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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#211

very nice surprise jia! i think your on a roll...keep the updates coming ;)
that closet scene was WOW...u wrote it soooo well jia, i could visualize it clearly, could feel the intensity and sparks! i was tingling lol
loved the part, its sooo nice to see armaan hell bent in pursuing riddhima! its thrilling to see a guy try to patao a girl with such passion! lets see how long she can fight it ;)
theres so much more i want to say, give my usual detailed analysis, but i have a physics final to be studying for :( so sorry for the short comment this time
looking forward to the golf game!
p.s. rahul doing natural medicine WHOOT ;)

Edited by Robin_M - 16 years ago

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#212

fab part...

just loved it...

loved the kiss...

so Arman is trying to impress Ridz but she is not ready to buldge... will love to see the golf round....

continue soon

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#213

lovely parts
do continue dear
bye sumi

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#214

lovely part.plz do continue soon.

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#215

woah Jia🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb dear😳 so cute😍so he caught her😛 he is not going to leave her so easily😉 & spl Roses of every color☺️😍 plz continue it soon😛& thanks for the pm😉

"You are There For Me When I?m Lost
You are There For Me At Every Cost
You are There For Me Through Snow And Rain
You are There For Me When I?m In Pain
You are There For Me To Heal My Cut
You are There For Me No Matter What
You are There For Me Like An Angel From Above
To Watch Over Me And Teach Me How To Love."

Nidha

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#216

wow! wat an update di!

it was really a big surprise for all of us!!

i am delighted!

though u had mentioned in the update of my only desire, dat ur r going to update dis ff on monday...but still i felt u would get stuck up in something or the other......and then we won't get the update right on time!! dat is wat usually happens(sorry, if it was rude!)

but i was taken aback to see dat u had updated much before time....not like the ususal jia di!! lol...jokes apart now....coming back to the part-

it was the best one so far!!
i just luved it!!
ur a fabulous writer di....undoubtedly!!

every update of urs is definately a treat!!

the part was very well written!!
and i just luv the way you have portrayed Armaan's character in this ff of urs...!

i just luved the AR moments!! dey were too gud!!

Armaan's fascination!! gr8!

so Riddhima is different..as she isn't going to let Armaan take charge of her so easily!

waiting to see how Armaan woos Riddhima!!

luving the story....as well as the concept!!

keep up the gud work!!

n update asap!!

-love sanjana

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#217

~reserved~....

heyyy..this was a surprise...didnt know u would update this one...

anyways...will be back sooon :)

*edited*!!!

woah..this was surely a surprise update girl...guess i already mentioned it...but anyways...

part three...hmmmm...as always..truly amazing, beautiful...superb..awesome...wonderful..fabulous... fantastic...u are magic with words girl :D

riddhima's thoughts abt armaan, relationships, love and her emotions were really beautifully penned...the mention of the frog prince was nice...reminded me of that old children's story...and the way she avoided armaan's proposal by agreeing to help at that charity function...but little does she know that he would not leave her that easily...

armaan and riddhima's convo was really really nice...loved reading it...poor her, she was so very much hoping that he would not be there...armaan's way of asking her to give him company was nice...he always impresses me by his charming habits :) their convo while dancing was nice...loved the way armaan casually threw in the question of her ignoring him..and loved the way she answered...her telling him that he was a flirt and all...really good...and again excuses...loved the way she escaped him...

hmmmm...the part in the closet...oooohh...i was totally loving it...armaan and riddhima's closeness...the convo...her behaviour towards the intimacy...and the kiss...again well-described girl...and riddhima coming back to her senses...and armaan's replies...oooohh..brilliant girl...great going :D

"What about the poor guy who gets scorched by your kiss?""
loved this line a lot...and love his confidence...

ooooh...so armaan has a brother...rahul...so um kinda hoping that muskaan is also gonna come into the picture sometime...his thoughts abt his family...and most importantly, his new fascination, riddhima was wonderfully worded...

he never leaves a chance to go close to riddhima, does he???...i like emma...her opnions abt riddhima and the flowers was good...so..golf it is then???!!!...

wonder how riddhima is gonna react to this invite...cant wait for their next date :D

beautiful update jiaaaa....awesome!!!!

love u loads!!!!!

awaiting the next part :)

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago

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smriti

@smriti.tweety

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#218

Hey Jia!!!!

Gr8 2 see two back-to-back updates! Nice surprise!

Amazing part!⭐️

Loved the straightforward AR. While she didn't mince words in making the reasons for her reluctance explicit neither did he in denying that it wasn't meant to be a mere fling from his side. In fact I actually wondered whether the characters could be so forthcoming about their feelings at such an early stage considering that generally your protagonists tend to remain mysteries till quite some time :) :) 😉

Looking forward to the golf course date as much as Armaan is!😊

Love

Smriti

Edited by smriti.tweety - 16 years ago

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rabia

@rabiam

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#219

jiaaaaaa

awesoem update........

AR are so awesome in ur fic............

loved armaan......... i am still in lala land

heheheheeeeeee

take care

update soon

love rabu

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#220

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wow jia u updated this part quickly...plz keep going that
loved the update dear....it was very well written
riddhima's thoughts kept going back to armaan lolz (seriously who can resist him?)
riddhima was staggering so much when she was with armaan....poor girl... its bound that she had to fall for his charms
loved the closet scene....its my favourite

Riddhima felt as if the room turned sideways.

"I can't tell if you're underestimating me or yourself. Damn, if you haven't made me curious,"" he said and lowered his mouth to hers.

If the room had been turning sideways before, for Riddhima, it was now spinning. Her heartbeat racing, she couldn't find it in herself to resist this one taste, this one time, this one kiss. With an abandonment she hadn't known she possessed, she stretched on tiptoe and slid her fingers through his wavy hair and kissed him back. but just as she kissed him…….her mind wandered of to all the crazy thoughts she had been thinking throughout the day. Getting involved with Armaan was crazy, dumb, stupid…..in a flash she broke the contact and closed her eyes trying to catch her breath.

armaan kissed her!!! awwwwww that waas so sweet
loved the end too where armaan invited her to play golf
wonder what's gonna happen further
plz continue soon jia
can't wait to read further
thanx 4 d pm

love soumya

Edited by soumya_dmglover - 16 years ago