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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey... Great part....
Poor Angad .. Hope Kirpa realizes her love foa him soon..
N also wish Naina will understand her so tht she wont be any prob between AK in the future..
COntinue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice part!!!!!!!!

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feel sorry 4 angad...
hope naina doesn't create any probs!!!!!!!!!
cont soon.....
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Part 5: Second half:

Kripa and muskaan were sitting in kripas room & kripa was crying "do hafte ho chuke hain aur mum…" she cries "Mum ab bhi mujhe maaf nahi karsakhti? Kyun? Maine aisa kya ghalat kardiya muskaan?" she hugs muskaan while muskaan comforts her

"Kripa malika aunty jald hi theek ho jayengi… unhe bas thoda waqt de tu" muskaan tries to assure.

"Muskaan tune dekha na mum ne aaj bhi mujhse kaise baat ki" she cries and recalls what happened after dinner:

Kripa tries to talk to her but she shouts at her "Just leave me alone! Main tumse baat nahi karna chahti! Aaj tumhari wajah se meri aur naina ki barso purani dosti toot gayi… 'MAIN'" she highlights the word "Malika Nanda usse gari gari phone karke maafiyan maang rahi hoon, sirf tumhari wajah se" she told her off angrily.

Kripa was already in tears "mom please, Im sorry… maine kaha na, try to understand" she pleaded.

"mujhe kuch nahi suna ya samajhna, Tum na ab khud ki zindagi jjee lo main interfere nahi karoongi! Jab shaadi ka irada ho to karlena aur haan mujhe invite karne ki koi zaroorat nahi kyunki mujhe tumhari shaadi mein aana bhi nahi!" she told her and left angrily.

Muskaan feels sorry "woh abhi gusse mein hain isliye aisa kehrahi hain lekin dekhna jald hi theekh ho jayengi" she assures her and kripa gets kind of convinced.

"kripa tu ro mat, warna mujhe bhi rona aa jayega" she says childishly and they both laugh.

"thank you muskaan, you're the best sister anyone can ever have" they hug.

Kripa couldn't sleep thinking of what's been happening, was she not allowed to choose what she wanted in life? Why cant she decide her lifes story herself? She wants to write all the pages on her own not being forced to and then regret that decision… She thought

While looking out the window she saw it was a full moon and it was beautiful! She stared at it for a while trying to get answers… then suddenly she saw all the flashbacks of her and Angad together, laughing, talking… she smiled at the images.

"main Angad ke bare mein kyun soch rahi hoon?" she thinks confused "shayad ek dost ki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai isliye" she smiles and confirms her thought, he was just a FRIEND and could never be more then that… with her thoughts, confusions and dreams in her eyes she falls off to sleep.

Next morning was a bright Sunday morning, the day the whole family would be together, the day they all spend together and enjoy… she decides to impress her mom with breakfast (although she cant cook. LOL) she looks at the time it was only 7:15am

"Maharaj… Aaj mom ki sab favourite dishes banana hain" she informs him and also shocks him by being up so early and stepping in the kitchen (LOL) she gets the maids to set the table and decorate it a little. By 9:00am the breakfast is ready!

She smiles to herself when everything was set "aaj to mom se baat karke rahoongi"

Just then Big D comes down to see whats for breakfast and she's also shell shocked seeing kripa "KRIPA TU?"

Kripa gets annoyed by the behaviour "ab itna bhi shocking nahi hai Big d"

Big D smiles "to yeh saara breakfast tu ne banaya hai?" she asks shocked opening the lid of the gobhi parathas and smelling them. Obviously she knew it couldn't be kripa.

"maine 'banwaya' hai" she fills her in.

"mmmm, kya khushboo hai" she attempts to take a bite but kripa stops her.

"koi zaroorat nahi hai… yeh sab mom ke liye hai to pehla bite wahi lengi" she warns and big d makes a innocent face, then smiles.

"ohhh… ab samjhi, yeh sab malayi marne ke liye hai" she nodds her head.

"hmmm…" she smiles innocently and Big D hugs her and kisses her forehead.

"meri chotisi bachi ab kitni bari aur samajdar hogayi hai" she smiles.

"patanahi mom kyun nahi samajh ti yeh baat"

"samajh jayegi, samajh jayegi… usse thoda waqt de"

"Big D… Kya maine sachme koi bohot bari galati kardi hai?" she asks with teary eyes.

"pagli…" she taps her head a little "tune kuch galat nahi kiya hai, puri zindagi uske saath tujhe guzarni hai to uss Mr. Right ka faisla bhi tujhe hi karna hai" she assures her and kripa blushes 'Mr. RIGHT Who could it be? Her MR. RIGHT..'

"Thank you Big D… You're the best" she pulls her cheeks

"Who to mujhe pata hai" she shows off and they both laugh and krips gives her another quick hug. Malika stands and looks at them sternly and walks away to the table.

Kripa's face goes pale again, but Big D tells her to smile!

Everyone sits on the table, Ranbir also comes "Morning bhayya" kripa greets him and opens his chair indicating him to sit, he just smiles moves his hand on her hair and sits "morning chutki… to aaj breakfast mein kya hai?"

"hmmm, aaj to bohot kuch bana hai… Palak Paneer, ghobi ke parathe, makai ke dal, rajma, puri aur kheer! Aur haan Wara pau" she explains the menu while malika's mouth waters all her favourite dishes. "wow, saari mom ki favourite dishes" Ranbir exclaims and malika just looks away with tinnii Winnie smile (tiny smile)

Ranbir says all the ebst to kripz and she goes to serve her mom, "mom aap kya lengi?"

"Manju isse kehdo ke main uske haath se nahi lena chahti" kripa gets upset.

"manju inse kehdo ke aaj ka breakfast to main hi inhe serve karoongi" she says stubbornly and Ranbir, Big D, muskaan and the rest of the family laugh.

malika grimaces "manju isse kehdo ke mere saath over smart act karne ki koshish na kare"

kripa smiles "manju inse kehdo ke woh mujhe ab aur ignore nahi karsakhti…"

kripa serves her, malika just quietly eats it while everyone is talking muskaan starts telling malika about a incident in college "….aur phir na Rahul ne to uski band hi bajaa di"

malika laughs "aur phir uss ladke ka kya hua?"

"phir rohi…" kripa tries to continue but malika cuts her off abruptly "Ranbir phir uss deal ka kya hua?"

kripa feels really bad and runs away to her room and Ranbir gets really pi**** off " mom aap itna over react kyun kar rahi hain?"

"Ranbir I don't want to talk about this" she gets up and leaves to her room.

It was two weeks since naina last spoke to her, they had been so happy to turn there friendship into a relationship but all there dreams were shattered because of kripas ideas and dreams.

She calls naina once again, she was still trying to convince naina to not break there friendship for such a minor thing.

"come on, Naina we've been friends from ages, you cant just break our friendship for a silly reason like this" malika insisted.

"silly reason, silly reason? It may be for you because YOUR daughter rejected my son! Everybody is talking about this my son has become a laughing stock, The Nandas rejected the Khannas, I will never forget the humiliation I've gone through my son has gone through"

Malika nodded her head in agreement "I understand what happened wasn't good but naina you shouldn't have told everyone before fixing the rishta, you know na nazar lag jaati hai" malika taunted

"job hi kehlo malika lekin main yeh sab itni aasaani se bhulne waali nahi hoon, aur tumhe yaad hai na tum ne mujhe phone kiya tha ke shayad kuch hai isliye humein yeh rishta tey karna chahiye, maine to Angad se baat ki aur usne haan kahan lekin tumne kripa se poochne ki zaroorat nahi samjhi, kyun? Ghalati tumhari bhi hai" she complains

"main maanti hoon mujhse galati hui, Im really sorry lekin please humari dosti ko khatam mat karo"

naina gives it a thought and finally agrees, they start talking but the way they used to before. When she keeps the phone down she sees kripa standing at her door, but she ignores her and starts doing other things "Mom… Mom please" kripa tries to draw attention

"kripa please mujhe akela chordo!" malika warns.

And kripa leaves again with tears in her eyes. She cries out loud "did it mean so much to mum? Did this relation mean more then me to her?" she thought because in the house No one ever said no to her for anything NEVER! Then why today mom is so upset with me?

In the evening kripa was sitting at her window again looking at the sun set and sees angad's red sports car, she jumps up and looks carefully it was 'HIM' he saw her and waved at her with a smile, she waved back., and ran towards the stairs.

Rahul and Angad enter "namaste aunty" they say in unison and malika gets shocked to see them especially Angad.

"namaste, aao na beta behto" she indicates "manju, pani le ke aao" she shouts for the maid.

"actually aunty mujhe kripa se kuch notes chahiye the" Rahul starts

Kripa enters and malika makes a face and leaves from there, kripa feels really bad and looks at her mom, angad notices this.

"oh kripa, actually I need…." Rahul goes towards her and starts chatting, she keeps turning and looking at Angad while he drags her to her room for the book. She gives it to him.

In the meanwhile downstairs:

"angad, mujhe actually… im very sorry… jo kuch"

Angad cuts her off "Sorry kisliye aunty? I never felt bad about anything! Everyone has the right to make a decision about there life that's what kripa done and im proud of her to do that, be able to make people see her views! You shouldn't be upset with her for that… aunty we are still friends and that wont change" he explains and malika feels really low because she's been ignoring her baby for so long.

Kripa and rahul come down and angad says hi to kripa and kripa feeling a little awkward replies, the boys leave and malika call kripa and hugs her.

"im so happy, mum mujhse baat kar rahi hain, wonder how this miracle happened" kripa tells muskaan.

"angad ne kiya hai yeh sab, angad ne unko samjhaya tab jaa ke samjhi hain badi maa"

kripa gets surprised and remembers that how he was being so normal, she felt so nice to see his face after so long… she gets flashbacks if how he waved at her and the smile that came to her face and when he was sitting there in the lounge she just felt like looking at him or rather staring at him for ever… why?

When angad returned to Mumbai, he had to make sure no one knows how sad he is about losing his first love, he promised himself to be as normal as ever and concerntrate only on his career to fulfill his mom's dream.

Next day:

After ages kripa was sleeping for so long and peacefully…

Muskaan knocks on the door then gets in when she gets no response, she nodds her head and smiles seeing her cousin sleeping so peacefully, smiling after so looong, she was missing this kripa who she had to force to get up for college… she sits next to her and smiles with tears in her eyes and kripa gets up and hugs her "I was also missing myself, always trying to trouble u… jag bhi rahi hoon to bhi jab tak tu andar na aaye uth ti nahi hoon" she also has tears in her eyes.

"oh to tu zabardasti aisa karti hai, dekhna ab main kya karti hoon" they have casual talks then kripa has a quick shower and changes into her casual jeans and a green tank top with a short white jacket. Her hair tied up in a pony.

That's it for now next part will be tomorrow definitely!

I hope you liked it! Please comment/criticize/suggest!

All silent readers if u like it: PLZ HIT THE LIKE BUTTON!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey awesome part as usual. Plz continue again tomorrow. Cnt wait!!

Edited by jessica18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
==============PROMO=================

Kripa stares at angad through the window at college.

angad tries to concerntrate only on studies.

Kripa looks for angad then finally finds him at the grounds, they sit and chat!

College trip going to Delhi for some fun and Business law project!

Josh tries to misbehave with muskaan at the trip and rahul saves her, she feels bad!

Whats next? wanna know? join me tommorrow!

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Posted: 16 years ago

PLZ update quickly. Cnt wait. Poor muskan!! Thnks for the PM

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice prt.
now Kripa is slowly falling in love. Hope she realises it soon n AK unite soon.
Thanks for pm.
continue soon.
Edited by sasik - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Oh nooooo why kripa said this , angad bechara please make ak together . Kripa ko kab eahsaas hoga ki she loves angad.Thx for pm.



Hey thanks for reading and commenting🤗

😭😭 You know kripa she's not ready for it yet, angad😕 Dnt worry there meant to be together... a jodi made in heaven😳😳 ho jayega dear bohot jaldi😳😳 u'r welcome!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sasik

hey

nice prt.
i hope naina won't be any obstruction for AK love in future.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.



Hey thanks for reading and commenting🤗

Im glad u liked it😛😛 hmmm naina will be an obstruction but angads love will melt everyone incl. kripa and naina so just wait and watch!

U're welcome!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part... poor angad.. but i bet kripa has a past.. continue soon.

thanks for the pm..



Hey thanks for reading and commenting🤗

Awww im glad u liked ... hmmm😭😭 angad... about the past not really she's just into studies and has a dream to become a big lawyer, she doesn't seem to have time for things like love and marriage, she doesnt even know what love is till now but soon she'll know😳

U'r welcome!

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