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mohini_agarwal

@mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

fab part nj! another cliff-hanger? i sure hope everything's alright.

thanks for the pm. continue soon and do pm me..

mohini :]

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

reseved, will come back sooner.....18 pages....what an update.....let me get my tea & get to this right away....

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Kanu K

@artizia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

NJ ... it was such a long part , and special thanks for that ,

u really know how to make up for the long gaps in the update 😉

bebes this time all i was focusing on was the analogies you used

the turmoil remained however, undeterred, like a tenant who refused to vacate.

awesome !!

as its right said to every night there is a new sunshine .... glad that was a rather a new beginning for RM ...

im still confused aboutthe reactions of Armaan .. he was the one who was supoised to be upset and lost ..and he seems to be fine now ....

is it just that he is trying to keep the worries tohimself

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#234

woah NJ🤗 really awesome one dear⭐️ superb one😛😛😛 so chirag told Ridhima about Vivek and he is Rahul's bro😲 but interesting one😍 superb NJ😊 can i ask one thing😳😆 what is 23N😕😕 plz contionue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

From Armaan "With this rose, I not only give you merely a rose,
but I give you my heart and soul.
I send to you all the love I have to give,
and anything else that would give me the
chance to touch your heart.

I could never tear my eyes from you,
you are able to make my life worth living.
But, without you, just like a rose,
I would wither and die.

Not all at once, but little by little,
petal by petal.

Slowly at first, because you have made me
stronger and stronger each day you're with me.
But eventually, without you, I will loose
all those beautiful petals you have given me." To Ridhima

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pal234

@pal234

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#235

hey nj..

read d storyy afterr a longg tym!!! dnt really know wat all to commment...there's so much!! armmaann came back..wow....their moments!! simply beautiful!!! nd cnt luv gappu nd minnie more...u kno their pair remind me of another couple in my real lyf!! they r so much lyk them..its lyk i find friends in ur story 😊

that whole history abt vivek ws a shock!! as in drugs nd all wer still okkaayy...bt he also being a schizophreniac😲 omg!! i mean his words did sound of a nutter!! bt nt dat srsly!! nd all dat illegal nd poliice thing!! nt expctd at all!!

nd muskki!! omg!!! i dnt kno wat 2 say!! miscarriage!! :( bt dat moment wit rahul!!"our kids" that ws reaalll sweet..it kinda coverd up all d sadness for her!!!

too many things are unleashing in ur story!!! nd m luving it!!! hw mch i missd it!!!!

nd u know i absolutely luv anji's character....her concern..her love...her doubts!! i actually lyk her charcter more than ridzi now...dnt no y in praticular....bt she's amazing!!! nd her pair with atul!! they r kind of d most sensible couple in d story..nd most loving couple!!😊

awesme work gal👏 👏 👏 👏...truly gr8...nd hope dis story is havin 23*3 parts😆 😃

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#236

hey nj,

finally,we get to read the 23rd part....

its been long time...and i had to actually skim thro' the 22nd part again to get back into the story...

thanks a lot for the pm hun...

okies..enough of talks..now coming to the update[i almost read the update twice...had soo many interruptions in the middle]

well hav to say the part was outstanding.....just beautiful...guess this is my 2nd fav part after the confession...

well..hav to say u are splendid in describing the state of minds of ur characters..armaan being baffled abt riddhima's behavior n also abt the call was superbly explained..loved riddhima's confusion abt chirag's talks and then finally determination abt catching hold of vivek...

and then vivek's history was shocking...i had my eyes widening with every line...gosh,i really hope he is caught for the good...

and then again armaan's feelings abt wanting someone in his life for comfort and support was just awesome...

and anji is a beautiful soul..loved her concern for armaan,riddhima and gappu....and atul,there cant be any peerfect human being..he is just wonderful..and his pair with anji is just so apt..and now he knows the whole story of armaan's life...

then muski,never knew reading that part would bring slight tears in my eyes...but i just couldnt stop them...hav no words to express how much i loved the part between muski n rahul...their concerns abt each other and their acts abt being each other's strength at time of distress was superb....and m glad its brought them closer than ever before...

anji n gappu's talk was really sweet..the way gappu kept on pestering her for her approval abt armaan was really cute...and the way u expressed her fears abt not being able to share most of ridzi's secrets even though they were siblings was just soo beautiful...really love her character...

and then armaan n riddhima's moment...couldnt hav been even more perfect...riddhima's dilemma abt whether to tell armaan abt muski's miscarriage and armaan's plea abt wanting to know everything was just perfect...

well..guess gappu interupted at the right moment..maybe i didnt want to read abt armaan's reaction to muski's miscarriage right yet... wonder what atul told armaan...

and then again a cliffhanger to the end...wonder whats next?????

anyways will be waiting for the next part...

p.s.may your friend's mom's soul rest in peace...my condolences with ur friend....

p.s.and yes it has to be ur longest part i guess...and mine as well

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#237

awesome update!

thnx for the pm-hope you cont. soon😳

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@spln

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#238

hey people!!

🤗for all the wonderful comments/essays i got so far :) made me smile, through not the best of last two days...

anyways...wanted to tell you all that i will be posting the next part sometime tomorrow...hoping to see the missing chunk of my regular readers back here on the thread with their piece(s) of minds to share with me over the seemingly endless previous update...

until then, good day to the east and a good night to the west!!

cheers,

nj

ps: will get back to replying individual comments after i'm back in ann arbor...still in LA...and its...well...lets just leave that part of details out of mentions...

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chocofreak

@chocofreak

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#239

hey nj...

thank god you updated... finally... !!!!!. n the length of the part... pleasing... to say the least!!! (lol... thanks a lot hun)

now coming to the part... wot can i say... outstanding AS USUAL.. !! your hold over your characters, their feelings and thoughts seems only to get better with every passing day...

loved the eye locks between armaan n ridzi during her converstaion with chirag... so typical when you are trying to hide something from someone who knows you inside out...

and rahul-muskan... that part was my favourite although those two arent exactly my favs... her pain... his anguish... n her realisation that he was troubled and needed her much more than she needed him... the sudden shift of control from him to her... impeccably portrayed and explained... and kudos to you for that...

the converstaion between atul n armaan... loved it... atuls attitude towards armaan... treating him as his rightful equal... and at the same time his protective paternal feelings towards ridzi... n armaams outright regard for him... his unquestionable love for the only woman he was ever attracted to... now you make me wish i had a sweetheart like armaan in my life... gosh am i jealous of ridzi!!!

n then ofcourse... the mother-son talk... gappu siding with his almost sibbling... anjies concern for the same... her vulnerability... and finally her request to her son to help her become the parent she has always wanted to be..

O N HOW CAN I FORGET GAPPU N RIDZIS NONSENSE BANTER... reminds me of my sister n myself...!!!!!!!!!!!

n then there was chirag... n the whole issue with vivek... now that had better be sorted out soon... dont want him to be a menace in my darling armaan n his darling ridzis life...

hey hun... u think u could put up the next update before 2nd?? cuz m leaving after that n wont be back for a while... about a month.. n m dying to read ahead... so pls pls... atleast this time dont delay... its a sincere request... or else i wont get to read the part till june... !!!!!! come on hun... just this once...

with loads or love...

ps. sorry to hear to hear about your friends mom... may god give her n her loved ones the strength to bear this terrible loss...