AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56)

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huda

@hudi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

firstly barkha what a part..!!!!like totally awesome...!!!!mindblowing
i like the way u described anji's reaction towards armaan when he said ill sit here as well..!!!
thats gud....
plz plz plz plz plz continue soon and plz plz plz give a long part this time...!!!

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

Hey Barkha,
The part was lovely, I really loved it.
So Armaan is going to talk with ridzi, I know when he'll discover the real ridhima, he will love truly love her, waiting for this.
The story is going really well.
Continue soon.

Kashish

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

nice update. but little shot one.

the way u describe everyones feelings is amazing. and ur FF is anything but predictable. wel for eg the beach scene, - i expected armaan to go with anjali and adi to stay back with ridhima.

this armaan-adi thing seems interesting. and i guess armaan started to make his first move to clear the wall bw him and ridhima. i hope they become friends.

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

dat was a gr88 prt... i actually thgt ammy wld chng... bt wel, d guy is stil nt gne 4 chng.....
hopng 4 d bestt

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

awesome part barkha👏

cnt w8 to find out what Armaan's going to say to ridz😳

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

love the way this is heading girl!!! keep it up!!! u're doing a fab job of describing the tensions and inter-personal vibes!!!

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Forever_Komal

@Forever_Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

Hi barkha di

guess what? right now i am commenting on your ff and i am so sick!!! i was feeling a little better so i deciced to go online and i see u updated!!!this part was better than my medicine... armaan is going to do some damage control, in my view either he will try to make riddhima dislike adi , or even maybe make her start liking adi to get her attention away from her!

plez update again soon!!

...komal...

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

AMAZING!!.....very nice part...

i like the interaction/ friendhip between Ridhimma n Muskaan....

i wonder if Adi does have a thing for Ridhimma....maybe he does!....

wow...that will be quite interesting....!!

pls do continue soon!!

this was great!

-Simran

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ramani

@ramani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

hi barkha,

sorry for the very late reply.u have written two parts n i haven't commented on them,sorry very much for the delay.

The parts are very nice. the way u have put things is very natural n i am loving this adi-ridzy part. May be now armaan will realize his love for ridzy.

continue soon.

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

Great part Barkha! Can't write too much today...but I did love the Riddhima-Muskaan conversation. I'm sure it'll end up being Armaan-Riddhima at the end of the story (otherwise most of your readers will give you a hard time 😆), but I really don't mind the idea of Adi-Riddhima. I mean, he actually seems interested in her...she should at least see how he is. Continue soon!