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komal

@komalsirwani

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#271

Another wonderful piece of ure work comes to an end...cant express how much i loved it...will be waiting for ure next masterpiece...till then...thanks for this wonderful fic love ya 4 dis

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lookwhoshere

@lookwhoshere

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#272

nahiiii!!! u've completed this???? yaar shocks pe shocks de rahe hain log toh!!

reserved for now..be back soon!

wat's with "23" n u girl?? do u like HAVE TO end all ur fics in the number or its multiples?? oh but

still, the way u've ended it rocks!! she's goin back home..a place she had wanted to be in, n we had wanted her to be in, since ermm..ages!! a wonderful part nj, n a gr8 fic u gave us...loved the proposal.. chirag n ritu n gappu deserve a hell lot of credit in bringing out things the right way..n i coudln't have loved them al more..even the way chirag congratulated ridzie..the humour, the subtle hints he keeps droppin wenevr he talks n all..n i believe it was his talk with armi dat resulted in the last very beautifully written scene, where ammy declares his need for rizie...three cheers to them all!! the muskaan n rahul convo was brilliant..muskaan's reaction was quite unexpected ..but u pulled it off again...like always..n i don't even need to say all that m saying, it is just so obvious n said so often!! the anji-gappu scene was just gr8..the way u've given her lines, she ought to be a lawyer too..or maybe a judge or sumthin, 😆she's quick n correct n authoritative wen it comes to decisions..m amazed..

a fab end to this story of urs..the epilogue still remains..n m glad..m sure it is gonna add to the surprises u've been giving us during the fic..the concept itself was so different, nothing could be predicted easily...u r mindblowing with words, n each fic or urs happens to see a new nj, n this one though a bit more complex n deep, still was a pleasure to read!! aww..n the story's gonna be over..will miss it!

luv u hun!

anu.

Edited by lookwhoshere - 16 years ago

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#273

cnt belive this fic is over😭,

it was amazing part 👏

i cnt w8 to knwo what your next ff is going to be like😳

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#274

Reserved

NJ, this reserved will not go without a comment...I Promise......

thanks for the pm

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#275

23-N is done! finally!! u know wat all i've been doing to catch up with this part from one week, i even copied it to my mobile n tried to read it on train, read half n almost missed my station engrossed in it, n guess where i was when my station had arrived, in RM's convo. i even thought for a moment to just sit on the platform n finish it...hehe, but had to reach a place on time..enough of my flopped plans rambling now, lets get to the part

it was awesome!! i was dreading to read how RM wud handle such a sensitive issue n u did a fab job NJ! kudos!! that part was simply brilliant! being each other's strength was just so so nicely portrayed, i donno wat to say, i m in awe of u, thats it!

fantastic part! now, i'll get to the next one n see what happens to that vivek n oh no, armaan dont know abt muski yet, i will be back soon..*running towards next part*

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#276

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nj sorry, i have been away 4m long...all thanks 2 my boring exams n all...anyway i am back...so will read rest of my missed out pts n comment soon

sonu

Edited by dmg_sonia - 16 years ago

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#277

booohoooo, fic finished! oh ya, epilogue still left *smiling a bit again*

nice end NJ! the last convo of AR was so deep n meaningful...i loved this fic, love is not an apt word, but i donno a better word...loved a lot will do? loved it loads infact! all the characters were so very well written, so clearly seen, will miss them terribly. its like i m attached to them, AR, RM, gappu minnie, ritu, chirag, anjali, atul...will miss them all...i cant put into exact words wat i m feeling right now...its actually nostalgic when i remember dis fic, abt how i felt at every phase of it, its been an awesome journey, a special one infact, will remember this fic for teaching me some things, truly!

u must know NJ, urs was the first fic i ever read, perfect imperfection was the fic that started my journey here, was intrigued by its title...n unleashing was brilliant!

i dont think i wrote all i wanted to, will come back n edit

love you, *hugs*

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surisha

@surisha

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#278

Great part. so sad that it ended. we wanted more of it. Thanks for pm.

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#279

AMAZING PART!!!!!!!!!!!! this was the perfect ending.. the proposal and the end were the best scenes for me.. the end was simply fabulously written.. the way that armaan expressed his love for her in simple words was beautiful!!! eagerly awaiting an epilogue!! 😊 amazing part again! i loved it!

Avanti

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#280

reserved ( ouch nj knowing ur eternal love for 23 i had a notion u gonna end on this very number okies am off to read the part still i dunt like the feel of it ending NJ am gonna miss this one n terribly so......)

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okies first i was removing that eternal love frm there but then i decided aganst it arrrggghhhhh NJ u shud have been born on a 46th ya but then the date doesnt exist in ne calender so no use whining but then i still am :(((((( shucks but then every great thing has a beginning n an ending though this particular fic was far more than just great ........ !!!*hugs* for giving us such a beutiful tale nj!!!!!!

okies dunno wats up with ma mood today itz dat am just in NO mood n then i read ur last part for the fifth time in a row n then am commenting (lolzz :D) n i decided to comment on N n J together..... it was one of my fav fics hell no it STILL is ;)) still one thing i missed gappu on so many occasions he gotta be there in the epilogue hmm puhleezzzz naaaaaaa!!!!!

every char described to the very best esp the N part god RM were so touching nj d best part with u is more of feelings, emotions n less of actual dialogues yet u convey every detail with such perfection :) muskaan took every thing in a positive stride n let rahul be there for her , tend her broken self it was a moment ..... spectacular in every way they overpowered everythng that moment n then atul-armaan scene, was one of itz kinds atul is very different a person in every way n then i armaan-anj aww the little talk with he wanting to be scolded by her aahha love brought out so much in Mr. oh-not-so- talkative...... Nj gappu-minzz missing them !!!

the sapphire ring n ridz reaction to it :D so wonderful to read in every way i mean the reassuring looks n the "i love you" so heartfelt awwww beautiful n chirag another one of my favs i loved the awesome threesome moment they shared :))))) but then armaan cuming to know so suddenly n the way he reacted.... always a mystery the man is uff?? n chirag had his head at the right place(he alwaysz has :D) so did riddhima god the way AR understand each other is impossible like srsly !!!

i remember u chose a sig for this fic ummmm it said "loved u once, love u still.... always have, always will" these words say it all n with such perfection that am surprised all the more coz theres so much i wanna say n then i go blank pheww am losing it n srsly i dunt wanna discuss vivek this time hez off n away yet his grey char remains so much is lost!!!!! n cuming back to armaan i loved the para wen he admits he doesnt like dependence n chirag in his sane way makes him word his actualemotions that he needs riddhima n depends on her as shez his only love!!!!

the last conversation, the way they put things forward..... armaan taking her to calcutta with him n heavens it was so emotional n i knew this wud be the last scene in here n still feel so lost yet words cud never describe you n ur fics so lemme leave it at that !!! it was a

beautiful journey well i kinda feel like writing something hmm let see.....

fates brought the two of them together

exploring and understanding they came closer

unknowingly still they had to fall apart until

he loved her once, he loves her still

she always had, she always will . . .

confession remained frozen in their heart

tainted beautiful memories tearing apart

time flew, lives marched and distance widened

yet the pure unacknowledged bond of LOVE remained

he once chose to open his heart and soul to her

she accepted ... claiming his as her very own

long lonely six years, unmissed pangs of separation

alas bringing about that cherished union

he loved her once, he loves her still

she always had, she always will . . . .

shucks it seems like a summary to me newaz this is it just thot of writing sumthing outta the blue n here it is dunno wat wud u make outof it *thinkin n frowning* !!!

will miss this fic tooo much huhh!!!!!

toodleloooossssss

Edited by aravi - 16 years ago