Under the rainbow, inbetween black and white: 5 - Page 2

i love this ff...sookie the way u write is just awesome...i really like it...short and nice...u have got a very gud style....

Hi sookie,

Ie read mostly all of yur stories...yeh still hve to catch up on twilight...i left no comment on none of those..bt jus a thank you....!! Your riting is different...from the rest...and i don't know what to say about it...!! d usual comments won't do justice to yur work nor to my own liking towards it...!! So heres smg i rote after readin yur 1st post here...:) ur ritin is a kind of its own...!! =)

This world I've created, i call it my own,
is suddenly dark, empty, lifeless, colorless; black.
I seem to have forgotten the reason of my existence
or maybe, let someone else breathe for my life
I am here, alone, unsafe and uncomfortable
I unknowingly seek the one, i wonder since when,
the only one, god's sent angel in the disguise of my man,
the only one, who can erase my loneliness,
the only one, who can shadow me with protection,
the only one, who can help me find peace within myself.
This world I've created, i call it my own,
is suddenly bright, full, lively, colorful; white.

Cheers,
.....nijaL

Crimson red was nice..bt one word...was amiss for me...so much to hve me point it out...."dreaming crimson" its almost a contradiction to yur story :) ...cuz for me...dreams r in d state of mind wer 1 is almost always happy....smilin...!!

thx for d update..
...nijaL

hey hun ameizing..cant wait to read more..keep it up..thankc 4 the pm....

After reading the second post....all I can manage to ask u is "ever thought about writing a book or something?"....if not then u should start thinking abt it

Hey Sookie...

I just cannot express my feelings after I read the 2nd part... it was superb!!! I know these words have become too monotonous.. will keep a dictionary next time with me to get a few more words ;)...

thanks for the PM and continue soon...

OMG!!!!!! sookie like i dont know what to say! how do you come out with such amazing and unique concepts! when i saw that u started the intro with black...and scrolled down to see that u were doing a ch for each colour of the rainbow, starting with black and ending with white! geez i have never seen such a concept, im really in awe of you!
black - was quite philosophical and deep. it was dark, but it was hopeful!
red - was painful and emotional. we usually associate red with passion and love...red rose, red heart, sindoor, etc. but to associate it with blood gives it such a different meaning! its such a contradicting colour. can be extraordinary or devastating!
no words for your brilliance dear, so far this is my fav (human psychology one running in a close 2nd) looking forward to orange!

woww....gr8 as usuall...

*speechless*