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Sam_dean4Eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

supherb part rohit....!! and i need to mention as usual?? nope i dont think sooo.........

ur story-telling is perrfect, u noe when to write about the past and when to come back to the presnt, really supheb work👏

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

i will reply to ya all...later....!!!

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vidisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

wow this is just amazing.....heheh sorry but its just hard to believe that a guy can write such a awsome story lol great.......plz do PM me when u update cant wait to read more...

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
awesome yaar.superb part.update soon.pm me😊

Thanks for the comment dear...i am glad that you liked it..!!

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Senny
oh gosh thank you so much for sending me the pm and the quick update, it was fantastic. i loved it to the core,can we please have more mayur, i just can't wait till mayur meets what happened why did she leave, when did she leave, is she going to meet mayank, would mayank ever get to know about their baby, oh my my i have sooo many questions ringing in my head, please update soon. awesomeeeeeeeee man. great work, keep it up.

Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it😳
Yup..its mayur fic naa...there will only be mayur after some one or two more part...just mayur and no one...!!!
you will get answer of all the questions soon, except the question why did she leave...not so soon...!!!
Not before 35-40 part😆😆😆

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: pakirani
hmmm...looks like im gonna have to read this FF since it has to deal with mayur and im a bigger fan of mayurs' 😃 do continue soon...

Haaa...That was good to read...yeah you can switch as i will both parallel...!!

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: mohseena
update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssshh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeessssssssshhhhhhhhh!!!!>...😳

Thanks for the comment dear...will be updating in some time..!!

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
it was awesum rohit
tooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooood man

loved it..

Thanks for the compliment Ruchi....i am glad that you love it😃

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
@ now the plot thickness.... after 1st chapter i can now once again say it ... i wish i was watching aa movie ...

great yaar 👏.. so how did they end up married...??? let me check the next chapter !!

I wish you could watch it if it is made..!!
you will get to know it by 10-12 parts

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
feed back on second chapter .... but before that Rohit ... I can't find ur index ... yaar i am having trouble finding the chapters.......have to go through all posts😭 ...

Yup...yeah i haven't made it, you reminded me...i will make it..!!!

Now coming to my feedback...😆😆😆

🤣 '🤣chipkali..🤣..........

tum tum ... nahi ... hum tum🤣🤣🤣..........Yeah...hahahah...chipkali...!!!

benji Type😆😆 ..... Nupur will show him what shie is made up off😛

Hahah..Yeah she is morena wali nupur...but here she is Us return...😆😆

You r great .. i am having time of my life ... can i save it on my computer also .. all ur chapters ??..

Yeah you can save it dear...!!!

thanks Ruchi and Ammy ... he is a great writer👏

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