The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

debby tumhara koi jawab nahi kya ff hai i mean i am thrillled comlpetely
awesome

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reshmahn

@reshmahn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

wonderful update yaar .... seriously luvd it .... was waitin for the update so desperately.... cant wait for the next .... ur ff is like drop of water in the desert..... 😊

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Debby, was waiting for the update. I must say, you delivered a smashing one! With loads of Mayank, Nupur and Sammy, and just the right amount of Mummy and Benji. *sigh* I loved the way Mayank admitted to his mom the truth. It was so cute, and I could imagine him doing something like that on the show!

And Lonavala? Any chances of them meeting the DMG crew there? *giggles* But cannot wait for the trip. I am assuming more love will bloom there? So the college gang will go, how about Radz, Adi and Pragya? Are they going as well?

Waiting for the next bit!

Love, as always,
Radz

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Hey Debby awesome update as usual.....
bilkul ghor kalyug aa gaya hai....Loved that line.....
Aur yeh Mayu kya karne vaala hai.....Will be waiting for the
Mayu-Nupur-Mom scene.....Aur yeh kya Lonavala ka plan ho gaya hai
God knows what u have in store for them in Lonavala
Continue soon aur jaldi update karne ki koshish karna please....
And once again rocking update
Love
Tina

Edited by TINAMALHONTRA - 16 years ago

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legends

@legends

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

hey debbbbbbbbbbbby hyeeeeeeeeee i m back
actually sorry as i didnt replied 4 ur previus updates but even dey were
"HILARIOUS"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
&&&&&& todays was OUTSTANDING
"BYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDDDD"

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome 😳CONTINUE SOON.😊

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

aab kya kahey .. LOVED IT !!!! you already know how much i like your workkk!!

you always.do.fantastic.(my-space-bar-is-not-working).....Like-every-other-update---loved..this....one...alot..

and the Mayu mom scenee was tooo cute like always

i...realli...likked...this..bit

They hardly thought dreams could offer them a more beautiful reality than the one they were living in.

well done dear...!!keep-it-coming.. !!! yu've done a mindblowing job.. and i realli liked the Sammy-Nupur and Samrat-Benji bits !!

:):)

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Arpita Madan

@Arpita.Madan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

WOW debby di WOW...........luved it.............actually i'm sorta in a bad mood so i'll comment more later................but it was AWESOME!!!

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416391

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

heyy debby!! was eagerly waiting for ur update!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!

i totally loved ur update.......it was awesome, brilliant, wonderful!!!

i loved the mayank- mom scene it was damn cute the way he admitted everything and all!!

mayurs phone convo *sigh*

samji were amazing.......looks like someone knows how to patao his saali.....lol

u make all the characters seem soo real!!

can't wait for the lonavala trip!!

continue when ever u have free time......but try to do it soon

can we plz get some sajan scenes in the next update????

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#90

@Nidhi: Thanks so much yar.. I am glad you liked those parts. Mayank's planned a little mischief.. that comes in the next update.. you liked the un-official confession? Aww.. thank you! Yeah.. I hope you like the trip track.. keep reading. 🤗

@Pragya, Anjalika: Thanks so very much sweeties.. 😊

@Reshma: What a wonderful simile that one.. you made me smile. Thanks a lot! 😊

@Radz: Hey, I am thrilled you liked the update.. esp since it came after quite a while. Lol, no. I will ensure the DMG crew shoots miles away from Lonavala.. I had wanted them to go closer home, like Shimla or Mussoorie but I figured that would be quite a long ride from Mumbai. 😉 Yes, love will bloom in the hills, so to say. =)) Nope, its just a college trip. Radz, Adi and Pragya will light up Mumbai while the gang's away. Thanks a million Radz.. lotsa love.

@Tina: I am so happy you liked it. Yeah, will try and update soon.. Lonavala track begins in a part or so. Thanks so much Tina.. 🤗

@legends: Welcome back! I missed you! Thanks for catching up on this one.. 🤗