😆 ..... Nupur will show him what shie is made up off😛
You r great .. i am having time of my life ... can i save it on my computer also .. all ur chapters ??..
thanks Ruchi and Ammy ... he is a great writer👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
chapter 3👏
I loved their nok Jok and their intense scenes...
Jhansi ki Rani showed his girl power by just sleeping 😉
and that scene about shouting .. and stoping the plane 😆😆... Nups in all her colors ...
loved everything about it ...👏👏
...... now let me check chapter four .....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sana having fun time here haan...??? Do complete reading all i will reply separately too...there are less mayur readers...sajan has more then this...where are mayur's...???
i will update three more fast parts so that it could go along with sajan fic..that i have updated before this...!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rohit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what was that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏


Awwww....That was a Fanfic...!!!😳😆😉

such a wonderful FF and i missed it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lord !!!👏
i have just read the intro only ...as yet ..... 👏

Yeah you missed it...i am glad that you loved it dear...!!😳 read the next parts too...!!!
Rohit r u a professional writer ??? 😉

Yup...neah not at all...This is my First work with writing...i am writing it in fictionforum...after that started 4 more fics...currently dealing with 4 FF's at time..all AR but..!!! die hard AR fan and now...MJHT too...both SAjan and Mayur.....!!!

😉 it was just as if i have opened by romantic novels .. i have read about contract Marriage before in my bks ... this was Just as if I read something from it ... No words ... execellent 👏...
I am romantic by heart and this is like a doze for me..😃.thank u ...👏👏


There are many romantic moments, some intense moment too...i had written it in part 4 but edited as i got some negative comments in sajan one contract marriage...it was little passionate...!!


I will ready remaining parts and get back too u .😉.. I wish I could see a film on this script 👏

Yup...not possible...!!😆😉
and thanks to Ruchi and Ammy we have this FF👏

Yeah they are the one who nagged me to update this for Mayur too, after they read it for sajan...😳

let me read the rest of it and i will get back to u ...

Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
chapter 4:
🥺
Mayu 😭... God what happend to him 🥺
Lord He love Her sooooooooooo much ... it was toooooooooo🥺 touching ...❤️ Rohit u tell me do boys with this kind of Sincerity even exist nowadays ???
God i loved it 👏
it was touching that Nups felt the pain of Mayu even from far away 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i had written it in part 4 but edited as i got some negative comments in sajan one contract marriage...it was little passionate...!!
😆😆😆 i will not mind at all ..........thats what i always ask Ruchi 2 in her FF and one more frnd ,Nihu in her ff ... i tell them give me passion all the way ...😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rohit86

sana having fun time here haan...??? Do complete reading all i will reply separately too...there are less mayur readers...sajan has more then this...where are mayur's...???
i will update three more fast parts so that it could go along with sajan fic..that i have updated before this...!!!

Yeah...there seem to be less Mayur readers here! Where are you all Mayurians...??
But we all who are here do love this fic to bits, Rohit!
I think everyone already read it as a Sajan one so that's why....I think more people will start reading after its parallel to that.....
Anyway, you're doing a great job with updating yaar....!
Its an awesome fic!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

Yeah...there seem to be less Mayur readers here! Where are you all Mayurians...??
But we all who are here do love this fic to bits, Rohit!
I think everyone already read it as a Sajan one so that's why....I think more people will start reading after its parallel to that.....
Anyway, you're doing a great job with updating yaar....!
Its an awesome fic!!




I hope Niddhi..that there will be more...!!! will get this parallel in 2 days then update together...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

i had written it in part 4 but edited as i got some negative comments in sajan one contract marriage...it was little passionate...!!
😆😆😆 i will not mind at all ..........thats what i always ask Ruchi 2 in her FF and one more frnd ,Nihu in her ff ... i tell them give me passion all the way ...😆😆😆



Yeah you will get it lots of fights and passionate moments...!!!

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