AR FF:CAPTIVITY Part 1=Page 2

Hey guys this is priyanka''Many of you must have read my first ff "I'll never leave you"'... and I would like to say a big thank you for appreciating my work''''...now regarding this, well I had this plot in my mind and I thought of writing it down''..so I am just writing the intro part'''.if it is appreciated like the first one, I will continue otherwise I'll close it'''

This ff is a complete opposite of the previous one'''..first one is a fultoo rom 'com,more goody goody stuff, while this one is an intense love story''..no comedy, no funny one liners''a love story minus the fun part'''..

I am writing the introduction part''.

Note: before you all read I would like to say that this ff has some contents which some of you may not like'.. so feel free to criticize'..

Introduction:

FF= first guy

SS= second guy

FF= ye lo is room ki keys'''aur ha tumhari duty subah ke 6:00 se sham ke 8:00 baje tak hai. Tum thik 6:00 yaha par aaoge aur 8:00 chale jaoge. '..aur agar jara se bhi galti hui''..to woh tumhari zindagi ka aakhri din hoga''''.

Ff hands over the keys to the SS''..and the phone rings

FF- tum yehi raho mein abhi aata hoon''..and leaves.

The SS looks at the keys and goes towards the door. He looks inside the room through the small window on the door''he sees that some one is sitting inside the room''..he rubs the window to get a clear view''he sees a girl early in her mid -20 sitting on the bed''..her hair all messed up. She is wearing a patient's gown which is up to her knees. There are bruises all over her hand and legs''her physical structure shows that she has not eaten from many days''''. he tries to look at her face, but could not see it as her hair is all over her face''. he is looking at the girl when someone pats him. He turns''..

Guy= chalo'''. Modi sir tumhe bula rahe hain''' FF nodes and follows him.

So this is the introduction'''.and yes regarding the note'..well this is just the introduction'.i can't write everything here'''so if you like the plot '''just do one thing''' and that is commenting.

I'll give the title only after I write the first part,the title shown is just a temporary one' '..and to continue further I need your opinion''so do let me know'' and if you didn't like then also let me know''..i won't write further'''..i am not sending any pms for this.

Luv priyanka😊

hey priyanka wow 1 more ff wowwwwwww humari kismat chamak gayi yaar l to read xciting intro but whoz the patient ridz i guess hmmmmmmm cnt wait do pm m....
cnt soooon
luv yachna

plz continue soon intresting concept

Hey priyanka....

really nice intro

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey priyanka wow 1 more ff wowwwwwww humari kismat chamak gayi yaar l to read xciting intro but whoz the patient ridz i guess hmmmmmmm cnt wait do pm m....
cnt soooon
luv yachna

thank yachna for liking the plot....
luv priyanka😊.

Originally posted by: bradford3

plz continue soon intresting concept

thank a lot for liking the plot

priyanka

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

Hey priyanka....

Really nice intro....

hmmm..I guess tha patients Ridhzzz....

nywayzz please cont soon...

nd can uadd me to ur pm list!!!!!!!!😃😃😃

Luv Saz!!!!!!😃

thanks saz for liking it..........i'll definitely pm you

priyanka

Originally posted by: SuJaTa790

really nice intro

do continue soon

thanks sujata

luv priyanka

this is the first part.......i have changed the title to "captivity" ..... i think this title suits the ff very well....... do let me know.......

Here goes part 1

Part 1

Guy= chalo………. Modi sir tumhe bula rahe hain……… he nodes and follows him.

Abhi= aaiye………I was waiting for you……..aane mein koi problem to nahin hui…(guy nods)…waise bahut tareef suni hai aapki ranjeet se……I was impressed tabhi aapko bulaya gaya hai……aap to jaante hi honge ki aapko kya karna hai………I mean to say mera aadmi ne aapko sara kaam to bata diya hoga………but if you have any doubts……Mr……..

FF= Mr. rahul grewal

Abhi= yes mr. grewal……you can ask me.

Rahul: well If you don't mind mein ek baar bungalow khud check karna chahta hoon………

Abhi: ya sure why not……..Robert………. mr. grewal ko bungalow dikhao……..

Rahul and Robert leaves from there……..robert shows him each and every part of the bungalow…..the bungalow has 10 rooms…..there is a big lawn outside the bungalow………there are 20 -30 people guarding the bungalow……….huge wall are surrounding the bungalow which prevents anyone from escaping by climbing the walls……..this means that there is only one exit and that is through the main gate………

Rahul: Robert yaha par ek hi exit hai?

Robert: no sir……..there is one more back side mein hai……but that is just for emergency purpose……us door ke baare mein sabko nahin pata hai………only few important people know……aur ab aapko bhi pata chal gaya hai……….

Rahul: can you show me the door?

Robert: why not………come…

Robert shows him the back exit………the door is indeed a secret door…………the door is in the store room…..since not many people enter the store room, not many know about it……..

After inspecting the whole bungalow he enters his house. The house is not very far from the bungalow. He is very tired.He sits on the couch and tries to relax………when the phone rings……..

Rahul: hello.

Guy: hello sir, it's me john………aap please jaldi aaiye……woh out of control ho raha hai……….hum use aur tranquilizers nahin de sakte……. We have already given him enough…..

Rahul: fine……..main aa raha hoon………….and cuts the call……..

Just outside the city is a huge farmhouse……….from outside the farmhouse looks like a huge palace………there is a very small room in this palace………the room is dark…..there is nothing in the room except a wooden chair……….a man is sitting on the chair………his hands and legs tied up……….there is blood all over his face………..the man is trying to free himself ……..when he sees someone opening the door. He looks at the man standing at the door……the man has a revolver in his hand………

Man(standing at the door): hello………..mr. rahul grewal.

Guy(tied up): kaun ho tum………..what do you want from me……..

Man: oh ho……..mr. grewal……..aap kal se yehi Q's pucch rahe hain………aur main bhi kal se ek baat bol bol ke thak gaya hoon……..ask me something new………man

Rahul: tum ne mujhe yaha par kyun rakha hai……….aakhir tum log chahte kya ho?

Man: (while coming towards him): phir se same Q …..maine kaha na right time aane par tumhe sab pata chal jayega………….tab tak enjoy your holidays………waise bhi aisa free time bar bar nahin milta……….kya pata tumhe aage mile ya na mile……….

Rahul: tum jo koi bhi ho ek baat sun lo……agar mera boss ko pata chal gaya to………..

Man: pata to chal gaya hai………ki mr. rahul grewal yaha par aa chuke hain……….aur aaj to unhone apne kaam bhi start kar diya hai………bahut khush ho gaye the woh ye sab sunkar………main unse abhi to baat kar ke aa raha hoon……….

Rahul: I'll kill you ……….and he tries to free himself.

Man: relax rahul……….kyun apne energy waste kar rahe ho……….waise bhi ab to tumhe yehi par rahne hai………jab tak mera kaam nahin ho jata……….aur uske baad……..hum tumhe chood denge………kyunki uske baad tumhe god ke pass jaana hoga……….to tab tak enjoy karo………..aur kuch chaiye to aaram se bata dena………yaha tumhe sab mil jayega except your freedom………..

While they are having their conversation a guy comes………

Guy: armaan sir aapko bade sir bula rahe hain………and leaves

Armaan: so rahul………mujhe jaane padega…….tum to jaante ho big boss ne bulaya hai……….aur boss ke orders ko mana karne………it's like……… you know what I mean………aur ha main ek baat to batana bhul gayya……..aaj se main hoon Mr. rahul grewal………….aur tum ho……….well you were rahul grewal……….. and gives a solid punch on his face.

He goes out of the room to meet his boss….mr.Cole.

Armaan: aap ne bulaya mujhe.

Cole: ha aao batho……aur mission start ho gaya hai……..

Armaan: yes sir………maine pura bungalow dekh liye hai……..i think koi problem nahin hogi………par mujhe 1 month chaiye…..

Cole: 1 month kis liye?

Armaan: uska confidence gain karne mein 1 month to lag jayega…….kya naam hai uska……..ha riddhima. Gupta… ab ek din mein to woh mujhe believe nahin karegi……I need som time……..

Cole: it's okay……….par kya tum usse mile ho.

Armaan: nahin bas usko dekha hai……….kal milunga………

Cole: aur waha kisi ko tum par shaq to nahin hua……..

Armaan: sir……it's me armaan malik………maine aaj tak koi kaam without planning nahin kiya…......unhe bilkul bhi shaq nahin hua……aur na hoga……..

Cole: to tum kal se apna plan start kar do……..hamare pass time bahut kam hai………

Armaan: don't worry sir kaam ho jayega………bas aap is rahul grewal ka khayal rakhye ga……..hamare mission tak uska zinda rehne zaroori hai………

Cole: tum uski tension mat lo………bas apne mission par concentrate karo………

Armaan: yes sir …………………and he leaves………

Here's part 1 ……….I know it's a very small part……..but I had to stop here… otherwise it would have turned into a very long part…………. do let me know whether you like it or not………

Waiting for your comments

Priyanka