AK FF:Chalte Chalte! UPDATES: pg45 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica18

wonderful part plz continue.



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mar-

grt part plsss continue sooon

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Posted: 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part.. continue soon..

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear its awesome and wonderful part

ranbir is so bad and rude too poor kanya
i hope kripa accept the proposal and hopefully she also loves him
i hope angad make her realize that she also loves him
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
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Im glad u liked this part... Hmmm Rankan. LOL😆😆😆Thats his nature!

Hmmm about the proposal read the next bit😉 LOVE😕😕😕 she doesnt know what it is hmmm angad will defo make her realise!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome part.. really hope tht Kripa doesn reject the proposal.. looking forward to the next part.. do continue soon...



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

O wow. Kanya and Ranbir were funny! Ranbir is a sweet brother and Muskaan did say a little too much but how cud Rahul think of Josh like tht?! LOL Jealous..........LOl Aww Angad loves Kripa but im afraid she dusnt?? The precap is awesome........... Cont soon and PM me. Harji



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Rankan😆😆😆 Im glad u liked it! hmmm ranbir is a swt bro and mussu just gone crazy behind josh... well rahul knows something bout josh so want to protect her! Josh😆 hmmm yeah AK lovestory one sided for now...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: j44a

Hey ...

Just caught up wid ur ff..
Itz just simply awesome... Loved it....
Noa just hope Kirpa sayz yes....
Poor Rahul , feel sad foa him.....
N Ranbir is a little too strict .. seemz like Kanya will change him...
Continue soon.. N plz pm me wen u update.. Thx....
Jess



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Hmmm poor rahul but soon it'll be okay😛
Rankan she has to change him, but how will they end up togetehr?😕😕😕

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sasik

awesome part.

Thanks for pm.
update soon.



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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey everyone! sorry for the late update just been hectic and plus my internet givin me beans.. hope u like this half part!

Part 5 (first half)

"thank you… and mera mission unhe pagal karne ka nahi hai, unse peecha churane ka hai… samjhi" kripa grins and muskaan looks at her.

"peecha churane ka hai…" she mimicks her "pagal, chachi teri jaan le lengi… tu jaanti hai kaun aa raha hai?" she teases

kripa pierces her eyes "nahi… aur jaanne ka faida bhi kya hai?? Waise bhi main unki chutti kardoongi"

"tu jab dekhe gi ke kaun hai to teri chutti ho jayegi… I can bet on that" muskaan smirks.

Kripa looks at her suspiciously "kaun aa raha hai? Kya main usse jaanti hoon?" she asks trying to fish it out.

"haan bohot acche se, aur woh tujhe pasand bhi hai, waise bhi tujhe jaanne ki kya zaroorat hai?" she teases and leaves.

"hmpphh, Kaun ho sakta hai?" she stomps her foot.

**********

Angad was over excited, he couldn't believe what was actually happening, he was going to propose for kripa and chances were that she'll say ya…

"oh god, im so nervous rahul… woh haan hi kahegi na?"

"angad, yeh hazaarwi baar pooch chukka hai tu, don't worry woh haan hi kahegi"

Kanya also laughs…

He looks in the mirror again, he was wearing a casual turquoise colour top and jeans "main theekh to lag raha hoon na?"

Rahul nodds his head "god, bhai aap wohi pehen lo jo aap ka initial idea tha… sherwani" kanya and rahul burst out laughing.

"tum dono has rahe ho, you don't know how nervous I am"

"bhai aap bohot acche lag rahe ho… you look fab! Who can refuse angad khanna?"

"thanks but its not helping…" he says as his heart keep pumping harder and harder.

Naina comes and admires her son "beta tu bohot accha lag raha hai… Chal, der ho rahi hai"

And they leave.

***********

kripa was still trying to figure who it could be… After a short 20 mins a car arrives, kripa runs to the window to see but she cant see anyone. Then muskaan comes to take her and they both go down.

Angad's heart skips a beat seeing her, she was looking beautiful.

Kripa looks up immediately and is shell shocked to see angad, rahul, kanya and naina aunty…

"maine kaha tha na teri bolti band ho jayegi usse dekh kar… angad likes you" muskaan whispers in kripa's ear as kripa is still shocked.

They sit down and naina admires kripa.

"kripa, tum to hamesha humari beti jaise thi lekin aaj hum tumhe apni bahu bana na chahte hain"

They discuss everything, kripa is still just looking down, angad is worried as she didn't even look at him once. Rahul was on the same sofa with angad.

"kya hua bhai bolti band hogayi?"

"rahul… woh mujhe dekh kyun nahi rahi? Kuch keh kyun nahi rahi? Kya usse yeh rishta manzoor nahi?"

rahul notices and realizes that angad is right normally kripa is all over but today she's so quite "I think shrma rahi hai, kehte hain ladkiyan aisi cheezon mein both sharmati hain"

angad tries to believe that.

"kripa… angad ko apna kamra dikha ke aao… usne kabhi dekha nahi hoga, aur kuch der akele mein baatein bhi karlo" malika commands.

Kripa starts walking and angad follows, he tries to talk but she's just walking ahead. They reach the room.

"kripa, kya tum iss rishtey se khush nahi ho?" angad asks her worried.

"angad… aisi baat nahi hai, lekin main abhi shaadi aur pyar ke bare mein nahi soch sakhta… tum to jaante ho ke mujhe pehle apni life banani hai phir yeh sab…"

after a short silence "main intezaar karne ke liye tayar hoon…"

kripa looks up at him "angad, I don't want to get into any commitments and angad waise bhi shaadi ke baad relation badal jaate hain, I don't want to loose a friend like you… please don't mind but I've never looked at you in that way, in my life partner… never"

angad feels disheartened but tries to hide it "kripa, yeh rishta zabardasti nahi hai, the choice is yours… tum agar kaho gi ke tumhe yeh shaadi nahi karni, koi kuch nahi kahega… okay" he tries to make her understand.

"now smile…" he tells her. "come on, please" and she smiles.

"thanks angad, for understanding"

"anytime, chalo ab sabko faisla sunate hain"

they both go down and kripa tells them that she doesn't want to get married to angad, naina feels really bad and thinks kripa done a very rude thing by saying no to her son.

They leave.

"mere bete ko ek se ek ladkiyan mil sakti hain, samajh ti kiya hai apne aap ko… main nahi jaanti thi ke kripa aisi hai, accha hai shaadi ke pehle pata chalgaya… warna pata nahi kya hota!" naina mummers frustrated and angad just feels really heartsore, kanya and rahul also feel really bad…

Few days angad doesn't go to college and kripa misses him.

"rahul… angad kahan hai?"
"oh bhai, woh to America gaye hain, ek week ke liye…"

she feels bad "Kyun?"

"uske best friend ki wedding hai"

she smile relieved "oh okay"

at home kripa is sitting on her window pane:

"najaane angad kaisa hoga? Kyun aise achanak chalagaya? Kya sach me sirf dost ki shaadi ke liye gaya hai? Ya mujhe ignore karne keliye? Lekin god main kya karoon I just have no intention of getting married at the moment and no time to think about anybody… then she thinks "lekin abhi main kya kar rahi hoon? I'm thinking of angad? Why?"

she cant get answers to her queries and finally falls of to sleep.

Angad in Goa…

Angad was at the khannas beach house relaxing trying to get all the things out of his head…

"kyun kripa?? Kyun? kyun tum mujhse pyar nahi kar sakhti? Main apne pehle pyar ko kaise bhulapaoonga? Kya karoon main? Kab tak yahan reh sakhta hoon? I have to go back! I will go and face kripa… its not her fault that she doesn't love me! I have to go back!" he decides and falls of to sleep with kripa's photo in his hand!

That's it for now… I know guys that was a small crappy one but I'm just trying to go over the next bit so I can update it! Will update by tomorrow! Hope u like this one and please comment/criticize!

Luv

Nadz

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