New FF- AR-Robbery! part 2-Encounter in hell! Pg.3

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hi all you lovely ppl...well I suddenly got a story flowing through my head when my chemistry teacher was busy lecturing the class on some stupid things called biomolecules....*yawn*....I wanna share my brain's creation wid all of you....hope you guys like this. And please do comment and let me know if I should continue it or no....
ROBBERY!!!!
The party was in full swing...the music blaring the beats of desi girl from dostana...everyone seemed to be having a great time. She stood next to a man,looking extremely stunning in a knee-length halter necked black dress which complimented her fair skin. Her hair was left loose and fell like a sheet of luxuriously black waterfall on her slender shoulders...
The guy next to her was smart enough but her lack of actual interest in him was apparent. He looked at her like a smitten puppy wagging his tail...
"Er.. riddhima...tum kuch peeogi?" he asked hoping to please her with his gentlemanly gestures. She gave him a tender look...(actually exasparatedly...)..."nahi atul main theek hoon..." His face fell...but the deep crash of his emotions was prevented by appearance of a familiar face next to him. "Hi atul! tum dance kyun nahi kar rahe ho?" anjali chirped. He simply shrugged looking at riddhima once again...But anjali dragged him to the dance floor leaving riddhima to enjoy her solitude. The party was being held in a posh restuarant to celebrate the 21st anniversary of anjali's parents. The whole of city college had turned up. Riddhima checked the clock.....11:30...She had to go. She paid her sincere congrajulations to the couple again before walking off to the parking lot....
He hated sleeping late and yet he didn't know why his mood was swinging active energy...He pulled off the sheets and walked to the window...He was dressed in grey shorts and a dark blue vest which accentuated his masculine handsomeness....those deep brown eyes for which many a girl oohed and aahed...He was aware of his high and superior quality of looks but chose to remain indifferent to it. The 'I-care-a-damn-look' was forever imprinted on his face. To him nothing mattered more than his ego.....any attempt to even slightly brush that precious ego of his and *Kaboom* the person is shattered. So nobody ever dared.....ever dared to cross the road of Armaan Mallik....No one ever dared to mess wid him cause he was....the most deadliest threat .....
Riddhima walks to the parking lot and gets into her car...Her friendz had always wondered from where she gets all these expensive stuffs...but she had cleverly weaved them the story of her distant aunt who had left her property to riddhima. She kicked the engine alive laughing to herself how naive her friends were. The black bag lay beside her and she eyes it proudly a wee bit too possessively. That bag was her most trustworthy friend...it contained her darkest secrets. She parked the car near a silent park and quickly changed her black denims and jacket.She believed in sticking to work clothes during work...her hair was tamed into a ponytail...she looked really smart. She hurriedly donned the gloves and tied the laces of her shoes. She checked herself in the mirror..."Nah! You look too smart to be fingered as a thief"she smiled to herself. She looked up at the huge building towering before her...."Mallik Mansion here I come..." she whispered into the night air....
so neone wants me to continue....
please do comment.
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Originally posted by: kaneez-e-fatima

hey nice trailer..........continue pls

chandni

chalo ek to reply mila...hey I have edited it read the continuation and stay put....coming up sum wild dhamakas!!!
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MINDBLWING!! PLZ CONTINUE... Can u plz pm me?
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plz continue soon.it is awesome.
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plz continue soon it was awesome
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reserved comment will come after i come from holiday
but please PM me everytime u update. I will surely comment wen i get back
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wicked! ridz is a robber! is she out to rob armaan!!?! really catching into, do continue!
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PART ONE-RED ALERT!!!!!
Armaan felt uneasy...he didn't know why...He descended the stairs and walked into the kitchen. The mansion was empty except for his dog ,an adorable alsation called Leo. His parents Abheer Mallik and Pia Mallik had gone on a one month world tour which would be ending in another 3 days. Armaan opened the cap of his bottle and poured icy chilly water down his throat. He was glad they were away orelse he would have been sitting with his dad in the main hall having to bear up wid the boring lecture on how to focus on your goals and etc. etc. Armaan rolled his eyes in the memory of his dad who was an unbeatable and extremely successful businessman. Armaan had protested that he wanted to be a sportstar...maybe a car racer but was unceremoniously stuffed in a Law Collge. Armaan resented that college...but still he had found an outlet from frustration in his gang. He could possibly count on his fingers the number of classes he had attended. His lips curved into a charming smile as he fondly remembered his pals- Rahul, Jay, Divij and Adi. 'Rahul' was Armaan's childhood buddy and a highly fun driven guy who had brainwaves every tym he entered the cafetaria. 'Jay' was a quiet .....information box. Name anything...fashion trendz, girls, myths, legends, controversies..he would know it! He was like sum search engine and so the gang called him-GOOGLE! 'Divij' was a total flirt...dark,handsome and a true stud he enjoyed the position of the 'King of heart breaks' in the college. Every morning he thanked god that the girls whom he had tossed away didn't come together to raise their slippers against him orelse he would be doomed. 'Adi' was almost a blurred image of Armaan. He was the spoilt son of the most successful man in the sports business,good looking and highly arrogant. Armaan and he struck an amazing rapport from the first day of introduction. They shared similar likings even...but Adi was fiercely committed to whatever he loved and extremely possessive. And it was very rare for him to commit to anything and it was for this reason of intense loyalty that Armaan could trust Adi wid his life.
Armaan re-entered his room and pricked his ears up. "Was he imagining things or did he hear someone scratching the exteriors of his room?" He flung the window open and checked. The night was calm except for Leo who was looking upwards suspiciously and as if he was in pain...."Leo! come up man...."Armaan yelled sensing something amiss in Leo's expression. But the dog refused to budge. "strange..." muttered Armaan. Till date Leo had never disobeyed him. He hurriedly put on his slippers and went out to check on Leo.
Riddhima opened the locker, tensed to the core.....that dog had nearly ruined everything. Thank god! she had a tube of fevi-quick wid her...she had cautiously tempted the dog with a ball and then glued his mouth with the sticky substance with had fallen on her long hair and messed it up terribly. But she didn't have time for worrying about messed up hair. She hadn't been aware that someone would be there at the Mallik Mansion. Her sources had told her that the Mallik's were away on a world tour...She quickly broke the lock with easy expertise and stuffed the notes...crisp and fresh into her bag. Armaan meanwhile reached leo and realized his mouth was jammed with sum crappy, sticky substance....Just then the red alert blared through the Mansion and Armaan slapped his forehead! He had never even guessed that someone could dare to try and rob them- the Malliks! He sprinted upstairs as fast as his feet could carry him and dashed into the locker room. The empty locker stared at him unashamedly ..."oh man!" he groaned..."ab dad mera keema banenge!" Riddhima's heart beats were increasing rapidly...she had taken refuge in Armaan's room after hearing the main hall door bang open. Her hands had gone all clamy and her body had frozen wid fear. Armaan entered the room bursting with fresh fury.....he picked up the wireless phone and furiously dialled away. Riddhima wiped the beads of perspirations that were kissing her forehead...she was hidden behind the great cream drapes.
Armaan-Adi....guess what?
Adi- Armaan....tu abhi tak suya nahi hai?
Armaan-....na man....some freaking thief has robbed me...
Adi- you?
Armaan- I mean us...the Malliks.....
Adi- kya??? tell me you r joking Ami!.....
Armaan- Nahi yaar....tu abhi idhaar aaja...pata nahi main dad ko kya bataoonga....
Adi- wait up man...call the damned police neways...tera woh guard kahaan hai?
Armaan-(sheepishly) woh gaya hai bhel puri khaane...mere permission lekar...
Adi- Kya tune usse bhel puri khaane ke liye bhej diya?
Armaan- tu ab yaahaan jaldi aa...I am feeling crazy...
Riddhima prayed sincerely that the breeze didn't give away her cover but the breeze too did want to have fun! Armaan wheeled around pushing the hair that fell on his hair adorably...back. His eyes were immensely brown wid worry. Suddenly his nose picked up a faint scent of 'euphoria' perfume...and then the drapes flew away giving him the view of a figure clad in rich black hiding there. "Hey you! "he shouted and grabbed the wrist of the person...but the figure wrung free and pushed him away causing him to land on his bed. By the time he recovered his balance no one was there...
"the wrist felt oddly feminine.."he thought to himself. And his feet felt something ...he picked it up and saw it was a lip gloss with the intial R written on the cap with a marker.
".....mmm.....interesting.....a female thief!" he laughed imagining Abheer Mallik's expression when he would tell him that they had been robbed by a female.
please let me know if you liked this part....
Are you guys okay wid the idea of our sweet riddhima being a robber....well I was highly amused by it and thought it would make a great story.
Edited by livelygal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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no comments well....😭😭😭...

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hey!!!! 😊 plz do continue n pm me also.............the ff seems to be fresh with new concept n it sound really inetrsting........it will b interesting to see riddhima as a thief............luved the way armaan is ...........d first part is a nice one.......hey armman got to know thts female thief.....hope he finds doon n then we can see the blosming luv...........do pm me
with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
Edited by karan''''s archita - 16 years ago

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