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Tahira

@cutie13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

gr8 part

aww poor ridz she is so confused

i bet that was armaan who was always flirtin :D

cont soon

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hydrogurl001

@hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

hmm cant believe riddhima said yes :(....its totally not love..plz cont soon! hope she realizes her mistake soon!

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Lovely_Diva

@Lovely_Diva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

hey rohit, wow!!! another ff, amazing :) how can u mange soo many, and all of them being fanatasitc

loved the concept of this one 2!!! awesome!!! thanx for the pm:)

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

hey bhai! i luved it! cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update/link!

❤️twinkle!

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surisha

@surisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Awesome start Rohit. Just loved it. She is confused then why did she agree. Loved her relation with muski.

Hey the hero himself is here. It would be fun now!!

Update soon. when will you update contract..??

thanks for pm.

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Oh K Rohit..now dat was like a long part..... ok my suggestions first..

1. dont use OMG so many times....it gets very cleashe....

2. i think this Armaan getting all time flirty with Riddhima i mean the way she fell on him and his behaviour was very much like the one in lost love....very much similiar....

3. u picturise Armaan in ur 3 fan fics the same....again which spoils the kind of enthusiasm....like now wen she was about to fall i tot Armaan would be like sumone rilly nice to her and some romantic sort off momoent...but as i read futher it was very much similiar to his image in defeated by love and lost love....then it becomes too much expected....

ok ....end of my suggestions.....u dont have to take it...

ok the part was al in al very nice....well done....

one thing aftr this part...

abhi sucks in proposing....hehe...

thnx for the PM...

Love Steffi

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DEVIKA / DEE

@DEE2803

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

hey rohit .....really interesting ff....please continue....thanks for pm

DEVIKA

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nimisha

@nimiluvkaran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

hey its an osoooooooom concpt..im loving..it..
the part was fabulas..
superbly ritten..n tum to mahir ho..
nywaz ...vry vry vry vry wellllll done..! !!!!
thnku for the PM service

love u dada

nimmo....!!

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Yup...Steefi...Okiess...Suggestions taken...But armaan would be different here. He wont be Jerk..Womanizer...That scene was just started...i had to end it so i wrote it that way...He will not be same in this one...!!!

i had already thought of it...but he would be little cheky with her...Yes he would be flirty...thats true...He has to be He is armaan...!!!!

Wait for the next part.