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Hina

@hinz

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+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#221

reserved .....miss u bachaa!!

i'm guessing shall i do another one?
like the real ME? lolz

luv u two nutterz muaaah!

will be back soonafter i'm done writing my own update,u know the effects of a part here r lethal

p.s: my prayers with dan and his fam,it is unfortunate indeed!
take care !

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

reserved.....finally! :) *miss yah*

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Woaahh!!!..you call that an update? it seemed like a short story to me...with missing backs to be continues in the sequel ...haah!! okay lame joke...i can't believe i didn't stop myself from reading it...i have like no time to write that paper...i am so dead!!!! :( ..

Luved it..won't say its one of your best...but close..!! Muskaan-Rahul were the best for me..correction..there scene...was perfect..too apt to be unreal..:) ..(yeah ill go with the contradiction of those words)...Armidz scenes here and there i liked tons...most of it..!! Armaan's "i lover her" ...well i wish i could go back in time in KS world and see there moment...i did think of them!...at another point i thought of them was...when gappu said.."Miss talkative n Mr. No talk.." isn't that KS now and surprisingly or not....you've grown your characters based on them...as i say...in aware of it all or not...but it was so..!

Everyone else....were right in their spot....you excell at this...so reminding you again...is just another smile to that tired face..i know..!! (i don't want to go into details...cuz..i could rite an update on it..i didn't miss anything...this one had it all...) I am very happy....you gave RM the deserved in this one...cause...i would kill you if i had to share the post space with anyone...when AR have a real interaction..yes even when am just reading it....it matters..i care! :D
(no i haven't forgotten about GM...and yes...am almost mad about that...but you had to leave something for the next part..and they are not on the same level :D )

mast tha...worth the wait...as always...catch ya soon..!!

muah,
..me! 🤗

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#223

reserved... 315 hinu..talk to you soon :D me missin ya bad :(

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now since u and nij were so kind to reserve me two spots i better write a long comment then
ok ignore me,i dunno wat i mean

nj
i loved the part
i know why u thot i may not have,but i did and lots
and i think i know what part of newtons u referring to
yar i've always told u not to let that bother u so much,but anyway
i was so happy to read the RM part, they love each other so much to last them a lifetime and the kids part was my favourite... brought back some great memories
u'r fics always manage to make me think more than i shud

ok moving on
the vivek part was quite expected,the guy sure sounded a freak and now he's proved one
i had a spl liking for Riddhima in this part,Chirag's always been one of my favs,the man is just so sensible,u've made him such a likeable char,a great frnd ...love him lots! 😆

Anjie is turning outto be another such character ,so far she's been so apt with her emotions and actions
love her concern and bonding with Armaan

Atul doing what he shud,playing the perfect parent

Gappu is always fun,looking forward to more of him in the next part

i do feel sad to see this coming to a close,u typing up all the loose ends to make a happy end,or was it not so happy? i recall u telling me of something different this time

well anyways ,i dont think my delayed comment did any justice to the brilliant part u gave us
i'll try and comment my best and say it all in the next comment on part J

315 nj dil se and always~

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#224

grt part really good plsss continue sooon

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suvi_rox1

@suvi_rox1

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#225

hey nj r u backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.....finally..........oh god i missed u n ur prts terribly....totally forgot the situationn where u ended last time so gonna read frm prt 22..n then 23....plz babes dont selay in posting the prts so much...nt atleast a mnth.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..ok will read the prt n soon comment.

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Mia

@everlastingword

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Posted: 16 years ago

#226

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Hey Nj,

was missing you and wondering what could have kept you away from IF. anyways...all that matters is that you are back...and that too a brilliant update of my favourite FF!! yippee!!

First of all...loved the part...as usual, nothing new there, but the best thing was the myriad emotions that you handled so well. i have to confess that i had been waiting for the part where Rahul confronts Muskaan with the miscarriage issue and i have to hand it to you...it was presented beautifully!! the scene was very real yet extraordinary and Muskaan totally stole the show!! My heart went out to her and her reaction on hearing the news,

"You still haven't said you love me Rahul..."

superb!!!!👏

Anjali and Gappu's conversation was sweet, but i really thought he was going to tell her about Minnie...maybe next time! Anjali ordering Armaan around was another bit that brought a smile. perfect mother hen, reminded me of my own mother!😊

Armaan and Riddhima interaction was missing...but even the milli second interaction brought about sparks! Loved it. just one question, why didn't chirag talk to Armaan? Didn't get that! continue super soon...will be waiting!!

loads of love,

mia

ps: I don't know why but this part had a feeling of tying up of loose ends...are you by any chance planning to end this? so soon...??? you have atleast another 12 letters to go...N to Z!! can't end it before you reach Z, its just not fair.

pps: yeah, that little mention of Calcutta again...love the city!!

Edited by everlastingword - 16 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#227

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A beautifully written emotional part NJ.... RM scene was just perfect... no words more to say how I felt reading it..it was just too good.... whats with Vivek now.. did he die or what.. hmm...this guy is always up to create confusion in everyone's life.. hate him to the core.. continue soon with the next part hun...

PS: My prayers for ur friend and his family. that was quite unfortunate...take care...

Edited by Prasanthi - 16 years ago

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#228

reserved for now Nj, which might take awhile for me to get back to this post :p

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#229

*reserved =D

hitting the sack now...will comment when back tom! =D

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#230

Wow, long part!!!

Sorry to hear about your house-mate's loss...moments like that when we realize what things in life are really important.

Rahul-Muskaan's loss brought them closer together. Poor Armaan still tortured by the "somehting's going on" feeling. At least he had a chance to tell his side of the story regarding his past to Atul.

👏👏👏