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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saylithegreat

omg such a cute part how dare u call tht boring?😈

SAYLI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA- you're not mad at me anymore 😃 I knew nobody could stay mad @ the Broccoli Girl 😉😆
sajan for khushi n anmol r just perfect👏
i loved d whole rehersals!!!!!!!!
Thank you!! 😳 Im so glad you liked it!!!! 😃
n mayur r so cute!!!!!!!!!!they r so funny love n dictionary!!!!!!!🤣
LOL did you like it? 😆 It was sooo Mayank to compare love with his kitaabs 🤣
i really like d way nupur pulls dia's leg!!!!!
mimz pull tht leg out only thu nupuz!!!!!!!🤣
LOL *n2s- Only Nupur can pull Dia's leg! LOL
mimz we can also hav sum SaNu intractions!!!😉
wht say?
Of course we can 😃 Ya'll are also in for MaJan/BenJan scenes along with SaNu/SanJi ones 😳
n yeah cuming to d dance thing
oh gosh!!!!!i just loved it!!!!tht song was so perfect
i just kept on dreaming abt them😍😍
they looked so gud!!!!!!!!😍
Thank you Sayliii!! The song was inspired by Janu, she REALLY wanted this song to be in this FF 😆
n yeah looking forward for thier car ride!!!!!😍
😳 hehe im not gonna give much away about that 😉😆
the script tht u hav written mimz is so gud,i mean samrat's as well as gunji's view points r so well expressed!!!!!!!!👏
Thank you babes!!! You're soooo sweeeeet!! *hugs you*
loved everything in this part
a bigggg hugggggggg to u🤗
Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!! *hugs back* Thanks for being SUCH AN AVID//WONDERFUL READER 😃
n no more chappls n dont wry i will tell binu also🤣
😲 LMAO Tell Binu!! JALDI! 🤣
n u better write down all d ideas tht u get,before u 4get them🤣
LOL Haww.. how do yu know I do that?! 🤣🤣
lots of lov🤗
sayli

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

gr8 update and it was not at all boring................

and the dictionary dialouges were very funny..............
continue soon.............

Thank yu so much Anjalika 😳
I'm so glad you liked it dear! *hugs*
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

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OMG Ash! LOL How long is your COMMENT? I need to go make mine longers on yours 😆

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Haiyeeeee mein sadke java !
I like that song 😆
First of all a huge tight big enormous jadoo ki jhappi to u🤗
I LOVE JADOO KI JHAPPI'S! 😃 *jhappi back*
And as always it wa sjsut mindblowing and
mimidii I think I gotta get some classes form you to write FFs
😲 1) Don't EVER say that...Ash, you're still a little baby, and already you can write POETRY! And I read all of your FF in one go last night, but my dad wanted the computer, so I could only coment on the one part. But I wrote down all that I have to say, so could I still post it? 😳

Lolz really You kwn oerfectly what tow write and
teh language teh words it is just awsome!
😆 lol oh my gosh, I have the suckiest vocam in the world. I spend most of my time on thesaurus.com (so does Binu) LMAO
Now someone is going to be much better than Shakespeare😳
😲 LOL even though I dont like him, he's a BRILLIANT writer dude. Don't say that 😛 (although I am flattered 😳😳)

I never imagined Gunjan to be like that
Trying to start a conversation with sam It should ahve been Samart
And Sam got bored tht was sad
haha, I was bored with Gunji being the extreme introvert. So I'm changing her character up a notch. 😉 And dont worry, Sam will start the next convo 😆

BUt I am the smae as Gunjan really boring and my talks are jus random and annoyiong
It happens with me always
LOL you're NOT boring hun! And I get you ... the random talk is like a disease! When I'm talking to someone I dont know, I babble on and on about anything and everything! 😆
Even me had to do this Rome and Juliet Play with one of the boys
😲 Ooh lala, this sounds interesting 😉😆

And then there my situation was ditto as Gunjan we had to go reharsals to teh theatre
every sunday and I wake up at 2 on weeknds as sam wakes up at 3 I wake up at 2 lolz
Had to get up early for a moth and it was soooo annoying!
Hayyeee, aren't you like 12? They make you do Romeo-Juliet at such a young age? 😲 *nods head* The last play I was in.. I was the evil ogress who ate her grandchildren 😆
And omg- I hate waking up early durin' weekends. Im like Sam, getting up @ 3 pm. But my dad woke me up at 10 today, we have to go shopping *ywans* 😆

Lolz same situation reading out all the dialogue sall bored😆
And tehn we had to practice dnace with that mask in the ball
remember where in Rome o and Juiliet there was a ball
Secret confession: I've never read Romeo-Juliet, but I know the story 😆
And yessh- the masked ball! OMG you guys rehearsed that? 😳

And that mask was all annoying me and then the teacher eh si like just keep on staring
into each other's eyes I knw how gunajn was feeling
Same a my situation lolz tehy were looking all away
LOL well I'm glad you can relate the situation to something that happened in your life, it makes it easier to visualize. Im not very good at describing things, I tend to just make it as basic as things can get LOL

Sam all annoyed even I was annoyed and so was taht boy lozl
Sory I keep on getting into my memories instead of your play
LOL aweeh, no worries! 😉😊
yep coming bak mayur DDlj waise those dialogues were hilarious
LOL That's MayUr for ya 😆

Love Dictionary, You define me
I can imagine sma amking all thsoe glares and mayu blushing😳
LOL Mayank was all proud of his dialogues 😆 I dunno why, but that line cracked me up. LOL
Nupur and mayu perfect combination of love and ditionary
Hehe don't they? 😉😆

Mimi dii U looking for a job na
I think u shoulld start writing plays
U will earn almost all ur money in a week for ur holiday
LOL 😲 How did YOU know I was lookin for a job? *shocked* Arreee Ash, you're overestimating my capabilities! If I ever wrote a play, people would LITERALLY throw Binu's chappals at me 😆

Coz u are a real star⭐️
Aweh, hun you're adorable! Thank you so much!!! 😳 You're my ⭐️
Mimi dii If I should be any writer and found u writing
will staright away give u an award!
😲 ASH! Stop it now! LOL You're making me smile to wide.. my jaw hurts now!

And not flattering it is true my jaani
U are doing an awsum job
Keep it up
keep writing
Ash, you're just so so SO sweet! Thank you hun, you totally made my day!

And how can I forget u siad it was boring
Bachi abhi teri jaan leloongi
how the hell can u sya it was boring?
😲 Bachi? lol I'm OLDER than you 😆

It wa steh most freaking awsome part I have ever read.
Aweeh, thank ya so much!
Can't wiat going to his house
Sasuma is gonna be there na
lolz they are gonna hav timings like

Mayu and nupz mum
😆 sasuma! LMAO Ooh Ash, you're so funny! 😆
Sam ki legs pull karte rahenge😆
Ook keep writing

take care
luv ya
ash
Thanks so much for the comments!! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sedna

Do you know what you've done?

LOL what have I done THIS time Janu? 😆

You've made go crazy with this part!!!

😍
😲 *slaps self* NO WAY! 😆

Damn you girl, you're sooo freaking awesome at this writing stuff!!
YECK! No I'm not!! It's so lamee.

It was perfect, no more than perfect, it was MAGICAL,
AWEEEEHH!!! You're like the BEST! It was soo NOT!!

The chemistry is soooo evident, when will they realize it???
😆 I'd like to know that too yaar. *sigh I hope it isnt too late 😕

Tamanna is soo super-awesome!! Yayie for the leads!!!
Im SOOOOOOO happy you like Tamana 😃 I like her too 😳

OMG the slow dance!! and you put beautiful soul!!!! I ❤️❤️ you!!
Hehe, I KNEW you'd like that bit! 😃 <smiles ever so widely
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you moreeeeeeee!!! 😃

I was in dreamland!! 😍
hehe, aweeeh!!

The MayUr parts are sooo cute!!
LOL the MayUr bit was just for you 😉

AHAAHA DICTIONARIES??? That is sooo Mayank!!!
LOL isn't it? 😆 I wanna PM that bit to PD! LOL There's a play sequence planned for MJHT, I'd love if MayUr were writing their dialogues 😆

Man now I pakka can't wait for the next part!!!
Oyee, I wont update unless you don't update Opposites! (it feels so weird saying that, because my old FF was Opposites 😆)

What do you have in store for me babay???
lol a lot moree babay 😉

ILYMOREST!!
ILYMORESTER 😆 haha- beat that 😉

Janu!

P.S. I can't retrieve the files, I tried but no luck! It's all in mind so i'll write it again!
That SUCKS! You remember what to write na? I bet it'll be BETTER this time!
Update soooooooooooooooooooner than sooooooooooooooooon! I'll be stalking you 😉😆


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Posted: 16 years ago
YAYAYAY! *runs to re-reply* lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gosh...i m so behind *cries*
RESERVED!!! Have to reply to part 2,3 & 4!!!
Editted - part 2
MIMI🤗 Really srry for replying after centuries I m giving u permission to use my danda on me 😆😆 hehehhe. I feel so embarrased....i m first one on ur pm list but last one to comment n that too after ages!!!!!! *PITTO MUJHE DANDE SE*😆😆
Okay lemme get straight to my comments before u throw me out of ur FF😆😆
-Awesum awesum update. Beautifully written *claps*
- Oooo Spring Dance......the second i read Spring dance, i was off to sajan land😍 So many cute scenes on thier way😳 *faintzzzzz*
-Haaaaaaaaaye my sammy boy not so good boy😭😭 Too much attitude. Hehehehe but still i liked how he was not interested in looking for his date😆😆 which hintzzz gunjan will be his partner awhhh😳 too excited. I also liked his dissapointment on DIA being his partner if he dont find anyone else😆😆 Feels so goood!!!😆😆
-OMG benji n sam r soo mean😭 I expected sam to be mean but BENJI??😲 For a second i thought benji was serious...but noooo he wasn't. I'd like to add one more thing here...u have shown sam as a perfect stud👏👏 which is wat making me hate him now😳 and benji too. They better get lovable in next part😆😆
-Awhh poor gunjan...always being bossed around by DIA Loved how she stands up but then later she backs off😭😭
-LMAO @ puppy dog eyes😆😆 i started picturing her like that!!!
-Hahaha uday is soo cutee...😆😆😆 he likes Mrs. Tamana😆 but again her DEEDS had to spoilt it😆😆
-Gosh the last line by gunjan....she is such a sweetheart😳AWWWing big time😳
-LOWEED this part👏👏👏
-Loved how u showed innner-feelings of both sam n gunjan.
-I was imagining all this in my head so clearly😊 which shows ur talent n writing skills👏👏👏
Me off to read PART 3. DAMN excited😛 Expecting lot of cute scenes😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part....loved it.im speechless
keep it up n update soon
x
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Posted: 16 years ago
LOL P3, it's okay!!
Don't worry about it! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved reading the part! can't wait for more sajan scenes; cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Mimz srry went to had dinner. Edited my huge comment on last page. But that was for part 2 only😆 I m off to read part 3 now.

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