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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
hiii..
loved ur poem
it is so beautiful...👏
ur bff is so lucky....
plz write more poems...
i would love 2 read them...😊
Love,
Komal.....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
woah dear🤗 its really a mind blowing one⭐️ superb😊😊 so Atul & Armaan r college friends😎 and Atul is having nice tunning with Ridhima😊 and whats about Armaan & Ridhima😉 waiting to see their chemistry😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉 & ur poem for BFF is mind blowing one⭐️

"Take my hand and lead the way,
Pour out all your deeper thoughts,
Let your soft voice whisper swiftly into my ear,
All these lovely things I want to hear.
Holding your hand in my hand feels me,
Like i m in haven it fit so perfect in your one,
Like made for each other.
It's like a dream, but ten times better,
The way I feel when we're together.
You give me this feeling I can't deny." Only for Karan Shilpa (KASH)

"payar say payar us waqat na karo,
jab payar ap se payar na karay, or
jab payar ap se payar karay to payar
ko itna payar do k wo kisi dosry se payar na karay..."



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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
hey swati,
just came across ur ff..it's good....pls add me to ur pm list.....
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear🤗 really an awesome one⭐️ i have just read part 2😛 and now i will read part 3😳 and leave my comment on it but part 2 is cool one😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Love is like magic,
And it always will be,
For love still remains,
One of life's sweet mysteries...
Love works in ways,
That are magical and strange,
And there is nothing in life,
That love cannot change....
Love is never selfish
Its understanding and kins,
Because it sees with its heart,
And not with its mind.....
Love is the answer,
That everyone seeks,
Love is the language,
That every heart speaks.....
Love cannot be bought,
It is priceless and free,
Love is pure magic,
It's like u r in Heaven......"





Forget me..!!
u r an awesome poet...!!!😊😛⭐️
😛
you made my day....!!!!👏
thanx for the lovely poem and comments...

love u,
swati....
dazzling_armaan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
A WONDEFUL FF YAAR
PLS CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME IF U CAN.
THANKS FOR SUCH A NICE FF
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear🤗 its really a mind blowing one⭐️ superb😊😊 so Atul & Armaan r college friends😎 and Atul is having nice tunning with Ridhima😊 and whats about Armaan & Ridhima😉 waiting to see their chemistry😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉 & ur poem for BFF is mind blowing one⭐️

"Take my hand and lead the way,
Pour out all your deeper thoughts,
Let your soft voice whisper swiftly into my ear,
All these lovely things I want to hear.
Holding your hand in my hand feels me,
Like i m in haven it fit so perfect in your one,
Like made for each other.
It's like a dream, but ten times better,
The way I feel when we're together.
You give me this feeling I can't deny." Only for Karan Shilpa (KASH)

"payar say payar us waqat na karo,
jab payar ap se payar na karay, or
jab payar ap se payar karay to payar
ko itna payar do k wo kisi dosry se payar na karay..."





Atul's tuning with Ridhima has significance leter in the story...
atul has a major role to play here..!!!

U really liked my poem and i am so glad...
because of your motivation, i will write few others and post them in this topic only.....

thank you thank you thank you thank you...!!!

and nidha u r an awesome poet...the first poem is just amazing...i don't have words for them...!!!!

i am privileged to have a reader like you...seriously.......!!!

thank you very much

love,
swati
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: komal793

hiii..

loved ur poem
it is so beautiful...👏
ur bff is so lucky....
plz write more poems...
i would love 2 read them...😊
Love,
Komal.....😃



seriously komal, i am overwhelmed by all your comments and i won't let you down...!!!

i will write more and post them here....

if you can then just give some topics...i would be greatful....
i am nothing without my friends....!!!

thanks for commenting...
love,
swati
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Rohit86

**Reserved**
Hey swati i ill be back....!!!!


I am back...That was agreat part i loved it...So Armaan and atul are Buddies..from college...Thats good to see...Armaan has someone special in his life...Huh...???
waiting to know about that...
Great part...That nurse station thing was good...haah...Atul is atul...Armaan gave good answer...😆
Update soon
Thanks for pm..

Rohit😳



yes armaan and atul are friends and this has significance later in the story where atul knocks some sense in armaan's head....see i am slowly slowly telling you what will happen next...so u should be greatful to me...!!!

while i was writing the nurse station thing i was actually laughing...!!!

thanx for commenting....

love,
swati


guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey swati,
just came across ur ff..it's good....pls add me to ur pm list.....



i will surely do that...
thanx for reading my ff...!!!

love,
swati
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

A WONDEFUL FF YAAR

PLS CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME IF U CAN.
THANKS FOR SUCH A NICE FF



thanx for commenting...
i am glad u liked it...!!!

i will pm u pakka..!!!

love,
swati..

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