MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey dont worry about ur part at all....

dont worry...mood swings even i get so eveni dont update at times....

thanks a lot for the info....i dont want karan to cum in the bottom 2....snif

Love
Steffi
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy
dont worry abt ur part.
u write very nicely ad i am sure tomorrow's part will also be good.
will try 2 vote for karan.
luv
komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kavya.....thats ok ....not to worry ....post it tomorrow....will be looking forward to read it....thanks alot
DEVIKA
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its alright Kavya.. will wait for the part.. take ur time..
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Posted: 16 years ago

HEY GUYS HERE GOES THE NEXT PART

THIS PART HAS CONSUMED LOADS OF TIME SO I DEFINITELY HOPE U LIKE IT. I WENT CRAZY CONSTRUCTING THE POEM. BUT IF U DONT LIKE IT PLS CRITICIZE AND I PROMISE TO MAKE IT BETTER THE NEXT TIME
I KNOW THIS IS A SHORT PART BUT THIS PART HOLDS A LOT OF MEANING IN MY HEART WHICH I DONT KNOW WHY,,
NEWAYZZZ M SRRY TO EAT UR HEAD UP WITH MY NONSENSE TALKS
HERE IS THE PART
HOPE U LIKE IT
THIS PART IS OPENING WITH A QUOTATION JUST FOR U DAZZLING_ARMAAN
PART 13

LOVE IS FRIENSHIP, IF IT IS NOT FOR YOUR BEST FRIEND THEN DEFINITELY THERE IS NO ONE MADE FOR YOU. BECAUSE ONE WHO CANNOT BE YOUR BEST FRIEND CAN NEVER BE YOUR LIFE PARTNER

Ridhima walked along the shore on her bare feet looking at the surging waves and thinking to herself :

Why did you let me go?

Why did you leave me standing all alone?

Why did you hurt me so much?

Every second you are in my mind, like a thought that never extinguishes.

Why is there so much distance between us?

Why is it that my heart still burns for you?

I just cant take it,

I just can't let you go

That's why I think this everytime,

Why do I see your dimpled smile again and again?

You are like a ghost.

Who has been always there,

In the morning and in the evening, day in day out.

Every second and every minute,

Hurts like an open wound.

When I think of you I want to do it forever,

Keep thinking about the moment when you will love me back.

That moment might never come,

But I will keep dreaming of it.

About the moment when you will be mine,

Because loneliness is a feeling that you never get used to

That is why I am getting engaged to someone else

We are going to promise each other our words

We are going to promise each other our minds

We are going to promise each other our hearts

We are going to promise each other our life

I might not be your fantasy

I am bound to feel a bit of jealousy

But my heart did not ache on that

The reason for my heartwrench is

I lost my first love

Because it was you who chose our destiny

But today I swear onto my life

I will never let you go

Like you did to me

You will never feel alone

Like I did when away from thee

You will never feel the pain or hurt

As I absorb it in my heart

There would be never distance between us

Even if we stay miles apart

My heart will keep beating for you

Because I love you as you are

Love for me is pure as gold

Even eternity it might be

Because I'll lovewho my heart chose

And not the one forced on me

Armaan could hear her heart cry which made him sob uncontrollably.

"If a person you love cannot understand your silence he can never understand your words"

He sat on the chair on the terrace and looked at the hooting cars beneath. The speed of the cars might have been touching the sly but for him life had come to a standstill.

His heart spoke to him

It said:

I am always yours, but will you ever be mine

Being close to you makes me feel so fine

My heart for you burns hotter than fire

But I might not be your soul's desire

It is someone other you supposed to love instead

And so much between us will remain unsaid

I cannot hear it anymore

My heart is aching and has gone sore

I have to go away

Because what I feel for you I cannot say

A smile on my face

Tears in my eyes

Sometimes the feeling of love

Comes to us in disguise

You failed to see the lover in me

So I let you go and set you free

But can you see why I run from your heart

While mine is breaking all apart

Standing here all by myself

I feel so lonely and so small

My best friend, my first love

In one moment I lost it all

So close and yet so far

To miss you my heart lacks the power

But I will think of you every now and then

But will we ever meet again?

Or could this possibly be the end

Please tell me can we always stay like good friends?

"She walks in Beauty, like the night
Of cloudness climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes..."

"You know you are in love when you see the world in someone's eyes, and that someone's eyes everywhere in the world."

SINCERELY HOPE U PEOPLE LIKE IT
PLS FEEL FREE TO COMMENT (APPRECIATE/CRITICIZE)
WILL BE DEPENDING ON UR COMMENTS TO FRAME THE NEXT PART
R*R (RATE AND REVIEW)
LOVE
KAVYA
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Posted: 16 years ago

I LOVED IT YAAR .

THANKS FOR THESE BEAUTIFUL QUATATIONS AND WONDERFUL POEM . IT CONTAINS ALOT OF EMOTIONS IF SOMEONE READ IT FROM HEART.
YOU HAVE EXPRESSED AR'S THOUGHT BEAUTIFULLY IN THESE POEMS.
I REALLLLLLLLLLY APRECIATE UR EFFORTS FOR THIS PART.
AND THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART FROM NOW.
LOVE YOU
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON AND PM ME.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kavya.. you have left me speechless.. could actually feel the depth of every word of both the poems.. superb sweetheart.. your wrods have touched deep inside my heart.. great going... continue soon further and thanks so much for the PM...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys am srry
have to leave for some urgent work
some pm's are left over
will send them after some time
forgive me
love
kavya
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Posted: 16 years ago
U have a great talent here Kavya....my God was a lovely collection of words.....excellent.....i simply love it......

many dont have ur talent......superb....

i only wish aftr the poem u would have continued with more.....but itys a lot time consuming i kno....

great job...brilliant...

thanks for the PM...

Love

Steffi

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Kavya..
that was a excelent poem expressing every feeling very truely..
lovely update yar..
waiting for Shashank to amend the damage he has caused..
thanx for the PM..

Rucha

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