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payas bansal

@_Payuu_

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

great yaar

well done

it was long but sweet

and thanx for the pm

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rhea

@devilsheir

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

it was better than good ⭐️

man your ff is so real and superbly wriiten👏👏

pls continue soon (will be waiting eagerly for the next part)

thanks for adding me to the pm list

rhea

PS - i am new

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416391

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

fabulous update!!!!

loved it

thanks for the PM

continue soon

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.BarunSanaya.

@.BarunSanaya.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!! its really nice!! and thanks for the pm!!

luv

hema

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Hey there , just wanted to point out something that i felt ...

Its a little hard for me to imagine the scenes as i keep getting confused on who's who .. like i forgot who neelam was .. or depaali wass

so i was thinkingg may be for a few first senteces u could write
deepli (Nupur) so tat we are reminded of who we aer acutally raeding about

Besides that , awesomee.
I can see how much effort u've put on this and it will pay off.

Ur style of writing is great ..

Keep it up . :)

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Tania

@Sadaf.B

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Awesome, very well written.. It shows the effort you've put in writing it..😃

I agree with Sunita. I too got a little confused at times,😳

Tania

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cute-kanwal

@cute-kanwal

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

fab update just loved it.I must say u r a great writer .when will u update next?

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

reserved....

too long...bzy...will comment later...sorry

Hi yaar...

BTW ....whats ur name?...

Okay...awesum upodate...

Ireally like ur style of writing..its fab...

Every character is soo well-developed...

Its not the kind of FF...where u develope the character as the story goes forward..

I Luv Chicago...I hav lived there for 6 yrs..

Iam really surprised by ur knowledge ofAmerica....is there any cahance u live there?...

Gr8 story...

Luv the way u write....I thought i was reading a novel...

I luv details n u hv dive a lot...

The best thing abt stories to me is that the way the writers describe their surroundingz...it make me feel as if iam a part of their story...

U hav that quality..n iam really impressed...

Starting wid Aditya..such a sweet character....really deep..n interesting...sad thing happened to him...

Neelam to me is family oriented and too sweet....i think she has sum confidence n isnt shy?..am i right?...

Deepali seems to fun-filled...her sense of style n her hobbies r really unique...

I hav a question...so Deeps n Neelam are faternal twins...the twins which dont look alike?...am i right?..

Zaid ....actually its played by Ranbir...so i adore him...such a cute character...i think he is kinda shy...and really the modern version of a guy nowadays.....

Hina ...the most ...how do u say....academic character...soo involved in her studies...really ambitious....i like it...as u say she really has a ncak for impressing ppl....interesting character....i wonder what the future holds for her...

Younus seems really possesive abt his family...i like that nature in a person...really sweet...i really like Rajeev...lol..

Samira such a loveable character....too lighthearted and really impressive....such a sweetheart...really suits Amrita's character...

Rehaan seems like a heartbroken guy...i dont know why...he seems like if he is rediscovering life......too cute wen he talks....

Gr8 characters.....gr8 story......well thought...

Luv the writing style....

I luv that every character is important...its not that sum characters r getting more limelight then the others...

As u perviously said that we will not be interested in the Bolly characters...

Well i will give u sum relief...i luv both the telly n bolly characters...

Its really a unique story...

I wonder how the story will continue...

I see no major mistakes in the story or concept....actually none...

Congrats for that...

I reallly like giving big-hearty comments.....

I think that gr8 work shud be appreciated often....what say?...

I like all the characters...

I think i identify wid Deepali's fun-loving nature....Neelam's family fondness....Adityas sweet dialogues...Zaid's sweet heart n sleeping habits...lol.....Hina's ambitiousness...Younu's possesive nature...Rehaan's listening into convos...Samira replies....did i forget a character...

U may think that i am lying but seriously iam like this an more....lol

I think since u r gonna update after a long intervals...u may as continue wid long updates...

I am reading 10 FFz......n all r very specail to me....

Since i cant manage them all i wud luv the update pmz...thnx for pming me sweetie...

Really appreciate it...

Continue soon...

Keep it up....

Gud Luck wid the next Chapter...

Waiting for it...

R u satisfied wid the response?...

Take Care...

Luv Ayesha...

Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

NOTE

I have read all your comments and will reply individually to them soon. But first I wanted to let you know that due to Sunita182's request, I have posted all the actor's names in parentheses when they first make an appearance. I hope that will make things a little less confusing. Also, I have added two questions at the end of the chapter. Please do answer them...They will help me improve the story.