New FF- AR-Robbery! part 2-Encounter in hell! Pg.3 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing but u know hw the lipstick tube had R on it .. it seriusly reminds me of the move/book Holes.kwl .. i extreemly loves this part .. and thank you very much for the red alert and the pm.!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
heyy
nice part
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha wow this is sooo amusing! ridz a chor! and she just robbed armaan!!! wow girls got guts!
awesome concept, looking forward to more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey are you like really hibernating for 10 months aftergiving us just an intro and a part1??? just came across this...hope the hiberation stance is a threat, or a tagline from 10 months ago, and that you wil hence, be updating sometime soon!...great concept!!

cheers,

nj
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thankx all you wunnerful ppl...ridss, riddhima misha rai(chalo pehli baar poora naam le leti hoon warna confusion ho jayegi....),Robin,archita and NJ!!!!
I was actually feeling down cause of lack of response...thanks 4 cheering me up...
waise NJ...main hibernate karke aayi hoon...noe my hols are going on and I will be here till 30th may....I hope before that I can give you a lovely ending to this FF cause I know the pains of waiting and for the mere reasons that I HATE unfinished stories!!!
thankx again and do stay tuned...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY MAN IT WAS AWSUM YAAR.
RIDHIMA WILL BE THE THEIF HERE. COOOOL.
UPDATE SOON PM ME IF U CAN.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow amazing concept honey..plzzzz PM me whnvr u update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thankx rashmeen,aarora and hinna...well I will pm you guys whenever I update....
am really glad you liked the concept!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART TWO- ENCOUNTER IN HELL!!!!
Riddhima sat in the cafe wid her friends who were busy gossiping away ..."Pata hai the Mallik's have been robbed..."Muskaan chirped. "I wanna kiss the person who did that...they deserved it those rich brats...heard their son ...Armaan studies in the Law college we r planning to join."Anjali offered. Riddhima twisted her nose in disgust...she didn't fancy Anjali's kiss!!!! "Sum guts that person has got...imagine shutting up the dog with fevi-quick...how adorably smart" sighed Sapna. "Armaan is supposed to be the most handsome dude in town...."Muskaan eagerly shared. Riddhima put her coffee mug down .....her thoughts rewound back to last night. That guy....she dreamed...."yeah he is drop dead dashing!!!".....she couldn't forget those deep brown eyes,that great physique,that adorable way his unruly hair fell on his forehead....his deep and crisp voice...and above all his electrifying touch!!!!
"Tu kahaan kho gayi?" sapna snapped her fingers before riddhima's dreamy eyes. "huh! kuch nahi ..."she stammered recovering from her contempletion. "Chalo tum sab college ke pehle din hi late hona hai kya?" she asked the gang rising and paying the bill.
Armaan,Rahul,Divij,Jay and Adi were sitting in the college grounds...Adi and Armaan were in deep conversation while the rest were busy checking out the new chicks.
"Hey Armaan see that gal...off shoulder top and capries..."Divij told. Armaan looked at the chic' and rolled his eyes while Adi smirked..."too typical divij! Hunt sumthing better!" Armaan had informed his dad who was mighty upset and had blasted him till Armaan was shaking from the insults...."Hah!" his dad had laughed..."Dad! I wanna develop my biceps...."he had imitated Armaan in a mocking tone..."and you couldn't even handle a stupid female!!!!"he had jeered harshly. Armaan bit his lip to prevent himself from retorting back...this was proving to be his worst week!!!!
"Adi....I wanna kill that female..."
"Dont worry buddy....we'll get her...after all Jatin is heading the case...and he is the best..."
"No Adi ....I have personal scores to settle wid that female....I want to nab her on my own..."
"You r being extra emotional Armaan.....take it easy dude! She will get what she deserves...now dont go around sulking the whole day..."
They all arose and went to their respective rooms as soon as the bell rang. Divij, Adi and Armaan had opted for Law while Rahul and Jay had chosen journalism.
Armaan entered the clas and the whole buzzing froze...jaws off girls started having a really heavy effect of graving and went lower and lower....
"Isn't he cute!" one gal squealed....breaking the silence. Armaan felt uneasy..."Adi....Do I look like sum specimen?" Adi snorted..."nahi yaar...pehli baar complete package dekh rahe hain isiliye ..."
They seated themselves and the class resumed the buzzing mode but now most topics centeres around "that cuttttteeee Mallik guy!"
The professor arrived and the class silenced instantly ..."Hello class!" the lady told tossing her long mane behind while the guys in the class tried their best to control their remarks. It was known to the whole college that the Miss. Kasak Sharma , a stunner hated ne comments to be passed on her. She was notorious for transferring red marks on guys cheeks for trying to act smart!
She began her lecture wid a current case and asking the class their views on it. Mid-way two girls arrived at the doorway dragging the attention of the whole class to themselves ...away from the intense discussion.
"Excuse me Ma'am..."one gal dressed in a pink tank top and blue denim capries told politely.
Kasak eyed them apprehensively..."You are late for the very first class!"
They looked down and the other gal dressed in cool white tube top and neat pleated black skirt muttered sumthing under her breath. This annoyed Kasak all the more but she suppresed her anger and icily asked.."Your names?"
"Er...Muskaan..."the pink dressed gal told
"Riddhima" the gal in white offered tossing her hair back and entering the class widout giving an opportunity to Kasak to decide their fate. Muskaan simply followed looking shit scared.
Riddhima surveyed the class and her eyes rested on Armaan for a matter of seconds and she walked up to the seat behing him and sat down. He was busy messaging sumone down. Muskaan took the seat next to him...
The bell rang indicating the end of the class and students hurried to the canteen. Armaan, Divij and Adi were walking in slow motion and Riddhima and Muskaan just ahead of them within ear shot.
Divij-Hey Ami just check out that chick in white and black....she is a catch man!!!
Armaan- (eyeing Riddhima carelessly) Well...she isn't dude...just a peice of sham...now a days all the gals dress in such clothes...but there are only a few who manage to carry it wid the elegance they ought to carry it wid...
Riddhima....stopped in her tracks...she hadn't been subjected to such comments through out her life...she fumed and wanted to punch Armaan. She turned on her heel and walked up to the trio leaving a scared Muskaan all to herself.
Divij- Ami teri toh lottery lag jayegi...dekh woh hamare taraf aa rahi hai...
Armaan rolled his eyes...."yah...whatever Divij! Like I care!"
Riddhima gave a lovely smile to Divij and put out her hand to him while he opened his mouth feeling like an idiot..."Hi! I am Riddhima..."..."Divij" he smiled briefly knowing that he was looking stupid.
"Haan, toh Divij dikhne mein toh tum sensible lagta ho...magar tumhare choice of friends I must say is TACKY!" She glared at Armaan ...while Adi held him back from distorting her jawline..."Agar main tumhari jagah hoti toh main kabhi bhi aise insaan ki opinion nahi leti jo ek chorni ko nahi pakad paya....I must say...that guy must be the biggest loser!!!" she spat enjoying the murderous look on Armaan's face...
She made to walk away but was gripped at the wrist by Armaan....who was breathing heavily
Armaan-Hey you...riddhi...whatever...you have no business to give your crap advice to my friends...
Riddhima-Mr.Mallik haath chodo!(she hissed)
Armaan-First you tell me a nice sorry and then I will...
Riddhima was in tears....it was hurting her real bad and she was silently cursing him with all her heart...
Armaan saw the tears swimming in her eyes and laughed like a ruthless being.."Huh...all you gals r the same...tears for small things...and yes Miss. I am sure even that Female robber whom you so intensely worship wont be able to bear the pain I can inflict on her...."
Riddhima struggled to free her wrist...
Armaan...pushed her away and his voice dripping with heavy disgust said menacingly "Don't you dare call me a loser...waise if you stay away from me it will be better for you and me!"
Riddhima looked at the red bruises on her wrist and hissed "Armaan Mallik you r dead meat!"
Armaan sneered "what are you gonna do...tell the head? Go on Ridhhi...whatever...I care a damn..."
His bruised ego felt a savage joy seeing her eyes blur wid pain...."Oh gos how much he hated this gal who mocked him for being inferior to a female theif!"
Let the war begin......
How is this part? Please comment!
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Edited by livelygal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏great update 😛😛😛!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊cant wait for armaan-riddhima meeting😃!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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