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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kayamath_fan2

Hey Ash!!!! Finally i had the time to read ur FF from the beginning!!!

Im soo embarassed tht im reading it after such a loong time...!! 😳😳😳
No not at all it happene dto em once had to read al 10 parts together u hav cum on right time now
Ash, here's gonna be as promised a loong comment(in my view 😉 )
Okay..about the charcacter sketches.... :
OMG!!! Awesome Ash!!! Luv the character of the over protective brother Uday!!! And By God!! Samrats Twin bro Bhavesh!!!! Awwww....missed him soo much in da serial !!! soo sweeeet!!! Brilliant!!! Nupur's Samrat's sis!!! Awwww....dats soo Adorable sumehow!!! Brilliant concept dear....with the flashback n all !!!!
Lol i know uday he luvhi sis her etoo but he is sort as dodo but mine he is just totally differnet his character is gonna play a huge part in SaJan's life.
Read just now the first Part!!!!
Awwww....it was sooo cuute!!! the beginning is soo sweeet!!! just like a movie or a dreamland...or whatever!!!
Lolz!!! u, Ash, are the bahu of Samrat & Gunjunn!!! Awwww...shooo shhwwweet!!!!! And Saman is a unique Name!!😳
Haiyeeeeee shooos weeet, I knw blushing hard😳 Actually anu di if u didn'yt notice Samrat+Gunjan =Saman😆 and then ash and saman love story
LOL!!! the first part is hilarious!!! With the guy beaten up by Uday...sumhow reminds me of Sunil Shetty in Chup Chup ke!!! And Dia just cracked me up ...with suniye ji..eetc....LOL!! it was like she's already married to Uday!! she isnt rite?? i hope im not confused!!
Lol that was really funny. Chup Chup ke?? hmm sory but I rarely watch indian movies!
No she isn't just her crush but uday is not at all interested in her😆
Reading the second part!! Excellent!! OMG!! im luving the more mature Uday here and the not so shy gunjunn!!
Awwwww....luved Samrats entry!!!!!! Hayyeeee....im falling in luv wid him!!!
Chandni!!! my first reaction....Nooo....i dont want any chandni-samrat jodi !!! lolz... he carried her??!!! awwwww......hmm....lets see what happens next!!
Lol Chandz dii is?? no i won't tell u keep reading the parts till u get the actual truth!
OMG!!! luved the truth or dare game...and the result!!! coooll... superb idea!!!
Hahahaha...me too fell into it....thought gunjunn kissed Samrat!! i was like...what?? huh??? ahahaha...Gossip Aunty!! remembers me of Main Hoon na...there was also a lady....dont remember her name though....
Wowww!!! luved the second part!!!!!! it was fantastic!!!!
esp. the end was hilrarious!! gossip aunty fell on RV!!! Lolz!!! wanna see dat scene in mjht!!!
Lol ye I hav watched main hoon an taht sanskrit teacher miss k..😕 something!
Lol gossip aunty is Rv's mum😆
reading 3rd part!!
so far....it was M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G!!!!!👏👏👏
i luv your writing style.....hayyeee...u could actually publish ur FF !!!!! 👏👏👏
sorry, i had to post this already...cause the last time...a wrote a really long comment and then it vanished suddenly!! 😳😳
It si alright anu di nor probs att all
I am very happy that u are areding my FF
Thnaku for taking time and reading it nd then giving such a mindblasting comment
luv u
Lots of Luv,
Anu

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Posted: 16 years ago
awww! tht was a really nice part!!!!
but plz plz plz PM me... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks soo much dear!
Yep will surely pm u!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Ash!!!
Here's the continuation of my comment on ur FF......
3rd Part comments:
LOL!! RV is Shukla's n Gossip Aunty's son!!! LOL!!u totally cracked me up!! Hahahahah...GA(gossip aunty) gave a kiss to samrat!!! Lolz....wwoowww...luks like this is an hilarious part #3!!!!
Haye haye...what a JANUABLE CUUUTE sajan scene!!! gosh...i luved the phrase "hazel brown eyes"!!!! im sooo in luv wid it!! cause i m crazy abt hazel nut chocos!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
hayeeeee.....love at first sight!!!!😳😳
LOL!! samrat pulling gunjunn when she gives him her hand...hahaha..reminds me totally of DMG scene ! awwww.....i so wanna see this scene in MJHT!!!! i bet everyone's heart wud be melting if they'd see it!!!
This is defo a hilarious part!!! Luved Mayank's and probably Nupur's entry!!!! Superb!!! Hahahah...very funny incident!!!👏
Chacko & Dia!!!!! Awwww....adorable!! this part has lot of guys-are-one-the-rescue-to-help-the-girls scenes!!!
Oye hoye...Chako calling Dia wid "Aap" !!!! superb original !!⭐️
LOL!! Annie & Uday!!! Hilarious Ash!!! Ur tooo good yaar!!
"Chahe tum kuch na kaho maine sun liya " -> when u wrote this nah...i thought she was saying that to him...and i was like...wath??!!
lolz....nice BG music!! 😛
Awww...Mayank is soo mean!!! And Bhavesh......shooo shweeet!!! arm wrestling!!! hahahahahah!!! OMG!! Ash, tum to bahut hi creative ho!!!
Mayank's soo mean!! He cheated!!! soo mean!!! poor Bhavesh!!! *hugs* (lolz...!)
Yiippiieee...gunjunn accepted the rose!!! hayyeeee....kitna shwwweeetie shweeet scene hai yeh!!!
Great going Gunjunn!! very good!! taught him(mayank) a lesson!! luv this character gunjunn!!! ⭐️ 5 stars for her!! v selfconfident girl ....!!!
lolz..me too was wondering just like mayank....wht...gunjunn was a jounralist?? okay....!! lolz....jooth bolna kabhi kabhi aacha hi hai!!
Oh wait...i totally forgot nupur's not gunjunn sis nah...okii!! i luv it!!
What?!!! already finished!!! i mean...the 3rd part!!!!😉
This part was ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!!!!!! IT TOTALLY CRACKED ME UP!!!! EACH SCENE!!!!and luved Mayur's entry!!! And the sweet eye locks btw lots of couples...or gonna-be-couples!!!!!
Ash, luvely dear!!! ur simply amazing!!!! u rock gurl !!!👏👏👏
4TH PART COMMENTS :
oh nooo.....samrats assuming gunjunns the one....who hit nupur!!! Nooooo!!!! awww...but sweet bhavesh-samrat convo!!
Ohhhhh!!! now i got it!! its chandz di !!! haye haye.....chandz is soo lucky!!!!!! she kissed mohit!!! hawwwww......im jealous!!!😳😳😳
oye hoye....chandz aur samrat ke beech already jagada!! Hawwwwww....he kissed her on da cheek!!! how shwweeet!!!
Lolz!!!!!😆😆😆 Gunjunn singing!!! ahaha...and the song is hilarious!!! superb Ash!!! ur mindblowing!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
arreee..kitna confusion kiya dear...about the coffee!!! Lolz!!! luved it though!!
Ahahahahah....nupur spills the drink on mayank!!! awwwwwww.....wud luved to see this scene in mjht!!
awwwww....poor chinu has to clean evrtything!!!
AWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Srk & Shahid !!!!!! Hayeeeeeeeeeeeee........totally suits them!!!!!!!! kya baat hai!!!!
tooo cuuute yaar!!!
awwww...gunjunn was jealous at chandz...luved the dialogue:" but I knew ur dad was mine."
hahaha...what a conqueror!! 😉
Lol...i was thinkingwhat?!! chandz married the son of mayur!!! awww...shahid kapoor!!! he's mine though!! 😉 😳
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! the saman-ash ish shooooooooooooooo ADORABLE!!!!! awwwww.......my god.....tumhare moon mein ghee shakkar!!! 😳😳😳 literally!!!
Oh my god!!! the sajan scene in the garden is januable!!!!!! i really wanna c this in the serial!!!! hayeeeeeeeee.....i can SO imagine dis scene!!!!!!!!!!! lots of hugs n kisses to u Ash for writing this scene!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww..the mayur coffee scene is shweeeeeet too!!!!
hayyyyyyyeeeeee..........hayyyeeeeeeee...............the last sajan scene is da best scene ever Ash!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!! the januabelest scene ever!!!!!!!!!!!! chhhhhhooooo chweeeeeet & romantic!!! Hawwwwwww.....Samrat is so romantic...!!! oye hoye....im fallin in luv wid him!!!!
Nooooo again finished ur brilliant chapter sweetie!!!!!
U know what Ash...Ur fanfic is the first FF i've ever read on IF !!!!!!!! and its truly excellent!!!!!!!! literally!!!!!! ur vocabulary...the way u write..u express urself....is O-U-T-S-T-A-N-D-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!! ur too good at this yaar!!!👏
im not sure...if u make brilliant Vms or brilliant FF's !!!! both are superb, amazing, rocking, sweeet, and what not!!!
Will read ur 5th & 6th part soon n comment!!!! till then
byeeeee Ash dear!!!!
Luvu looooooooots!!!
Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ash, i hope im not boring u wid my comments!!!!!!!!
Sorry if i did!!!!!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haiyeeee anu dii long comment
I nee dto learn tow rite itf rom you1
No how can you say taht
I feel great when someone doe sthis
Luv u
will quote ur comment in a bit!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

Haiyeeee anu dii long comment

I nee dto learn tow rite itf rom you1
No how can you say taht
I feel great when someone doe sthis
Luv u
will quote ur comment in a bit!

yup promised u nah...for a long comment! so here's it!! finally u got it!!😉
arrey! es mat bolo! tum itni laaaambi chapters likhti ho, to mera
farz banta hai na ki main bhi ek lambhi comment dun!
cant wait for ur comments on my comments !😆
luv u tooooo dear!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kayamath_fan2

yup promised u nah...for a long comment! so here's it!! finally u got it!!😉
arrey! es mat bolo! tum itni laaaambi chapters likhti ho, to mera
farz banta hai na ki main bhi ek lambhi comment dun!
cant wait for ur comments on my comments !😆
luv u tooooo dear!!!

LOl thanks will comment on it soon as I finish updating part 7 just completeing last part of it!
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Hi Guys

My update is sort of different now. I will use the characters POV and the key to my FF is pink will be a girl Nupur or Gunjan or anyone else and the boy's part Samrat or Mayank will be in blue.

Recap: Mayank drops Nupur home as she is hurt, and when she was cleaning something from his eyes Bhavesh opens the door. Gunjan hugs Sam in order to save herself from the goons and later he requests her to tell him which bus he shall take home as he was traveling in bus for the first time.

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On the bus Stop

Ok now we have reached the bus Stop and I wait for his bus to come and then finally I can go home. I got rats jumping in my stomach and I am sooo hungry but this bus is not coming soon. The bus in which he goes ,comes every 15 minutes but today what is wrong with that bus. I am getting annoyed coz first it is very cold and secondly the stupid bus is not coming. Suddenly I start shivering and thinking now this is a test for Samrat if he is a true gentleman he will lend his jacket to me. I was feeling very cold when Sam took his jacket out of his sleeves and I was happy that he is going to lend the jacket to me coz I was sooo cold.

I am soooo cold but the bus is not arriving at all but I don't mind staying there for some time. I take my jacket off and I wrapped the jacket around myself and then know it is cold but Chahsmish got furious for some reason and she walked off angrily . I was quite shocked at this behaviour and I went behind her and said

'Excuse me Can I know what is wrong with you Why are u running away I thought. You were going to tell me in which bus I have to go '.

She stood there for some time and turned back and came and sat next to me once again. I was very confused with her behaviour.

I thought he was going to give the jacket to me but he wrapped the jacket around himself how shameless, there is a girl next to him who is shivering and he just cares about himself. I am so angry at this that I just walk out of there furiously. And then suddenly I get his call and he says 'Excuse me Can I know what is wrong with you Why are u running away I thought. You were going to tell me in which bus I have to go '.

I stand there thinking 'Ok it is wrong that he should have given me the jacket coz I am a woman and he should be the gentleman and he wasn't , so why do I care he is nothing to him, I am just staying here to show the bus to him coz I owe him'

I turn around walking back calming myself down and then I sat next to him.

At the Sehgal villa

Nupur comes so close to me that I can feel her perfume in mine. She blows in my eyes and the cool air makes me feel better.

Suddenly someone opens the door and I push her away from me.

It was her Geek brother

He adjusts his glasses and says 'Chane ke jaad ke neeche neele asmaan tale behna tum is neech admi ke itne paas kya kar rahi ho'

(Translation for this dialogue incase anyone didn't understand Bhavu's language- Under the

Tree below the blue sky Nupz wat are u doing so close to this wicked man)

I feel very weird that Bhavz bhai saw me soo close to mayank. I don't know what to answer . I was going to say some thing wen I felt the ground wnet off my feet I couldn't stand . I fell on the floor and was crying in pain. Bhavz bhai came to me and said 'Behnu what happen?'

I reply to her geek bro that it was my fault but I helped her. I brought her till here. I didn't back off at all..

Her bro gave me a really weird look and said 'Wow u done a great deed coz u were the main reason why she was hurt, but now Sam bro will see you right now I need to take Behnu inside'

I stand there wondering who is Sam bro, one more bro I don't know what is going to happen. We go inside and she was taken to her bedroom. Her bedroom was very beautifully deisgned. Loved the interior, the walls were painted purple and her room was looking mindblowing and the fragrance was very attractive.

I was feeling very weird that Mayank was in my bedroom. Suddenly the phone rings and Bhavz bro runs to receive it. Mayank was left there alone He stood there saying 'Ok now I got to go now, Take care of yourself'. Bye Gud night.

I reply bak Bii and then he leaves.

On the bus stop

I try to find out why she went away from there furiously. I stood there thinking maybe she is hungry . I look around if there is something to eat then suddenly I see a Paani puri stall across the road. I requested her and said 'Chashmish .., I was about to talk further when she interrupted me and said 'My name is not Chashmish it is Gunjan' But can I call u Chashmish please! She gives me a blank look which is a no for sure. Ok Miss Gunjan I think it is very late and I guess you are very hungry, there is a paani puri stall there we can eat that'.

I was feeling very weird so I just gave him a blank look which I often do and he quite understands that it is a complete NO. After a while he said 'ok no paani puri then what are u going to go home and eat. I replied that My brother is not here I love with one of my friends, she is very nice like my sister and I don't have my parents.... Suddenly I realize what am I doing ? This guy is a stranger to me why am i telling him everything about me and I look at him and he has the look of continue what u were saying, I fold my hands and turn around when he says 'Ok I guess u can tell all that to me later but right now I am very hungry and so are you so can we go and eat?'

'Finally he talks something which is like a gentleman and I was very hungry, I was feeling very weird but I was so hungry that just wouldn't care. We walk together slowly taking hesistant steps suddenly a bike passes by blowing my face off and Samrat screams 'Hey dude are u blind?'. My hand is brushed through his rough bike and my hand was bleeding. Samrat goes to that guy and puts his hand on his shoulder , he turned his face and it was that same sadu who hurt Nupur. Before Samrat would get into a fight with that Sadu I screamed 'Listen let him be people like this will never improve'.

"I let that guy be coz Gunjan's voice calmed me down and i turned back and went to her. We continued walking when suddenly something disrupted our late night paani puri, The stupid bus arrived. I didn't want the bus to come until we had eaten the paani puri. Then she turns around and says 'There is your bus, It is alright I will go home and have my food. I turn around disappointed. And I get on the bus and say 'Bye see ya in College tomorrow. She replies 'Excuse Mr. I think you have forgotten that I was suspended because of you. I smack my head saying 'Don't worry Chashmish u will be in college tomorroe before 8. I promise you. She turned her head and went on her way home."

Next Day in college

Everyone is busy talking and next to prince's office

'I am standing there waiting for princi to come so that I can apologise to him, I am his favourite he can never deny me. He cums there wishing me a very good morning and i reply bak Have beautiful morning sir. He said 'I will surely as I seen my best student here Tell me how can I help you?' i reply back 'Sir you know the girl u suspended yesterday it wasn't really her fault , I asked the peon that he had mopped the floor and that boy lied to you'. The princi was quite shocked he said 'Oh no that poor girl do go annd get her back' I replied 'Yes sir with a broad smile on my face'.

Everyone Was going totheir classrooms when Deodhar spots Mayank and says

'Hey you , come here do u know Miss Nupur Sehgal ?

I reply yes I do huh. He said 'Ok good go to the office find out her adress and go and give this letter to her. I reply angrily 'Sir I am not a deliver boy' He says 'Excusme this is my order u have to do this' I am thinking wow teachers blackmailing. I turn and sigh back to her house once again. Quite annoyed that everyday there is a reason that I have to meet her. I reach the parking lot when I see the same guy who held my hand while I was about to slap nupur. I ignore him and move on. With a coincidence both of us were rushing out on our bikes.

At Gunjan's house

I ring the bell waiting for someone to open the door and till then was looking at the window to see how I was looking . Till then someone opens the door and I ask her whether Gunjan was home. She says ye but u?? I was gonna say a friend but i stop there and said 'The princi sent me to take her back to college' Oh ok I will call her. She was just going when someone from the neighbourhood called her. I was happy that she went. I enter the house.

Hmm Wow chashmish ur house is great , I look out for her bedroom everywhere but I couldn't find it. I walked further when I seen the kitchen there . I went upstairs wondering that the bedroom might be there when I heard someone say

'Di come here Can I have my track suit ready please , I don't have college today coz of that idiotic sadu'

It was Chashmish. I was quite shocked at this dialogue but I was admiring her sleeping in white , A total sleeping beauty her hair were coming on her glowing face and she had a sweet smile on her face, her half sleeved shirt and her pink velvet blanket . Suddenly I come back to my senses when she puts her hand forward for her track suit. I am confused where to look for her track suit when Dia comes in. She starts screaming at me 'What are u doing in her bedroom'

I statter saying 'I just came to tell her that I have solved her problem and she can come college today so I came to pick her'. Listening to all the noise she gets up and she is shocked to see me at her home.

OMG! He was in my bedroom , and I got so annoyed and I told him 'Go down I am coming' I was in a sleeveless top and he was in my bedroom arghhhh. I put my track suit on and went downstairs.

At Sehgal Villa

I get off my bike thinking don't know what new problem is going to arise. I breath heavily and ring the bell. No one was opening the door so I look thorugh the window when I see someone coming downstairs. Someone opens the door and she wasn't Nupur for sure . By her clothes she was looking the kaamwaali. She was acting quite weird . She continue din her language which I barely understand

'Kya hai Saheb,Kisko milne ko vaaste Aya Sam baba aur Bhavu Baba toh Padhne ke vasste gaya hua hai aur Nupur baby ke paav pe lagi hai isliye woh ghar pe hi hai

(Translation: What do u want sir. Who do u want to meet .Sam and Bhavz are gone to study and Nupur has hurt her leg so she is at home)

I am stunned coz I could barely understand what she said

'Bai mujhe Nupur say milna hai'

(Translation: I want to meet Nupur)

Kanta ben: Acha Nupur baby se milne ko vaaste aya par kyun (She puts on her black glasses)

(Translation: Oh u want to meet Nupur but why?)

Suddenly she couldn't see I think coz of her glasses and she was walking towards me putting both her hands forward. And suddenly she fell on me. I said 'Kanta ben I wanna meet Nupur' and I heard Nupur scream 'Kanta ben Can I have some water please...' Kanta ben runs but i stop her and say 'Kanta ben I don't think u will be able to walk. You sit here I will take that upstairs. I run to the kitchen Ok *rubbing hands* I have never made coffee.. But there might be a recipe book somewhere. I look around and after a 15 minute search I finally found it. I look around for a coffee recipe and finally I found it. Then I made the coffee. I am just too scared to taste my own hand-made coffee so I think I will test it on Nupur.

I run outside to my bike as I had left my mobile in the cabinet.

Kanta ben removes her glasses and she goes to the kitchen. She tastes the coffee and as she has a sip She spits it out.

"Hai deva deva kya coffee hai Nupur baby toh iskko pike upar hi chali jayegi, yeh ladka lagta hai koi muderer hai kahin woh nupur baby ka khoon karne to nahi aya na, Abhi mein usko dekhti hoon pehle mein iski coffee ko badal doon'

(Translation: OMG! After drinking this coffee nupur is going to go up to god, I think this boy is come to murder Nupur baby i will have to put my eye on him but first let me change the coffee with mine)

She made her own coffee and replaced it with Mayank's.

When Mayank entered the kitchen and he said 'Kanta bai Can I take this coffee upstairs?' Kanat ben gives a sarcastic broad smile and I take the coffee upstairs to nupur. She was reading a magazine and when she saw me she was shocked she said ' Tum Where is Kanta ben how did u come here' She immediately covered her blanket. And said 'Don't you have any shame, u just entered my room like this Turn around now. I was in my night gown and he entered my room idiot. I cover myself and now what do you want?

He gave me the coffee and he said 'I made this' I take a sip and it was just simply mindblowing . You know you made a very amazing coffee, i didn't know u were these good!

OMG! She loved the coffee I was totally shocked but I was happy that I can at least make coffee. And then she asked me 'Why did u come here, I replied 'This letter' She got off the bed and placed her feet into her slippers and came towards me and took the letter, And as she was going through the letter her eyes became so big and at last she became unconscious and fell in my arms. She was totally unconscious and I was confused what to do now?

Kanta ben saw nupur unconscious so her doubts bcame stronger that mayank came to kill nupur so she took the stick and hit it on mayank's head. And she says

'Gaya sadu, Mere nupur baby ko maarne aaya tha na, hun'

(Translation: Gone sadu, U had come to kill Nupur na hun')

She left him on the floor and took a glass of water and sprinkled water on Nupur so that she would get up.

Slowly Nupur gained conscious and as she opened her eyes she saw Mayank in front of her eyes unconscious and she screamed loudly.

And Kanta ben continued 'Nupur baby woory not maine iska kaam tamam kar diya hai'

(Translation: Nupur don't worry I have finished alll his evil plans')

Nupur

Kanta ben what did you do I wasn't unconscious because of him it was because of this letter

Kanta ben opened her mouth in shock and both of them sat there thinking what to do.

At Gunjan's house

He was sitting on the sofa acting very innocent drinking coffee and he said 'Hi , I just came to pick you up, I have talked to princi U can cum college' I was very happy about the fact that I had to go to college and grateful to Samrat but he was the one why I was suspended.

She was looking very happy and me too was rejoicing in my heart but I have no idea why. So get ready we got to reach college quickly. She went away happily and I sat there back gazing around her house. I looked around and I seen her baby picture where she was in her nappies and was crying. I was laughing the hell out of myself coz she was luking sooo funny. She calls out my name and As I turn around I stop myself laugh and I was totally amazed, she looked mind-blowing in white. From toe to head she was just an angel. I smack my head and say 'What am I doing?'

Now I am very happy that going to college then I tell sam to go as we were getting late.

I say goodbye to Diya and we move on . I was walking to get the bus when Sam called and said 'Oh helloo where are u going?' I turned back and replied 'I have to go by bus na'

He continued 'But princi requested me to pick u'

I think for a while and then I go back to him. I am feeling very weird coz I am sitting with a boy on the bike for the first time, If bhai seen me like this he would pakka kill me. He comes next to me and keeps on going on with his accelator waiting for me to sit on the bike. I sigh breathe heavily and finally sit on the bike.

I try to make myself comfortable and he promises me.

"I will drop u college safely promise but on the way if u are scared, I don't mind u holding me tight"

As i said that to her she turned her face around thinking that I am safe by myself. I sigh thinking that I will see that later. We move on and there is just pin drop silence. I was quite bored when I start singing

Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,

Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,

Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai Madhosh Hai,

Khamosh Hai, Haan Ye Sama,

Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,

She stopped me there and says 'Did anyone tell you how Bad u sing the mirror of your bike are going to break. I accept that I could not sing well but no one has ever said that to me except her , I am so angry that I give a halt and scream at her 'Oh yeah then u sing the same song lets see how besura u are?'

She starts singing

Chandz chupa badal mein..

I hate to accept this but she sings like a cuckoo . Her voice is sooo beautiful. I am enjoying listening to her singing. As I pass by her rhythm is flowing through my veins and ears want her to sing continuously till the end of my life. I was soo lost in her voice that I didn't realize at all when we reached college.

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Sorry guys I was unable to put the scene I wrote the precap coz this part came out to be so long that I had to stop it right here so the same precap as last one.

Preview- Miss Aha makes Rv and Gunjan partners for their Role play for their special college anniversary assembly preparation. And Nupur is hurt a lot and she couldn't walk so she is disqualified from the netball match. Bhavesh comes home to get one of the books when he sees Mayank unconscious there. A new entry coming soon. Ie. Bhavesh's Love interest .

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Hey guys
Part 7 updated of my FF
Will Pm all of u in a bit!

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Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

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