Kismet Ka Khel -RM FF-Part 15- Pg52(31/12)

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Mansii!!! That part was soooooooooooo goood!!!!! lovedd itt

continue soon!

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

omgggg...it was totallllyyyy AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! waiting for their date part!!!this part totallly great!!!!!! thank u for the pm and continue soon

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Hey you Didn't PMed me!Any ways

It was AWESOME part!!!!!!!!!!😊

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drashti.dfan

@drashti.dfan

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

great part Mansi!!!!!!!
the concept was awesome!!!!!!!
u narrate the whole scene in a superb way!!!!!!
hats off!!!
do continue soon!!!!!

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

wow...when i first started reading ..i was like....did i miss some part.......then i realized it was a dream...chalo ab Rahul k dreams bhi dekhne lag gayi hai .the car scene was very nice....oh and muski tried to burn the hand -cuffs....god yeh ladki kab sudhregi...doesnt matter atleast uski stupidity k wajah se she could see the pain and fear for her in Rahuls eyes......Rahul managed to open the hand-cuff with Muski's hair pin......tats was really nice....waise is tat really possible...coz i once tried to open my jwellery box but it dint work for me hehehe may be i dint knw the correct technique...lolz.........great part dear ...Thanks for the PM

With Love

Saba

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

wow!! that was an awesome part!!

can't wait for the next part!!

and thanks for sending me a PM.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

AWESOME part!!....loved it....n thank u so much for making it so long!!....

i loved the line when she said...is this car stolen?.....no rite, so do watever u want.....lol......it was like K3G......very funny....

the concept of them being stuck together was very nice....n different...

it was nice to see how they were bonding...

n it was a nice moment when they were playing with their eyes closed...."No one has muscles, so who is this?".....hehe.....liked that part as well

i cant wait to see how their first date goes...!

its gonna be amazing!

pls do continue soon!

n thank u very much for the pm

good job!

-Simran

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Surbhi

@arvanu

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

hey Mansi,

i realised one thing while reading the FF.....its completely different from ur previous one.......even ur writing style.......ad its awesome and an amazing update.......Muskaan-Rahul being caught up in handcuffs....that was a good one......and OMG!!!!they are going on their first date......now thats very interesting.......do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!!

-surbhi😊

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago