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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sedna

oooooohhhhhhhhh

Bimbo + BumBum!!!!

It's sooo fitting!!
LOL isn't it? 😆
Man it's gonna be sucha Jai-Aditi thing from JTYJN for SaJan!
I know!! OMG I loveeee JTYJN 😃

P.S. Check out my SaJan siggy! XD

I did! Oh my god, I LOVE it!!!!! *drools*

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blushpink13

The update was brilliant as usual.

IQ! Aweeh, thank you hun!! *hugs*
Gunjan got guts to throw a compliment,

Guts ki barsaat hui kia *looks around*

LMAO! 😆 "guts ki barsaat hui" EW! LOL *imagines actual raining guts*🤢 😆
And wow she has a car?.woww?.cool.
YUP! lol I didnt wanna add that part, but then I watched AW2R again, and I was like "😲 They MUST have a car scene" 😆

And mayank comparing love with dictionaries..lmao?very dictionarish..lmao.🤣

LOL 😆 That's Mayank for you!
Ab lagta hai dictionary day bhi celebrate karma parega?.🤣
LMAO!! OMG we should totally have a dictionary day! 😆

Poor them had to dance?lolzz?man im just loving this Ms Tamana?.

ahaha, Ms. Tamana's our cupid, isnt she? 😛
And nupur dragging mayank?amazing?
lol no surprise there huh? 😆

and plz add me to ur pm list. and yea i'll be replying and reading it late ok...

Yup, I'll do that right now, and don't worry about being 'late' no worries. Take all the time you need 😉

Keep writing

IQ

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Posted: 16 years ago
shutt u! lolozzzz its amazing! ive seen a walk to remember so i can pick out the similarities! heheh but this is just amazing! the play was just made for these two!
keep up the great work mimzz i wanna read moreeee..
love both their thoughts! its really interesting and funny!
gud luck with school.. and hope to see the next part in the car! ooooh heheh
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Posted: 16 years ago

agree with naz di and asthu.

@asthu:luv ur eaquation, brilliant job!

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Posted: 16 years ago

*hugs*CP

I knoowww eeewww raining guts…lmao….and yea…dictionary day..lolz..u know we are having a steeve urkel day, we have to dress p like him..lamo big specs and suspenders and all..lmao….

But I don't have to do anything as I alrede wear specs…lolzz…

That car scene is great I cant wait till the actual one…lolz…gunjan driving just amazing…lolz…

Yess…a very organized and preplanned cupid she is…lmao…

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Asthuox

*Glares *
ASTHU! lol you have to stop beginning your comments with GLARING 😆

How Dare you call it boring missy😳? * asthu shooting dirty looks * 😆
😆 I only speak the truth yaar. lol

It was Beautiful + Perfect + Breathtaking Amazing + Brilliant + Fantastic + Grand = Enjoyable Update.
Aweeeehhh!!! *Hi5 my equation buddy* 😆 I never knew I'd meet someone who loves word equations as much as I do! LOL
You're too sweet yaar! 😳
I think I got a equation disease😳😆
LOL I have one too, we're admitted in the same hospital. LOL

Chal forget me, your doing a awesome job in your FF, and trust me babes it's a pleasure to read your work. No lies.😳
AWEH!! Yaar, more then writing the FF... I love how I've made so many new friends here because of it. I cant explain how much that means to me! You're the best! *hugs*
Is liye, for you a tight jadoo ki jhappi 🤗🤗
Hayyee, I love jadoo ki jhappi's 😆 *JKJ back*

Im so jelling, you know jealous to how can you always make your parts so enjoyable to read ki dil maage more😆! Freaking amazing😛.. Hmm; I need tips; Aw come on you can give a little Mimi magic dust to Asthu! * puppy eyes * 😒 * Dia ki trick. Mwahaha! 😈
😆 "Dil maange more" aweeh, I like that movie! LOL Jokes apart, yaar.. you're TOOOOO sweet!
OYE... I thought I made this crystal clear: I CAN'T GIVE TIPS... I NEED THEM 😆

* Fast-Forward * 😉

* Heart attack *
+
* faints * 😲
😲 LOL *calls 911*

Gunjan trying to start a convo with samrat! Poor girl bored samrat😆. Chal never mind; it's a teek tak start. 😛
😆 lol I'm trying to change up Gunji's character a tad bit, I dun like this extremely shy one. LOL

Coming to the bubbly mayur. What outstanding dialogues writers. Wah wah! Taaliya!

🤣 Love Dictionary, You define me 🤣
🤣 lol did you like it? 😆 You can't possibly imagine how LONG it took me to write that 😆 I was @ dictionary.com.... *tadaaa* inspiration 😆

Just spotting the word dictionary I knew it had to be mayank! And samrat staring at him. Those expressions are so easy to picture rise and ,mayank being proud of the dialogue🤣, Dam!
🤣 LOL I can honestly see that in my head too. Samrat pissed off with the dialogues, glars at a proud smiling Mayank 😆
The creatives need to talk to you, they can get interesting scenes, forget talk, they should employee you😎, saachi karan Patel 😉 ki kasam tushe will be full ideal expert👏😳.
LOL Mayuu would be so proud na? 😆 He'll be like "See Nupur, I told yu...filmy dialogues won't get you anywhere."
@red,bolded,underlined line: Hayeee, I LOVE KP! 😳😆 He's my first tellywood lovee!!
Back to Mayur;yeh kya??? Bully mayank edited Nupur dialogues. No respect for filmy dialogues😲! People now days BY GOD! But still they are so cute! haiyeeeee 😳
🤣 Bully Mayank?! LMAO! Asthuu, you're MAD! 😆

Then Sajan are not behind. Samrat noticing Little things Gunji does. How adorable is that. Oh boy Mimi is fully prepared to kill this bachi. 😲
LOL don't die on me Asthu! You're my ONLY equation buddy!! 😆
L-I-V-E!!! 🤣
Gunji saying You're not to bad yourself, minus the ego and you're actually pretty cool. Forget her believing the fact she said it, im still shocked😳.
LOL was it too early for her to say that? I was getting SO bored with introvert Gunji 😆 Im not used to writing about shy people, i'm more of the crazy people 😆
Did I mention how much im loving this gunjan in your FF!
AWEH!! You're the FIRST to say that! 😃 Thank you!!!!! 😳
Since Samrat is always to Januable.☺️
lol look @ my Sammy winking sig.. *drools*
-Him annoyed at the fact Tamana is always prepared! LOL baby don't you worry soon you will love this habit of her's😆😳
LOL ...only time will tell 😆
- And him smiling and actually liking what gunjan said to him.
Ego se hatke, liking what gunjan said mein aatke. 😉😆
^ 🤣 OMG I loveee it! LOL hahahahahahahahaahahah!! Oh GOD.. Imma make Nupur say that to him soon! 😆

😲 * im so weird *
No you're not!!!!

😉 Blaming you; its your FF jadoo. 😉
lol I feel so special now *takes a bow* 😆

* fast- forward to sajan dance *

MAGICAL😍,<<how long did that take you to do? 😆
Don't think they would be any better word then this girl😛. The way you penned it. Im blown away completely. WOW👏😳!
Asthaa, stop it now yaar! Your comments are always the BEST hun! They make me smile wider and wider! Not to mention that you leave the LONGEST comments, they make my day! XD
But all these compliments are TOO much! *I'm melting* 😆
The chemistry was so evident☺️.I really adorable that bit where Samrat felt dancing close with gunjan was different, it felt new and aw he could feel her nervousness. Awhh!! 😳
Aweeeehhh!!!! You're SOOOOOO adorable!! Thanks for liking that bit!! 😳
Samart should of sang this to here
lachak machak ke duur bhatak
Itdi se mud ada ud 😛
or sang the whole masakali song, it would of got her moving! 😳😛
That song is so good! 😳
😆 lol I love Masakali ...how perfect! LOL

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Dam! The closeness, samrat didn't let go and perfect song to use for that moment. Beautiful soul. Love you for this. As its one of my favourite tunes😛..
😲 Really? Aweeeh,, song credit goes to Janu, she wanted this song in the FF SOOO badly! She even posted all the lyrics for me 😆 I love it! I wanted to use this song later on, but I figured it'd be nice to use it during their first dance 😳
So graceful. Im gone to a la la la Sajan land. 🤪
meet me there 😉😆

NOTE: Another reason to love Tamana, seriously she is a Cupid and she forced them to look into eachother eyes.😳😆
LOL dude, I love Tamana! I hope she turns out to be a cupid for either MayUr or SaJan in the show. 😳 Bleshh.. I'd love her even more! 😃 [oh, and she should give Dodo bhai a chance] 😆

Haiyeee you even ended it so fine girl! Sajan drive! Balle balle. The collage stud driving home with the collage goody girl😳 = supercilious interesting.+ a little spicy. 😉😆
😆 Balle balle! LOL Asthu, you're so cute 😆 Gosh!
OH! And another equation 😆 That's like uhmm.. the third one already! 😃

I think you must of understood from my komment that how much I loved this update.
Your comments are the BEST! I loveee you for being so so SOOO enthusiastic and supportive, makes me feel so good inside yaar! *hugs you tightly*

Please update soon Mimi; waiting for sajan magic. 😳
I'll try updating ASAP hun!

Love you babes.

Mwa 🤗


P.s p.s, I wrote a lil bit of ma MU+SG FF, you free enough to read a little, to see how it is, and give me tips for improvement and thanks for the pm once again. 😛
😲 YOU=HAVE AN FF?! Send me the link RIGHT NOW! RIGHT NOW RIGHT NOW!!!!
I can't believe you're telling me now 😡
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Happy Vaisakhi 😳🤗
Aweeh, happy Vaisakhi to you too Asthuu!!!
P.S SEND ME UR FF LINK!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HI MIMI!!! I LOVE THIS PART!!

Hey Monica! Aweeh, thank you so much hun! *hugs*
WHY A R U SAYED IT BORING???
lol because I thought it was 😛😆
IM NOT AGREE WID U !!
THIS IS TOO GOOD AND LOVELY!!
Arree, thank you so much yaar! I think I changed my mind 😃😆
LOL....WHEN MAYANK PUT DICTIONARY IN THAT DIALOGUE...LOL!!
AND HE CUTS NUPUR'S FILMY DIALOGUES!!
HA HA HA POOR NUPUR...WE KNOW SHE WILL KILL HIM!!!
😆 Im so glad you liked MayUr's part 😆 Hahahahhaa, oh yeah.. RUN MAYUU!!!! LOL
I LOVE THE SAJAN'S PARTS
AND THE DIALOGUES B2IN THEM!!
Aweeh, shmanx you dear 😳
AND................................
KUCH AUR KEHNA BAKI HAI KYA???
lol aur kuch mat kehna, varna I will have a heart failure 😆
....LOL....JUST KIDDING YAAR!!!
THE LAST THING "I LOVE IT"!!!
AWEH! Thank you soo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
SO DEAR CONT SOON WHEN U GET TIME!!
SEE YAA!!!
LOVE UUU!!
I will! Love you too <3

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: naz17555

shutt u! lolozzzz its amazing!

LOL!! QOS *hugs* I havent talked to you in FOREVER 😭
Thank you!! *hugs*
ive seen a walk to remember so i can pick out the similarities! heheh
YAY!! You did? I LOVEEEE AW2R... can never get enough of it 😆
I know, there'll be a lot of similarities. 😳😆
but this is just amazing! the play was just made for these two!
Aweh, thank you Nazzy di!!!! *blows u a kiss* 😳
keep up the great work mimzz i wanna read moreeee..
hehe, aweeeee!! I wont keep you waiting *I hope*
love both their thoughts! its really interesting and funny!
lol im so glad you like the alternation of POVs 😳 That's basically the biggest diff. in this FF.. haha
gud luck with school.. and hope to see the next part in the car! ooooh heheh
Thank ya!! LOL noo seductive scenes 😆 Dont count on it. lol

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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy mimi!!
wonderful part......it was truly awesome!!
why did u think it was boring coz it wasn't at all??
we love it when its long!
i love the play thing and mayanks dictionary dialouges.....lol
sam didn't let go of gunji after the dance and tamana saw it....
he's so januable yaar....
gunji has a car and shes dropping sammy.....can't wait for it!!
thanks for the PM
keep up the brilliant work!!
continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago

*Ahem* *Ahem*

My dear chweet lil PIC!!!!

First of all lemme give you a hug!! And congos 4 the new FF jaani.. At least for the time being i'm not gonna miss ur stud and super kool writing!! (though i really and terribly miss Opposites esp RaMu!!! )

Ms.Tamanna is such a sweetie-pie...(like U)

my favourite part was ..well...each and every single letter including the spaces i love ur FF!!! 😃😃😃

oooppss..as always i forgot to mention sumthing

I "half-glared" at him, because firstly, I could so act if I put my mind to it, and secondly because I wasn't very good at glaring at people.

yaar...thats the first time i hear someone justify a 'half-glare'.

excellent jaani!!!!!! i MUST say excellent!!! 👏

shy Gunjan has a car!!😲 and she's gonna drop Sammy home in it... WOW😃
Okkie...now coming to the precap:dear U are the most surprising personality i ever know!!!⭐️

so darling PIC ;-)

"hum hain rahe pyaar ke

phir milengei

chalte chalte😳

love u

jaanu <3

PS:

1:i'm so sorry i'm so late!!!my stupid net was not working!!!😭2:Jaani i think its time to change PIC to MIC aka Master in Crime!!😳😃😃
3:from this moment onwards u are my sweet lil Ms.Mimiikutty,PiC.MiC
4:Jaani...please consider continuing Opposites..please.... 😃😭

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