FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 85

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely finally samrat realize gunjan's worth.
god i am surprised at RV
he is good man.
do continue dear
bye sumi

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

hey mimi dear!! awesome!! update!! totally loved it dear!!

sorry for not commenting 4 such a long tym....

plzz do cont soon...

Originally posted by: Knowalot2

thanks 4 introducing RV😳
and oh oh!! i read a RV-samrat fight😆
btw RV has realised that she's her GF..wot's taking Samrat so long?!?😆

i loved the first sister part😳

totally rocking update😃 can't wait 2 see the last parts

Originally posted by: crystal angel

mimi my luv....m sooooo sowwiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeee 4 da xtremely late comment....😭 bt i was pretty busy wid college n all.....so pls 4give me...😭

Aweeeeh sweets!!! What's this yaar? NO SORRIES with me, understood? I HATE formalities, especially with friends! BUT- I will be mad if you EVER apologize to me again! 😡😆

now on 2 da actual comment......da second last part was amazin....call me weird bt i thot dat majan frndship was da best part of it....i especially luvd it wen gunjan confessed to mayank dat she luvd sam....m kinda sad dat dis fic's comin 2 an end tho.....sowen u wrie another 1 pls do in4m me...cheers gunjan

Aweeeh, Im SOOO glad you all liked the MaJan bit, heck- if I knew it'd be SOOOO appreciated, I'd make it longer 😆

And please dont be upset, everything eventually comes to and end, and Im afraid it's time for this dear old FF to bid adieu as well. I will be back with another fic though babes, trust me 😉

I've already started planning some story tracks out. I'll defo let you know if I follow through with it

Originally posted by: Asthuox

*Shakes head *

Late comment.

* Holds ears *

Im so sorry dude!

Asthuuu, stop it yaar! No problems, and I still dont get why you think commenting like a day or 2 after is latw 😆 Im so sorry for the late reply, I've been stalling lately, exams suck.

@ Update.

This masterpiece is beyond words once again. Seriously whats the secret. Your FF is always beyond expectations. 👏 👏 👏

LOL no secret babes! BUT I wanna know how you remain sane after reading this fic. Also, I'd like to know how you are able to write such long comments ALL the time and never get bored. 😆

Januable +Grandilicously Fantabulous+ Wonderfully outstanding + Cweetilicous + Brilliant + Traffic + Action pack + Perfect = Beautifully written + Enjoyable + the best update.

AWEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank youu soooo much hun *hugs* You're word equations always make me happy 😃

They are just SOOOO sugar coated+amazing+makes me blush a jaw wide smile+motivates me to write MORE

@GunPur. Like I have mentioned before I love the way you laid out the characters bonding. Its one of the best parts of your FF and your writing skills reflect on the words to. From Nupur's concern side to Gunjan hiding her pain inside, its was very beautifully written. Typical Gunjan. Wants to keep all the pain inside. 😭

OMG you're so adorable! Thanks a ton babes, I honestly dont know where to begin when I'm replying to you. You ALWAYS make my day, no jokes. Im so touched that you (and all my readers) take out the time to READ AND give me honest feedback. It just makes my day! Im so glad you like the characters here 😳

@ The diary. One of my Favourite bits in the parts. The love quote truly defined loved. It's so beautiful. I was watching AW2R. Jamie-Landon wedding. *sobs * 😭

OMG I was crying like a baby when I was watching the movie (for the 500th time 😆) during the scene where Jamie gifts Landon her mom's diary...and he reads the 'What is Love' entry 😭

@ the canteen moment. Sheena is such a bubbly sweetheart by god. Cant help but adore her in this FF. She knows what buttons to press at what moments. The whole teasing scene was really cute. 😳😆

Hahahhaha, aweeeeh thank you! Dude, you cant even begin to imagine how hard it is writing about someone I truly despise. I had to edit and reedit her bits SO many times 😆 But it makes me SOOO happy that shes winning the hearts of all of you through this fic 😳

@ Samrat POV . *glares * Ugh he makes me mad at times. Heck I still loved reading his pov. It ROCKED!👏 You expressed his feelings so brilliantly. Wonderful job. The audience can understand his mind state. His attitude towards gunjan and all. Very cool dude types. 😳

Very ego-maniac types is more like it 😆

But By God, he's the one character I can literally connect with, I guess that's why I enjoy writing about him more than I like writing about Gunjan. I adore Gunjan's character and all, but being polar opposites from her, I have to literally "shed my own skin and get into hers" and see things the way she would. Samrat on the other hand is easier. I get him..if that makes any sense 😛 And thank you for getting him too Asthaa <3

@ Tam. I love her. Sajan rehearsal moment. Awkward walls. LOL samrat finding the lines cheesy🤣🤣 . I wonder what he will say when he will confess. Erm. Yo chashmish I feel that thing for you? Aweeehhh but it will still seem adorable. 😆😳

🤣 LOL I would love to use that dialogue 😆 But I think everyone would come after me with chappals and dandas and tomatoes 🤣 Agreed though, anything coming from him would be ADORABLE! But the last part will be somewhat ...shocking I guess. (In a good way of course) Let's just say you all will see the side of Sam that he NEVER wanted to bring out. 😉

I had this awkward wall thing 😆. We had a science mock and my crush was beside me. Distraction I tired to just look down on my paper and was doing a good job till i felt his gaze on me. and aweehhh he kept like putting his head down on the table and closing his eyes. He looked so cutee 😳😳 and my friends around me where like with there eyes look 😆😆 i was like stopppp *blush*

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really? That's SOOOO adorableeee!!!! Bless!!!! 😳😆

Something similar happened with me. I REALLY hated this guy, but then I kind of (emphasis on KIND OF) fell for him. 😛 So before we used to be all hands on violent (literally, we used to beat each other up) and then as we got older, and as I discovered that I liked him... tihngs got somewhat awkward. I ignored him a but, and LITERALLY died when he grabbed my arm.. LOL *coughs okay enough said 😆

Back to the update 😆😆

@ 3 weeks later. RV and gunjan. Now that's what I want to see in the show right now then him being all-evil. I love the guy and all but I seriously don't want him to hurt dia man. OMG I KNOW! I love RD like crazy!!! And I REALLY hope RV realizes Dia's worth before it's too late 😕

RG..There friendship is seriously so cute 😛. Loved how you expressed gunjan thoughts on RV. I adored there bonding. And aw he even asked her for the spring dance. 😲 Whooaaa the guy is fast 😆😆

LMAO he is, agreed. 🤣 But he only asked her in a 'friend-ish' way. He doesnt know Gunjan the way Sam or Sheena does. He's kind of an airhead 😆 But I LOVE him, and I hope you all love him back 😳

@SD. SAY WHAT??? Dia and samrat dating. Oh gosh couldn't this guy do something else to distract himself. 🤢

I needed to add that in 😆 Just for the reaction 🤣 It wasnt planned, trust me. I dunno what imma do with her in the last part *sighs I'll think of something, dont worry 😉

@Fight. Before it, talk about being jealous sammy😆. Cant even stand a guy asking her for dance. Then the fight. Loved the way you penned down this scene. Very realistic. Samrat feeling uneasy and when he sees RV touching her he loses his patience. 😲

That's it, I completely lost it! I push RV against the lockers, "Dude, get OFF her!"

I loved this line. Its reflects samrat feelings so well. He is jealous, he is angry, he loves her beyond anything. Its simply pointing out he cant stand some next guy with her. God knows when the heck he will realize. 😡

Aweeeh thank you Asthuuu!! Im so glad you liked it. It was such a last minute scene, I wasnt even planning on having a fight scene at all. I wrote the MaJan scene, but then as I was rereading the bit, I realized that I needed something vital to make Sam and Gunjan MISS each other...and tadaaaa, RV came to my mind 😳

@ Gunjan's words. "He was just being a good friend!" she cries, "Something you could never be."

OUCH! The pain could be felt for samrat. I loved how you described his feelings. The whole.. it felt like I was the one who got punched. Aweeehh. You penned down his emotions in such a fantastic way. You did a awesome job once again mimi. 👏

Aweeeh, thanks a ton Asthuu!! Im so glad you liked it, and I really hope it didnt come out as being too harsh. Sam needed a serious reality check, and who better then Gunjan to make him realize that he cant control her because it's not his life.

@ RV-Sam. Can we please have this in the show then the creepy eye locks? There little bonding session was so cute. They seemed like those angry brothers making up. Oye oye. Them talking about gunjan. Oh of course she is worth fighting for. Thank god at least Sam realized this. 😳😆

LOL OMG I KNOW! Im SO sick of the eyelocks 😆 Next jodi in the making I say 🤣 AWEEEH what a perfect way to put it "brothers making up" AWEEEHHH!!! Couldnt have summarized it better myself AsthuuU!! *hugs*

Im so glad you liked it 😳

@ Majan. We need to have a majan scene like this. Have you pmed pd yet?? LOL should I? 😕 I think Jenny di PMed that bit to PD. Oh also I love you for adding it. It was simple and beautiful. Mayank understands the situation so well. I hope he can knock some sense in samrat. The hug was really cute. I liked how you portrayed there bonding. Beautiful done mimi. 👏

Aweeh thank you Asthuu!! I actually DREAMT up that scene 😆 I needed it in the fic, so I added it in. I REALLY want a scene like this in the show b/w MaJan..or BenJan 😛

That was one breathtaking amazing update. Everything was perfect. You balanced it with all kind of scenes. 👏😳

Aweeeh thank you so much hun! I love you like a sister <3

Thanks for the pm 😳

anytime 😉

Love you 🤗🤗

P.s p.s i miss yu. where is you?

Love you too!

And Im here, but drowned in textbooks. I have finals, so I'll be inactive until June 26-27 (depends)

Originally posted by: janhvi_janu

Okay you can slap, kick, punch me for disappearing but I had college admission process going on so I couldn't come online. =(

No, I will NOT slap, kick or punch you 😆

How'd it go?!!! Did you get in?! OMG you're supposed to PM me and let me know Januuu!!!!!

I missed you so much

Here goes:

OMGGGGG! I knew it!!!! Samrat would feel awkward about Gunjan and his friendship!! (freakishly, the same thing is happening in the actual show!!) Hah! But that doesn't mean he'll run off to Dia!

LOL OMG I know 'ey? I had this track planned out before Sheena even entered, it's scary how the same thing is happening in the show 😕

Maybe I'm an undercover creative 😉😆

Aww, I looooved the way you showed that gunjan was fine with the whole "break-up" I guess she felt the same weird way!

Yeah, she did, especially after what Sheena said to her the night before. I guess it's not as awkward for her as it is with Sam, but neither of them are going to accept love that easily.

And YEs!!! Anmol is going to confess! Poor Khushi has suffered enough! and muhahhaahhah Samrat baby, the lines you find so cheesy, you will have to say them if you want Gunjan to stay!

Aweeeh 😆 Yep yep! Just you wait until the last part! Sam will make ALL OF YOU fall in love with him 😳 I'd love to say it's gonna be shocking, but it's not. LMAO I dont have te brain power to think up something creative 😆

Mimi, you're just tooo good!! I mean I'm sooo glad that you introduce RV as a good guy AND made him for Gunjan!! Awwies! 😍 I want something like this to happen on the show as well RIGHT NOW!!!

AWEEEEEHHH Janu you're SOOOO sweeet!!! OMG I know, I want RV to be the good guy, but Im not gonna lie, he makes a sexy bad boy 😳😆

But agreed- I WANT GUNJAN TO GET NEW FRIENDS *points at Benji* That stupid Sam needs to LEARN and REALIZE her importance through a friend of GUNJAN's. NOT SHEENA 😡

Sam, you're in for some big envy pangs!!! I also loved how he almost beat up RV!

LMAO I should have guessed 😆

But my fav two parts were in the end:
When RV and Sammy have the heart-to-heart conversation and when Mayank consoles Gunjan!

Mayank is the perfect elder bro material (Gunjan's not ours =P)

LMFAO agreed with the bolded/underlined bit 😆

Jokes apart, thanks so much Janu, Im SOOO glad you liked those bits 😳 *hugs*

My Favvvvvest line (well there are 2)



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Mimi, you're a magic-weaving story-teller!

You are one the bestestest FF writer's I have read till date!

Aweeeehhh Jaan!!! *hugs* That's sooo sweet of you! I missed your comments so much, it's not even funny! Thanks SOOO very much for liking this part, you're the BEST!

Mucho Love
Janu ❤️

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

This is allsocool
love the way u write mimi
Omg this issooexciting
cant wait till next part
Would u kindly pm me plzz

Originally posted by: zooni.blue

so weventful and different kind of fan fic yaar iam luvin it completely

Originally posted by: blushpink13

once again a lovelyyy update!

Thanks so much IQ! *hugs*

Om myy for the first time he wasnt being a chappar chappar (demanding)

LMAO 😆 True that hahaha, but he'll be doing a lot of chappar chappar in the last part-TRUST me 😆😆

i totally luved the way he was feeling awkward abt the confession scene..."its LAME"..lmao...it rocked it..

AMASTABELOUS update..oh c'mon you know it...even if i dont say anything...

LOL aweeh thank youuu! Im glad you liked it XD

Hahah no ways, I like being told if the update was good or not 😳 *blows a kiss* Thanks so much IQ~

thanks for the PM

anytimee

IQ