~*Teri Ore Hai Rabba*~ Part 2 Pg4 - Page 2

SHALU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My sis!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 You finally started a ff!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏 What happened to starting an ff about us huh?😆😆😆 lol jk! This one is amazing and it has most of my fav couples so YAY!!!!!!!!😃 Hmmm sounds somewhat like mine....instead u have married couples in here too.... sounding like us paagal sisters? 😉😃

Originally posted by: bradford3

its really ggud cant wait to read more honestly and your really a fantastic writer

wooow shals gr88888 job👏 i really reaallyyy love ur style of writing😃 And i really liked how u started this story off with all these people coming to one huge mansion to start their new lives. All kinds of fun waiting to happen na😉 omgggg i cant wait 🤣 i can just imagine this u know. all funny n everything and love scenes😳 Its really cool how u compared things to poetry u know. like... their hair bouncing in the wind😲shooooo beautiful😳 I cant wait to read more. and ur other inspiration is personal life experiences? woooow😉 this is gonna be good yaar😃 keep up the greaaat work and i'll try to come here often to comment/criticize😃

Originally posted by: luv1angel

Heyy Shalu,
Ruta here Watsup?? I must say i like ur concept and i love the couples my fav would be Jai Aditi Prem Heer and Im so glad that Angad and Kripa are in it ... i miss AK ffs .... and the first part was great and I love the idea of the big mansion and them living together awww its so cute! (dont ask how but i think everythings cute! lol ) :D ;)
and omg I LVOE THE bABY! my name was supposed to be vidhi ... lol but appreantly my mom said that i didnt like it ... i dont get it cuz hello i was a baby how can u tell that i didnt like it or not ...

Nywyas as u can c I am very talkative and I love to read not a day goes by that i dont finish a book ...
so hopefully ull continue really soon ( I have the same prob with my ff im too busy to update my AK ff even though its been a year now since i started it) im gonna check like everyfew hours if u updated or not .... lol

Ruta <3 ! :D

Originally posted by: indigal07

SHALU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My sis!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 You finally started a ff!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏 What happened to starting an ff about us huh?😆😆😆 lol jk! This one is amazing and it has most of my fav couples so YAY!!!!!!!!😃 Hmmm sounds somewhat like mine....instead u have married couples in here too.... sounding like us paagal sisters? 😉😃

Yeah I know I finally managed it! I was so nervous that I would start it and not get enough time to update....thats probably gonna be the case in the near future. 😕. yeah i was gonna do it and then changed all the names to tellywood couples cuz i thought one of you might get offended about what i write or something...and i hadnt even asked permission to write about you na?

Wow the description is soo beautiful! I love the shiny black gates and those pretty butterflies!!😳 Ok, i have to say, it totally seems like ur from the UK right by ur spelling. u spelled color as "colour" with "u"! Awwwwwwww how cute is that?😳😳 lol u must be like "here i am wanting this paagal to comment on my ff and she's pointing out the spelling differences between the US and UK? kya ladki hai gosh!!!"🤣 hahaha i couldn't help myself yaar kya karun? u kno me na!!

Thank youu😃My fave author loves my work...what could make little Shalu happier?😳😳I am British and will remain British. and all the spellings in the FF will remain British 🤣so continue if you are willing to take the risk of the British spellings taking over your life

OMG!!!!!!!! Ur writing is soooooo AMAZING!!!! I love it sooooooooo much!!!!!😲😃 I can totally visualize the entire thing!! Those 2 limos, white and black, racing into the gates and omg PH ARE MARRIED!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAA WOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!! OMG AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! That is soooo wonderful i LOVE PH!!!!😃 i expect some romantic scenes with them samjhi?😉😆😆 i love how prem is so naughty! he's such a cutie!!! the way he talks is kind of like the way us paagalos talk, u kno with the whole "jaanu" thing attached!😆😆

I LOVE PH TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃arent they like the most amazin on earth right now?😆Aaw abhi shaadi hui hai to thoda romance bhi hoga na? kya tu bhi pagalo jaisi baat kar rahi hai🤣

oooo what is this secret all the girl's are hiding?😲 i wanna kno!!!! ahah suspenseful huh? i can totally see ur "inspirations" at work here!!😉 i want to kno wuts up with kripa soon so u better let us kno and not be like me in that case because i make ppl wait for ages!😕😆😆 lol i should stop tht habit of mine...but kya karoon, paagal hoon na, aur paagal log jaldi nahin sudharte!😃 oh and i must say, i dont kno who ragini is but i think its really cute that she's married and has that sweet little baby😳

Wait Wait aali meri jaan. Have some patience. Slowly all will be revealed. Including this horrible secret of Kripa's. You will have to wait for now my dear...until I get time to update againRagini and Ranvir are in Bidaai on Star Plus. They are shooo shweeet too. Those two were inspired by Roshni, Imran and our lil Baby Sonu😳

omg i must say i love Angad's tight blue shirt!!!🤣 hahaha amazing! i can totally see him right there!!! Aww Ranvir is so sweet!!! he can't go without hearing his daughter's laugh for 5 mins? sooooooo sweetttttt!!!!😳😳😳 haha i loved how u mentioned sending out a search warrant, tht was so funny. sounded stephenie meyerish...another one of ur awesome inspirations......😃

Hehehe yeah! Babies are soo cute though, and I know when I have a bachu I'll do anything to hear it's laugh😳😃Stephenie is just amazing....noone can be compared to her. I have finished the Twilight series months ago and I'm gonna start the Host in a bit...

aye hai..kya baat hai? this prem seems a slight bit strict na? koi baat nahin, i hope to see heer soften him up a bit!😉😆😆 OMG I MUST SAY SHALU!! ur writing style sooooooo similar to mine!! now i see y im on top of ur list of inspirations lmao!🤣 now tht i am, u should read the rest of my ff, not just tht one update.😆😆 lol It's great to see them all setting their eyes on eachother! But AK didnt even look at one another.😕 i totally cannot wait for them to look at eachother!😳😳 i wonder what they'll feel...... and Kripa's raaz better come open or else im comming after u shalu!!!😆😆😆 jk jk i love u!!! i cant wait for the dinner scene either...speaking of which i should go have mine...😃

Prem is a bit stick-to-the-rules-or-else😆but humari Heer Bhabhi hai na🤣UhOh😕😕😕It's similar, but I hope you don't think I'm copying or anything. I guess I spent so much time reading your FF your style kind of got to my head. I'm so sorry if you think I'm copying...Yeah AK's romance comes a bit later...but theirs will be one of the best😳Lol I need dinner too...I smell spicy pasta🤣

Overall, FANTASTIC, AMAZING OUTSTANDING First update jaanu!!!!! I'm soooooooooooooo proud of u and seriously look forward to reading way more written by u!!! Love more than u love me!!!!!!!!!🤗

THANK YOUUUUUUUUU🤗I will try my best to update as often as possible but i make noo promises. LLOVE YA MORE THAN ANYONE DOES🤗🤗

Aali

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

wooow shals gr88888 job👏 i really reaallyyy love ur style of writing😃 And i really liked how u started this story off with all these people coming to one huge mansion to start their new lives. All kinds of fun waiting to happen na😉 omgggg i cant wait 🤣 i can just imagine this u know. all funny n everything and love scenes😳 Its really cool how u compared things to poetry u know. like... their hair bouncing in the wind😲shooooo beautiful😳 I cant wait to read more. and ur other inspiration is personal life experiences? woooow😉 this is gonna be good yaar😃 keep up the greaaat work and i'll try to come here often to comment/criticize😃

Originally posted by: Baby S

Thanks so much for commenting nishu😃I'm so happy you came

Yup masti ke liye tayar raho Miss White🤣🤣

Aaw thanks😳

Haha yeah the personal life experiences....well there wasnt much of that in the 1st part but it will be coming soon

Should I PM you when I update?😃

Love you soo much

PS. I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR AVI🤣

PPS. YOU ARE WRITER OF THE WEEEEEEEEEEEK!!! YAAY congrats. You are sooo cool Bruder😎

hahahaa🤣 mein tayar hoon🤣🤣

hmm.. well I think ur ff might always be in my 10 last participated topics but yes u can PM me when u update😃 should i PM u too about mine?

which one 🤣🤣🤣 is it the cuteeee animal one or the peanut butter🤣🤣🤣

I knooooow yaaar its soo awesome🤣 bruder😲🤣🤣 I know this word because I was watching this AWEsomeeee deutsch movie on the EUROchaanneeelllll 😆 anyways 😆 yeah u are toooo cool too 😃

Hmmm so that's y u didn't make an ff of us......u could've asked na..it would've been so much FUN!!!!!!😉😆 And hey I would never get offended! especially about something tht my sister wrote of me? nvr yaar!! so who's who in this ff? like which paagal couple represents which telly couple? It is SOOO cute how u included ranvir ragini and the baby as roshu and jiju's lil parivaar!!!!😃

Aww that's ok yaar i dont think your copying at all! Actually i think its cute that our styles match...it means i had an influence on u!!! 🤣 I rly look forward to reading more!!! can't wait!!!😃

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

hahahaa🤣 mein tayar hoon🤣🤣

hmm.. well I think ur ff might always be in my 10 last participated topics but yes u can PM me when u update😃 should i PM u too about mine?

which one 🤣🤣🤣 is it the cuteeee animal one or the peanut butter🤣🤣🤣

I knooooow yaaar its soo awesome🤣 bruder😲🤣🤣 I know this word because I was watching this AWEsomeeee deutsch movie on the EUROchaanneeelllll 😆 anyways 😆 yeah u are toooo cool too 😃

Originally posted by: patricia757

It's fantastic!!