The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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shrishti gupta

@shrishti gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Love the update! Continue soon!

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z@heen

@z@heen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

wah debbz......new thread ki bariya shuruwaat.....!!!!

love yua for it....i can imagine their beach talk yaar....

wen ever i read ur ff it looks as if im also their n watching them with my own eyes.....

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416391

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

heyyy debby!!!

congo on the new thread.......when's the treat!!

i hope ur better now....

now abt the mindblowing update

the update was one of ur best ever u truly lived up to our expectations.......it had everything!!

wonderful, fabulous, awesome!!!!

i loved the mayur part it was soo touching, and humourous.....

the way they were remembering their old moments and all...

it reminded me of the beach scene in the show

the movie scene was fantastic........i loved the way samrat was teasing gunjan and all that....it was extremely cute!!!!

i loved the radz and adi part.....they seem so cute together!!

uday is sooo sweet and cute....

and benji he's such a sweetheart - i love the way u show him in ur FF

all in all an extremely extremely extremely good update!!

plzzzz PM me next time u update......

continue sooon...

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zooni

@zooni.blue

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

hey great post debby

here is the funniest part

Mayank: pehle batana chahiye tha na Nupur, jhagda karta hi nahi tumse! Phir pyar toh nahi hota.
Uday: guys! Aaj raat toh main so hi nahi paunga. Soya na toh sapne me wo sabse darawna bhoot hi aayega!
Benji: darawna bhoot? (feigning surprise) Tu bhi tha film me? Maine dhyan nahi diya.

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komal793

@komal793

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hiiiiiiiii

wonderful part.

cant wait 2 read more.

pls continue soon.

luv

komal.

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Debby!

Yaar...what a mind blowing update!!

But first, congrats on the new thread! I hope reach 4-5-6 threads on this fic...it deserves it.

Coming back to the fic, seriously one of the best parts. Mayur totally stole the show here...Mayank was so romantic and Nupur's emotional side was seen...loved the scene when they talk about their parents.

I hope there's a scene exactly like this in the show...you really need to PM it to PD....

The beach scene made all the memories of their come back...aww...the two of them are so perfect and you write their characters perfectly!

Btw, you updated sooner this time!

Anyway, PM me the next time please...can't wait to read the next part.

Nidhi

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Sunita

@whatsername

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Debby seriously, this is the best update I've read .... the beach scences was realli gudd.. it was sooo happy and sad at the same time . sad because is so beautiful .. and happy bcoz . it was beatufiul lolz. i dn know how to describe it . you know wat im saying rite ?

it was soo fnny as well. i ralli loved this bit .lol

pehle batana chahiye tha na Nupur, jhagda karta hi nahi tumse! Phir pyar toh nahi hota.

and the paragraph u described

"Nupur blushes a deep red as she senses him looking straight at her...... "

it was soooo damn goood... you are an amazing writterr. i seriously hopee they would have these scences on the show.

and also ur SaJan and the gang scences were also realli gud.. bt u cnt help but be biase to Mayurrr.....

well donee once again !! u smashed it !!!

🤗

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Ananya

@ananya_s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

wow debby!!!!! amazing update as always nd mayur were too gud nd romantic.........u truly did justice 2 mayur.......simply awesome update!

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

@Radz.. Exactly. Since Sajan are the quintessential love story of the shy girl and the cool yet soft guy, so I stress on the awkwardness bit.. but as u said, she feels secure with him. Aww, I am so happy you liked Mayur. They always give me that eternal feeling..
Wow, I just thought Radz is the type to like actors who do rather sensible cinema and he's cute as well. Happy that one clicked! 😉 I like him too! Thanks so very much for saying all you did.. I find you one of my best critics and hence really value your opinion. 🤗

@Jyothi, Vaish, Tanya, Shrishti.. thanks a lot gals! 😃

@Pallo.. A bigger than ever hug for that out of this world comment. 🤗You cant begin to imagine how happy you have made me Pallojee!
I like Madhavan too.. 13B is out and my friends say its great; I need to watch it soon.. Oh I u'stand ur woes completely..wen u want to watch a movie and cant for whtvr reasons.. u'll enjoy ur post exams time! 😉
Aww u liked those dialogues? Yippee! My Mum has a tendency to call me baniya each time I am economical while shopping and stop her from buying this and that for me.. her Nupur-ish streak matches with my Mayank-ish one. 😆
I am feeling on top of the world knowing u liked the beach scene. I had worked hard on it.. and time on the beach is my ultimate romantic fantasy.. U know the subah-raat concept like u said is so true! Love makes us stronger, more full of optimism abt the world, hai na? So, so glad u liked it. 😳
Can never be bored of hearing from you..hope u had great sapne.. Love you too Pallo!! 🤗

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Disha

@disha141094

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

hey debby....awesum update yaar...yes u hav lived up....i mean uve crossed our xpections evry update.....n will always..!!! keep d gud work goin...!! <3:)