FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 112

tell me about it Radz.

Mimzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! about bloomin timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lmao!!!!!!!!!!!! and wow what an amazing end!!!!!!!! i sooo loved reading ur ff! has to be one of the most exepetionally well written ff's around! absoutle beautiful! i didnt even want it to end! lolzz

An Awesome End Mizzy

Shall Reply Later

Plz Remind me to Unreserve

Finally Mimi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG I feel like melting right now!

So Im looking through all the comments, and BY GOD I have some major essay writing to do huh? 🤣 and this time around, Asthu didn't even comment :'(

i am speechless!!!!!!!!!😲

{Evils}

you finally ended this baby! How could you end it! {Triple glares}

OMG {Emotional moment} someone grab a tissue box for me.

"I really dislike you for ending this"

Damm Mimi, too much! You penned down ever single emotion, scene so magnificently. I'm completely dumbstruck. I don't what to say. I felt like I was drowned into a magical adventure at the same time as reading the update furthermore that I was in attendance at each particular moment that Samrat, Gunjan, or both of them shared. {Standing ovation to your style of writing}

@ Samrat- I love the way you portrayed his feelings, his hidden emotions, and how he interacted with his parents. The lava of anger explored and he had the chance to transport his view. I have also mentioned this; I adore the way you pen down Samrat feelings. It's so real, absolutely natural. Us readers can understand him better and discern behind the cool dude there is a normal guy who desires for family love, who wants to be understood in addition to be seen for the real him.

OMG, I was completely taken back reading the units never attended any school related meetings of Samrat not even his graduation furthermore even forgot his birthday. How affliction it must be to handle all this pain.

'She touches my face, and for that one millisecond, I forget all those years that I've craved for that reassuring touch. I forget all those years I looked out the window, hoping that they'd make it home in time for dinner. All I can feel now is the warmth of a loved one. The warmth of... my mother.'

{Fast-forward}

His feelings on Gunjan. I just esteemed the way you wrote the realizing piece. It was so dazzling. I was so lost in it. The typical wondering on the street nevertheless it still felt like a new thing. Annoyed with finding no answers for such over weighted questions and then the part were you introduced the FF name. Brilliant! The answers to all questions. The simple dare you to move holds such power to bring the light to the questions surrounded in the dark.

@GunPur- I have said this so many times before you're a master in laying out emotions of the characters in such beauty, it's amazing. The sister bond was so delightful. Nupur is a ideal sister, the bracelet scene was very touching and the line "but most importantly, follow your heart. Your heart is never wrong Gunjan, never" and samrat's darling chasmish does!

@ Imagining Samart- his hands brush over her cheeks {goosebumps} then the RV-Gun dinky scene was cute!

OMG Samrat missing and Benji to replace him! Aw Benji is such a darling rockstar!

{Fast-forward}

CONFESSION! CONFESSION!

{Shivers}

Samrat grand entry + the dialogues! Nupur and Mayank must have been gob smacked. What heart melting, full of emotions and amorous lines. Gunjan wanting to leave, very her.

" Gunjan means going back to being the old Samrat. No Gunjan means no more complications. No more hiding, no more lying. No Gunjan means everything going back to normal. No Gunjan means no more being myself. No more happiness...no more genuine smiles. No more cooking meals to impress her, no more using the "car" excuse to walk her home, no more watching her expressions when she's nervous, no more bike rides...No Gunjan means going back to before. I don't want that." tremendously described thoughts! Loved it each and every one!

DHAN TAN, TAANANA! {Shahid kapoor} 😍

The 3 magic words. "I love you Gunjan" Oh how romantic! I literally died on my chair along with the tight hug! {Dies twice}
Lmao on the full on wide teeth smile. Get in their Gunji! Aw, the audience cheering and Tam Mama, I miss her! She is a sweetheart!

@Week later. Loved how you penned down Gunji thoughts! How real on recalling back her and Samrat's interaction, certainly not in their wild dreams the both would have imagined they would end up together.

@Dia- I adore this girl in your FF now and truly love her in the show. Can she get any cuter and understanding! OMG her and RV! How I wished this happened in the show! They were so lovable!

Tam-Uday+ ADORABLE! Poor Uday in the show simply got a broken heart!

@DANCE! I remember you telling me through a pm a rain dance at the end! Magnificently penned down! Such passion filled and the rain makes it even more romantic! {Shivers} I want this in the show now! Oh my have you seen the new SBS monaya interview! Haha Mohit on Sanaya's lap on the swing. They are so cute! And OMG sajan tight hug! {Melting}

Ph my Tam sees them. Privacy women! Haha

@Sid-Tam-Uday- FAMILY? OMG! I thought it might have been Nupur narrating the story not Tam! Aw bless the small cute family!

Perfectly ended! ⭐️ I will deffo miss this FF a lot! You better write your new one soon! You said some time in august! October is nearly ending girl! Hurry, Mimi Jaddoo is needed! This DYTM roller coaster ride was something that can never be forgotten, just can't help craving for another one.