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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sujata23

gr8 part

plz pm me wen u update

thanks
yeah sure will pm you wen i update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: prernadeewani

hey sanaya.......... superbbbbbbb
plsss continue soon n ya dnt forget to pm me
wid lov
neha...

thanku sooooo much will update soon n don worry abt the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey saniya
loved it...pls pm me when u continue
-ridhima

thanks
will pm wen i continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: bradford3

plz continue soon your really gud for an beginner plz continue soon

thankyou
next update will b very soon
sanaya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: mossfur

loved it

please cont soon
please pm me

thanks
will pm wen i update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: hajialiya

cotninue soon
and pm when u update plz

thankyou
will pm wen i update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
It sounds cute so far...=D
I liked Muski-Armaan's interaction!
Do continue soon...And if possible...Do PM me 2!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Part 2

Sapna was reading a book in the garden ,enjoying the bright sunlight and cool breeze when she saw Armaan coming towards her .She smiled and called out-

"Armaan?.Armaan?When did you come back?"

"Just a few hours ago baby" replied Armaan.

"How is Muskaan and rahul bhai?"

" They are fine. Rahul has finally got his new job and?" but Sapna interrupted excitedly.

" And Muski bhabhi? I am sure she is angry wid you..i mean diet"

Armaan was just about to tell sapna about Muskaan when a commotion broke out.

A small truck had pulled into the yard with luggage piled high. Most of the people who were there in the garden came together to see who had come. Some people who lived in the apartment also peeped out their heads to see.

"Oh!" thought Armaan. "New tenants for Habitat Greens! thats nice."

"Just got the news today. Its a girl. Has come here to complete her studies I guess." said Sapna, looking at Armaan.

"Is it ?" questioned he.

"Aanhan .Mr Sen told me."

The truck stopped.A white mercedes stopped behind.Three people got out.

A slight young man wearing a pair of jeans and a black shirt. Dark hair. Glasses?.Then a tall lady, wearing a blue suit came out. And then-

.............A young girl got out. Probably 15 or 16. "but she looks younger" thought Armaan.She was ...Armaan thought...She was fragile. Soft and light and delicate as thistledown.Fair of face. Beautiful emerald eyes.Very long hair and the colour of swiss chocolate.The sunlight caught glints of gold in it.Her voice when she said:

" Oh jiju ! Its awesome. " laced through Armaan's chest and lodged beneath his ribs. Forever.

" Just as you wanted ridz. I am sure you will not be bored. "said Anjal smiling at Riddhima.

Riddhima had tears in her eyes. She was surely gonna miss her family, especially her sister and jiju. She was really fond of them.She rubbed off her tears and said -

"Thankyou so much Di and Jiju. I love it.And yup just as I wanted."

"You are welcome Riddhima " replied Atul. "Now lets go up. Lets see if you like your flat as well."

"Yeah sure jiju."

"Armaan?Armaan?.Armaan" screamed Sapna. "Kahan kho gaya tu?"

" hm? Oh no no nothing. Tu bol na."

" She seems nice. Bahut koobsural bhi hai. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. We can take her. Tujhe koi problem hai.. I mean?tere flat ke opposite rehene wali hai? to.."

"WHAT" said Armaan with a shocked expression. " What did you say? Mere flat ke opposite.? 12 B?... lekin wahan to wo ???kya naam tha?.?.oh haan ? Vishal?.reheta tha na?

"Chale gaye" said sapna , thinking deeply about something.

"Kahan?"

"UK"

"Oh yah I forgot."

" Maine soch liya." Sapna said turning to Armaan.

"Kya?"

"You'll have to go and ask her."

"But we all can go." He said with a frown on his face.

"Nahi. She is new here . Itne sare bandaro ko ek saath dekhke ghabra jayegi. Hum sab meise tujhme thora sa zyada aakal hai to tu hi jaakar use baatkarega. Mein aur kuch nahi sunna chathi." With that Sapna took her book from the garden table and went towards one of the kids.

"Hum sab main se tujhme thora zyada aakal hai.. tu jayega" said Armaan, making faces and trying to imitate Sapna . "Lekin jaane mein koi problem nahi hai. She's nice ?... Beautiful."

"Kya naam tha? Oh ya riddhima.. Naam bhi yaar usiki tarha beautiful? hehe."Armaan said sheepishly.

That was part 2. hope you all liked it

Thanks
Sanaya

Edited by sanaya.basu123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Thanks😊
sanaya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
hey ur intro sounds good
cnt wait 2 read more
updte sooon n can u pm plz
nizma x

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