FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 22

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

Part 3

Must say the longest part u have ever written and the most amazing one too

Longest one- YES! And most amazing- NO! 😆 Im not a good writer Ash, I just try to pour put my imagination in some way before I go mad 😆

Haiyeee 1st the fall I just can't stop myslef frm imagining all this the way u write is absoulete mindblwing👏

Aweeh, you liked it?! *hugs you* Im so glad to hear (well read) that!! 😃

Ok bak to my senses all tht was happening butterfiles in my stomach gettinng goosebumps!

LOL Ash, you're so cutee! 😆 Butterflies/Goosebumps! awee!

oye hoyee I bet this might be for 2 mins but it seemed longer for them

their feelings like ouch hurting my ribs aww poor sam

beautiful I can imagine her😳😳

Awweeeeh!! Yeah, it was a few seconds but probably years and decades for them 😳😆

But bechare pe tht stupid wig might be quite annoying

LOL kai, how about in this FF, Gunji has no wig? 😆 I hate that wig so much 😡

I bet every girl watching all this from a corner might be jealous!😆

hehehe, of courseee! LOL esp. Dia 😆

ufff elbows hurt happened to me once

but usko toh kuch feel hi nahi ho raha tha

he was lost in her looks

Ouch! Elbow crushing your ribs? I hate it when that happens! 😡 I had a trip and fall situation with one of my friends a few months back. It was SO painful 😆

Why did they get up?

benji didn't notice tht shocking one

he wuld keep teasing her

LOL Benji=King of airheads 😆 LOL

And poor gunji happened to her during talent parade

and sammy nodding his head haiyee

how adorable can they get

Aweeeehh! Blesh 😳

Ok now the cupid has got wonderful ideas

And perfect eyesight to notice the best future couple in the world

LOL GOOOO MS.TAMANA!!!!! *whoot* 😆

Waise bhiit wuld be difficlut to find 2 talented people in excel college

LOL in Sammy's eyes, it's almost IMPOSSIBLE 😆

do j the made them dialogue writers

becahre nupz ke toh sapne hi chur chur ho gaye!

I can imangine their dialogues for sajan

gunjan: sadu

samrat: nautanki

and then suddenly she starts talking abt her future sons wid sam

shahid, srk lolz ab play ko toh by god kya batao kya hoga!

Hats off to her brain for thinking tht

and Iam sure in her play ish gonna be quite intersting

😆🤣 OMG I love your dialogues! OMG I was gonna use sumfin similar.. here's a scoop (I sound like PD LMAO) ssshhh, dont tell anyone: MayUr will get in an argument while writing dialogues, and then then they'll fight in words 😆

Keep updating

and do pm me mimi dii

luv

ash

I will add you to the PM list right now! Thank you so much for reading and commenting Ash! Love you <3

Originally posted by: naz17555

omGGGG mimzzz carry onnnnnnnn its amazing, super , fab! just wowoowow! cant get enuff! i can imagine it alll!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for the next part! ur keeping me on edge!

and u write sooo beautifully!!!!!!!!👏⭐️

Originally posted by: blushpink13

Hi chocopie!

Hey IQ! How are ya!?

What an amzing, FAB, Mindblasting update!

Aweeeh, thank you sweets! 😳

Finally got to read it?phewww dad's not home?.lmao?.

LOL you evil girl 😆

Im seriously loving this POV system its very neat!

Im SOO happy to hear (well, read) that!! =D

Finally ms tamana has arrived so YAY!!!

hehe *breaks into a dance* 😆

Adding that SaJan Fall bit was beautiful.

You liked it? Aweeh, thank you!

The best thing is Benji's there too.

😆 Haha, aweee my Benji lover, Im happy that you're happy! 😊

SaJan has alrede started feeling for eachother?Sizzling Chemistry is ahead!

lol not literally falling for each other as of yet, just small eyelocking moments 😳

The update suree was long but still was less for me as Sajanian 's love is infinite?.lmao..

LOL I know, it was such a long part *yawns* I wont make 'em that long from now on, I just had a lot to write to get the story moving 😆 But it's so nice to know that you enjoyed it 😳

The expressions and situations are described very well. I think this is the best way to do it.

Haiiee, thank you jaan! Personally, I get so bored of writing in one character's POV, unless i am super into it, but knowing me.. I never stick to one thing. But alternating the POVs helps me stay interested 😉

Although im onli reading everything but everything is beautifully explained that I can clearly see everything?

Aweee *hugs* thank you hun! HUGE compliment!

And my apologies, couldn't make sigs for publicity?lmao..will do em after the tests.

LOL arree, I was joking about that 😆 You dont have to LOL focus in SCHOOL! 😉😆

Thanks for a cute, lovely update

IQ

Thank ya IQ, you rock hun! 😉

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

sorry for commenting late........hope u'll forgive me this time.......i'm really sorry

Dristhi, yaar.. please don't say sorry! If you dont want me to get mad, no formalities kai? 😉

OMG OMG OMG!!!! what an amazing part!!!!!!!

OMG thank you! 😆

it was awesome........ur a wonderful writer...... i love ur imagination!!!

haha, im imagination is wild. Im more of the "Go crazy" type- but im trying to get serious with this FF

i could literally see everything happening in front of me!!!

aweeh really?! OMG thank you! *hugs*

the sajan fall was soooo cute and well written.......i just can't get enough of your FF........its brilliant!!!!

LOL aweh, you're so adorable! Thank you yaar, you made my day 😊

thanks for the PM and plzzzzzz don't make us wait too long for ur next update.......continue soon

LOL no problems, and Ill update tonight (I hope)

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HIIII HOW R U??? HOPE U R FINE!!

Hey Monica, Im good, and yourself? 😊

WAS WAITING 4 UR UPDT!!

lol were you really?

WOW!! GUNJI ON TOP OF SAMMY!! "HAAYEE!!!

Hahahah, aweeh.. you're so excited huh? 😆 So cute! 😳

WOW! SAMMY LOST IN HER EYES!!

AND GUNJI ALSO....SAMMY NODED!!

SO CUTEY PART!!

Thank you so much babes! *higs*

AND MAYUR IDHAR BHI FIGHTING!!! "laughs"

LOL MayUr fight everywhere, they wouldnt be MayUr without 'em 😆

LOVE WHEN SAMMY SAYS "GUNJAN U CRASHING INTO ME A LOT TODAY"

Aweeh, thank you for liking! 😃

THIS MISS TAMANA IS GREAT ...CUTE TYPE!!!

ME ALSO WANT THIS TEACHER IN MY SCHOOL!...LOL!!!

LOL Shanti grasshopper, an angel disguised as a teacher will surely come into thy life 😉😆

OK CONT SOON!! WHEN U GET TIME!!

TAKE CARE!! SEE U SOON!!

Thank you so much for the comment hun! 😊