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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Aweeeeh!! Is it because of your friend? But you're feeling better now no? 😃 Turn that frown upside down!! 😉😆
Yes Im perfectly arright now hehe ... o ya =) hehe

LOL it was JUST for you Binu!!! 😳
Awww Mimi...thank u🤗 Truly loved the scene

LOL even I dont get him 😕😆 Is that normal? LOL Achaa, gimme 2ish more parts, he'll be normal!
LOLZ...no its not normal....k chalo 2 more parts...he better be normal then...cant c this abnormal Sammy 😆😆

LOL did they really? 😆 Im glad you liked 'em! hahahha
OMG Mimi...yes those dialogues were damn funny....I was cracking up even wen my mood was bad!!! LOLZ

LOL you like this Sammy better right? 😃 So do I!! XD
O ya by the end of the part...he was turning into something better hehe

LOL isnt she? OMG I love her already! Which reminds mee... I need to add her and Dodo's parts in 😆
O yes love her!! Hope she is something similar in the show as well!! Ooo yes her n Dodo's part....n Ooo dat reminds me of Dia-Shukla scenes LOLZ....u were gonna have some na 😆😆 *jk*

😲 NAAHIIIIIIIIN *in filmy style* ARJUN! MOHIT! MEJHE BINU KI CHAPPALS SE BACHAO!! 😆
😲x2 LONGER?! Haiii... meri rabs. LOL I'll try
Muhahaha no one can save u now LOLZ...k now dont repeat ur "abuse is not love" line LOLZ....not gonna abuse u ...after all u r writing such a good FF....lots of love this time hehe 🤗
N YAYY!!! Yes I loveeeeee long FFs!!! Do try =)

Don't feel sad Binu!!!! You feel better kai? 😊
Don't worry...Im fine now hehe
But awww thnx for asking....luv ya tons 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
I m feeling very tired. And it's almost 1 am in the morning I'll reply to part 4 2morrow Okay??
Good night🤗 <3 ya!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful dear
gunjan is so good adn sammy dheere dheere line par aa raha hai. tamana is so good she just preplanned everything.
nupur and mayank are hilarious love like dic.

hehehe do continue dera
its lovely
bye
sumi
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Posted: 16 years ago
oooooohhhhhhhhh

Bimbo + BumBum!!!!

It's sooo fitting!!

Man it's gonna be sucha Jai-Aditi thing from JTYJN for SaJan!


P.S. Check out my SaJan siggy! XD
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Posted: 16 years ago

The update was brilliant as usual.

Gunjan got guts to throw a compliment,

Guts ki barsaat hui kia *looks around*

And wow she has a car….woww….cool.

And mayank comparing love with dictionaries..lmao…very dictionarish..lmao.🤣

Ab lagta hai dictionary day bhi celebrate karma parega….🤣

Poor them had to dance…lolzz…man im just loving this Ms Tamana….

And nupur dragging mayank…amazing…

and plz add me to ur pm list. and yea i'll be replying and reading it late ok...

Keep writing

IQ

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Posted: 16 years ago
MIMI?????
No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hav to b kiddin me...
An FF????u didnt even teme mishma....
Hey-i'll surely read it in ma free time buh hey wat abt da roka FF???
btw m glad u wrote an F here too..
Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*Glares *

How Dare you call it boring missy😳? * asthu shooting dirty looks * 😆

It was Beautiful + Perfect + Breathtaking Amazing + Brilliant + Fantastic + Grand = Enjoyable Update.

I think I got a equation disease😳😆

Chal forget me, your doing a awesome job in your FF, and trust me babes it's a pleasure to read your work. No lies.😳
Is liye, for you a tight jadoo ki jhappi 🤗🤗

Im so jelling, you know jealous to how can you always make your parts so enjoyable to read ki dil maage more😆! Freaking amazing😛.. Hmm; I need tips; Aw come on you can give a little Mimi magic dust to Asthu! * puppy eyes * 😒 * Dia ki trick. Mwahaha! 😈

* Fast-Forward * 😉

* Heart attack *
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* faints * 😲


Gunjan trying to start a convo with samrat! Poor girl bored samrat😆. Chal never mind; it's a teek tak start. 😛

Coming to the bubbly mayur. What outstanding dialogues writers. Wah wah! Taaliya!

🤣 Love Dictionary, You define me 🤣

Just spotting the word dictionary I knew it had to be mayank! And samrat staring at him. Those expressions are so easy to picture rise and ,mayank being proud of the dialogue🤣, Dam! The creatives need to talk to you, they can get interesting scenes, forget talk, they should employee you😎, saachi karan Patel 😉 ki kasam tushe will be full ideal expert👏😳. Back to Mayur;yeh kya??? Bully mayank edited Nupur dialogues. No respect for filmy dialogues😲! People now days BY GOD! But still they are so cute! haiyeeeee 😳


Then Sajan are not behind. Samrat noticing Little things Gunji does. How adorable is that. Oh boy Mimi is fully prepared to kill this bachi. 😲
Gunji saying You're not to bad yourself, minus the ego and you're actually pretty cool. Forget her believing the fact she said it, im still shocked😳. Did I mention how much im loving this gunjan in your FF! Since Samrat is always to Januable.☺️
-Him annoyed at the fact Tamana is always prepared! LOL baby don't you worry soon you will love this habit of her's😆😳
- And him smiling and actually liking what gunjan said to him.
Ego se hatke, liking what gunjan said mein aatke. 😉😆

😲 * im so weird *

😉 Blaming you; its your FF jadoo. 😉

* fast- forward to sajan dance *

MAGICAL😍, Don't think they would be any better word then this girl😛. The way you penned it. Im blown away completely. WOW👏😳! The chemistry was so evident☺️.I really adorable that bit where Samrat felt dancing close with gunjan was different, it felt new and aw he could feel her nervousness. Awhh!! 😳
Samart should of sang this to here
lachak machak ke duur bhatak
Itdi se mud ada ud 😛
or sang the whole masakali song, it would of got her moving! 😳😛
That song is so good! 😳

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Dam! The closeness, samrat didn't let go and perfect song to use for that moment. Beautiful soul. Love you for this. As its one of my favourite tunes😛..
So graceful. Im gone to a la la la Sajan land. 🤪

NOTE: Another reason to love Tamana, seriously she is a Cupid and she forced them to look into eachother eyes.😳😆

Haiyeee you even ended it so fine girl! Sajan drive! Balle balle. The collage stud driving home with the collage goody girl😳 = supercilious interesting.+ a little spicy. 😉😆

I think you must of understood from my komment that how much I loved this update.

Please update soon Mimi; waiting for sajan magic. 😳

Love you babes.

Mwa 🤗


P.s p.s, I wrote a lil bit of ma MU+SG FF, you free enough to read a little, to see how it is, and give me tips for improvement and thanks for the pm once again. 😛
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Happy Vaisakhi 😳🤗
Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: muneefah

MIMI?????

No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hav to b kiddin me...
An FF????u didnt even teme mishma....
Hey-i'll surely read it in ma free time buh hey wat abt da roka FF???
btw m glad u wrote an F here too..

ARREE MUNEE!! Im SOOO sorry! I didnt think you were much into MJHT!!!
Im SORRY!! And I wouldnt really call this an FF, it's gonna end in like.. 5 more parts 😛
I was talking to Hummy the other day, she told me to send her the parts, and she'll post them for Opposites. 😊
Im chorry! I love you hun 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

HI MIMI!!! I LOVE THIS PART!!

WHY A R U SAYED IT BORING???
IM NOT AGREE WID U !!
THIS IS TOO GOOD AND LOVELY!!
LOL....WHEN MAYANK PUT DICTIONARY IN THAT DIALOGUE...LOL!!
AND HE CUTS NUPUR'S FILMY DIALOGUES!!
HA HA HA POOR NUPUR...WE KNOW SHE WILL KILL HIM!!!
I LOVE THE SAJAN'S PARTS
AND THE DIALOGUES B2IN THEM!!
AND................................
KUCH AUR KEHNA BAKI HAI KYA???
....LOL....JUST KIDDING YAAR!!!
THE LAST THING "I LOVE IT"!!!
SO DEAR CONT SOON WHEN U GET TIME!!
SEE YAA!!!
LOVE UUU!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wonderful dear

Hey Sumi! Thank you so much! 😳
gunjan is so good adn sammy dheere dheere line par aa raha hai.
lol couldn't have said it better myself 😆
tamana is so good she just preplanned everything.
Yupp, she's very committed to this play
nupur and mayank are hilarious love like dic.
LOL glad you liked it 😆
hehehe do continue dera
its lovely
Thank you hun!
bye
sumi

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