FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 21

* holding ears * Im cholly for the late komment mimi!🤗 🤗Now that you have a big heart I think you must of have forgiven me!😳😆

Chal lets talk about your update now. Eheh!! 😛

Is there a better word then perfect to describe it, do pm me girl cause my brain is just screaming perfect perfect perfect BY GOD!😳😆 I so adore this POV writing thing of yours. They made me smile and wanna read more and more, kya kare dil mange more! LOL!! 😆😆
Amazing start, all buzzing around in the hall to see the new babe like dodo bhaiya says! Chalo thank god that Tamana isn't a perv and didn't fall for the collage studs! Now I wont have any random thinking floating around me. 🤣

For a second, she seemed like the most beautiful woman I had ever seen in my life.

Uff! What a scene. 😍

Fall+ Thoughts = Attraction☺️. Loved the way you penned the whole situation and their POV, specially samrats! Killed me there!😳 Just a fall was needed and yes the feeling volcano explored! So freaking breathtaking beautiful. 😍
YAY! Nupur meri sheerni, Go and tell that dia off, bring the Miss im to good down on earth, cut her wings🤪, mwahahahahah! EVIL PLANS! 😈

*Fast-forward *😆😳

I love Ms Tamana! She is a true cupid! Getting the love birds closer. Mayur dialogue writers! I can sense some intense lines! Girl you know how to impress your readers! 👏😳

Love you🤗🤗
&+ Thank you for the pm and keep pmin me pleasee😛

Originally posted by: Asthuox

* holding ears * Im cholly for the late komment mimi!🤗

Arreee, you're only like 1 day late! LOL No problems Ashtu! *hugs you back*

🤗Now that you have a big heart I think you must of have forgiven me!😳😆

LOL I was NEVR mad at you to begin with hun ;) haha

Chal lets talk about your update now. Eheh!! 😛

hehe, teek hai ;)

Is there a better word then perfect to describe it, do pm me girl cause my brain is just screaming perfect perfect perfect BY GOD!

HAI! NO way! Perfect is soooo not a word I'd EVER use to describe this FF! By God Astha, tu bhi na! lol

😳😆 I so adore this POV writing thing of yours. They made me smile and wanna read more and more, kya kare dil mange more! LOL!! 😆😆

LOL thank you so much! Im so glad you liked it! No confusion right? Hehe, you're so cute! I like writing from diff POV's, it keeps me interested. lol
Amazing start, all buzzing around in the hall to see the new babe like dodo bhaiya says! Chalo thank god that Tamana isn't a perv and didn't fall for the collage studs! Now I wont have any random thinking floating around me. 🤣

LMAO!! What were you thinking? 🤣 Wait, do I wanna know? LOL No no, she's a mum remember? ;)

For a second, she seemed like the most beautiful woman I had ever seen in my life.

Gunjan. Beautiful.

Uff! What a scene. 😍

OMG Im guessing that was one of the favourites of this part 'ey? So many people quoted that line *blush* If ya'll love broken sentences, I can add SO much more of that! LMAO

Fall+ Thoughts = Attraction☺️. Loved the way you penned the whole situation and their POV, specially samrats! Killed me there!😳 Just a fall was needed and yes the feeling volcano explored!

OMG you're like my twin! I always sort out everything with equations 🤣I loved that one! It's basically the whole summary ;)

Im so glad you liked it!

So freaking breathtaking beautiful. 😍

Aweeeh, thank you SOOO much!
YAY! Nupur meri sheerni, Go and tell that dia off, bring the Miss im to good down on earth, cut her wings🤪, mwahahahahah! EVIL PLANS! 😈

LMAO 🤣🤣🤣 Ashtuu, you're TOO funny! hahahahahaha, oh my gosh- gotta love this evil side of yours!

*Fast-forward *😆😳

^LOL! Pause. Play. Rewind. Forward. Okay, I'll stop now! LMAO get it? 🤣 (oh gosh, im so lame)

I love Ms Tamana! She is a true cupid! Getting the love birds closer.

Hehe, defo, she's the cupid in this story ;) Glad you liked her.

Mayur dialogue writers! I can sense some intense lines! Girl you know how to impress your readers! 👏😳

LOL I was writing their part the other day, and I couldnt stop laughing. All I can say is, MayUr will make this play... unforgettable ;)

Whats up with people laughing seeing a girl nervous. PFFT! Go Ms Tamana to the rescue! Give them a dirty glare! Im join. * dirty glare * Poor gunjan.😒

People can be so stupid sometimes. I wish there were more "evil glarers" like you and Tamana! LOL
Awh samrat the little support and encourage wind😛😆! The little nod, very cute!

haha, aweeeh- glad you liked it! XD

And WOW! Im in heaven, Ms Tamana could feel the buzz between the two 😳and Im sure Ms Cupid knows how to get them together after she has found her protagonists.

I Love this teacher! Jai ho!

Haha, aweeh Asthu-stop guessing my future plots! *glares* 🤣 Im so happy you liked Ms. Tamana, Im trying to liven her character up as much as I can!

Now since Samrat has already started to develop a soft corner for gunji😍, I can sense a beautiful bond between them when the whole play track will rock on!

I sureee hope so yaar! Im gonna put my everything into the play part.

Sajan alone! Im sure sammy will be a darling and help Ms Don't touch me!😉

LOL you still remember that line? hahahaha

And Mayur alone writing away! I can sense the fight over what to write! LOL!

LOL you're in for a ride with MayUr ;) hehe, imma add 'em to the next part! This is gonna be fun! =D

Update soon warna my danda! 😆😈

HAWW!!! I have 4 potential killers after me with their chappals and danda's! 🤣
Love you🤗🤗
&+ Thank you for the pm and keep pmin me pleasee😛

Love you too hun! *hugs* And of coursee I will keep PMing you ;)

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Hi chocopie!

What an amzing, FAB, Mindblasting update!

Finally got to read it…phewww dad's not home….lmao….

Im seriously loving this POV system its very neat!

Finally ms tamana has arrived so YAY!!!

Adding that SaJan Fall bit was beautiful.

The best thing is Benji's there too.

SaJan has alrede started feeling for eachother…Sizzling Chemistry is ahead!

The update suree was long but still was less for me as Sajanian 's love is infinite….lmao..

The expressions and situations are described very well. I think this is the best way to do it.

Although im onli reading everything but everything is beautifully explained that I can clearly see everything…

And my apologies, couldn't make sigs for publicity…lmao..will do em after the tests.

Thanks for a cute, lovely update

IQ

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

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Hey Ash! 😆 Omg, half edited? Aweeh, I didnt know you were reading this FF 😛 Makes me feel SOO special 😳

Part 1

By god ur nicnames are hilarious. And I am glad u wrote FF yaar!

Aweh, thank you so much 😆 LOL But I didnt nicky myself, credit goes to all my crazy friends. 😆

very talented girl vmz siggies ffs!

Aweeeeeh *blush* Thank ya

Uff toot toot ke talent phhot raha hai!

don't mind my hindi ish quite bad

LOL *falls of chair laughing* Hahah, Ash, babes.. if you think your hindi is bad.. then I wonder what you'll think about my hindi! 😆

And loved ur idea

ur FF is quite unique and also amazing

the idea of ms. tamana is mindblowing

Aweeh, thank you so much babes! *hugs*

Siddhant was wondering who her husbad wuld hav been dodo?

Wow the dodo has a son called siddhant

LOL Im not gonna give away who Tamana's hubby is.. yet. It's gonna be more towards the end 😆 But good guess! Nobody's asked that before! LOL

I am sure he shuld hit his so called dia aunty who wuld be drooling over his ranji(he is the new guy)

LOL

1) HAHAHAHA, I sooo wanna add a Dodo telling of Dia part 😆

2)I like this new guy, he's too good for Dia 😆

And awsum explanination helps myself to imagine it!😳

Aweh, thank ya hun! Muahz!

Keep writing

luv

ash

Part 2

bY GOD SPRING DANCE

Neevr heard abt tht sounds interesting

😲 You've never heard of the Spring Dance? We just had one a week back (that's where I got my inspiration from 😉😆)

And mimi dii hats off to the way u add all those feelings for both samrat and gunjan

Ash! Gosh, thank ya so much! How many more times am I gonna say that today? 😆 Im so glad you liked it! Hope it's not confusing hun, lemme know if it is!

And that line abt dia true gunji shuld really do this

honey doll sab nikal jayega lolz

LOL 😆 I see we've got a Dia hate club goin' on 😆

anyways sam wuld neva find the perfect girl accept gunjan

but he ended up on loud screeched girl dia

Ugh, I know. Sam is always in the wrong places @ the wrong time! 😆

Ab Ms. tamana is gonna be interesting

an dthe bakcgorund song can imagine all that happening in front of my eyes!

Im SOO glad you liked the song, it's one of my favourites. I like this version more than the orginal 😛

and killer looks theys ound quite scary I will be totally freake dout

LOL I can imagine you, lil Ash being glared at 😆

can't wait to read the next part

luv

ash

Thank you so much for reading the FF Ash, you're so sweet! 😳

-- Mimi dii