Under the rainbow, inbetween black and white: 5

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anjie

@dmgaddict

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

hey

thanks a lot for the pm

do i have to even say it ??? that was amazing..you expressed the thoughts and feelings so beautifully

cant wait for the next chapter

continue soon

~anjie

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

hey amezing..just read the whole chapter..u r really good..keep it upl..thankc 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Sookie... I am left speechless honey...."Orange" part is so beautifully written.. loved it... I was visualizing every word of it.. beautiful. keep going...

PS: I hope you are fine now.. do take care...

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

aah....that was sum gud stuff..liked it tons..i think i liked d combo...of all d parts ....i mean d last part...better than d seperate bits ...cuz sumhow...d former bits seemed more lke sentences...yur usual riting...while d latter seemed more poemish...!! :)

it was grt though!...i koe...i juss tld nj...i can verse sorta...bt i dnt hve a head for gud poetry...lol m such a whacko!

...ziz!

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

BRILLIANT!! this is an awesome piece of writing, amazing! i m falling short of words to describe how i felt reading this, kudos dear👏 fantastic! keep writing :)

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

hey Sookie

beautiful interpretation of colours
i was gona settle for black but am still debating
i liked the red one too
and then u give us the orange
all fab,absolutely brilliant
waiting for the rest

love
Hina