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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey everyone!!!!! I am Sanaya Basu , new to this forum. Just logged in cause i wanted to write a ff on my favourite couple Armaan and Riddhima.This is the first time i am writing a story or a fanfiction rather so please bear with the mistakes i make and please please please comment because i will not be proceeding without comments(hope i am not sounding rude).I haven taken some ideas from stories and articles i have read so sorry if it resembles to any other ffs or stories.

Regarding the ff-The main characters are Armaan and Riddhima who are different from what we see in DMG and same goes with the others(Muskaan, Rahul,Anjali, Atul and all).I have used some names from MJHT as well.This ff has some twists and turns but u all may find it boring at first, so sorry for that.

So here it goes-Part 1

12:00 PM, Delhi ( The Malliks' )

The hilsa on the table in front of him had been cooked with cumin seeds and green chillies and was ripe with roe.The prawn, in a coconut curry, was next to it.On the left was the plump tangra fish cooked in mustard.The fried chicken was already on his dinner plate, and the red mutton winked seductively from a bowl.

He was visiting his bhabhi Muskaan and bhai Rahul in Delhi who thought he was in need of some serious nourishing.It was a great meal and he enjoyed every bit of it,not because it was cooked by his dear bhabi but for the food was absolutely delicicous.But there was just one hitch-He was on a diet!!!

"Oh!! no no !! no more bhabhi please i am full ",cried Armaan while Muskaan was finding a place in Armaan's plate to put another morsel of chicken.

"Kya no no? Halat dekh apna.Just look at yourself Armaan.What is the reason in following such a stupid diet? Mujhe to koi muscles nahi dikh raha!!" screamed Muskaan who was very angry with Armaan.

"Bhabhi ? I just started working out a couple of days ago, so itni jaldi aapko muscles kaise dikhai degi? and baat rahi diet ki, if you just eat those fruits for one day and then start having these fish, chicken and mutton,you will never..."

" Armaan, you don't have to listen to Muskaan,have your lunch and get some rest.You need to catch your flight at 3. " said Rahul who was irritated with the continuous bickering going on between his wife and broher.

" Accha accha theek hai theek hai. Lets talk about your college" cried Muskaan who wanted to talk to Armaan as they hardly met each other because Armaan lived in Mumbai and they in delhi and also because Muskaan loved Armaan a lot because he was the only one she had except for Rahul.

"Thats better" said rahul looking at his wife's kiddish behaivior.

"College is going good .I got into the good books of the teachers at last. I feel its really tough for a new student to impress the teachers and adjust with the other students as well, but it was quite easy, or rather very easy for me cause I scored the highest in all subjects.", replied Armaan proudly while rahul and Muskaan smiled at him.

" ... N what about the place? I,mean i hope you have adjusted with the inmates of the apartment as well?" ,questioned Muskaan.

"I met a few people till now but i guess everything will be fine as well,when i meet the rest"

"Thats great!!"cried Muskaan excitedly."looks like our Armaan has grown up"

"Ofcourse Bhabhi .I am 20. Aap bhi na !! baccho jaise baat kare rahete ho" replied Armaan surprisingly.

"Ok now no more gap shap.Armaan You really need some rest.You look very tired.."

"Kaha tha na maine ...us diet se kuch nahi hota p.." interrupted Muskaan

"Muskaan please" said Rahul.

"Ok as you say bhai." Armaan replied nodding his head.
Getting up from his chair,Armaan headed toward the guest room. He had a jolly good time with his brother and bhabhi.After he shifted to Mumbai for college ,he was missing them a lot.Though it was only two months he shifted but still, they were the only one he had.
1:15 PM Delhi ( The Guptas' )
"Aur ekbar dekle Ridzi,kuch rehegaya to"
"How can you even say that Anji di?" replied Riddhima pointing at the 10 luggage bags lying on the floor.
"Hey Riddhima I m gonna miss you very much.Mumbai jana zaruri hai kya?"
"Di mein aur ro nahi sakti. I guess i have only 20% water left in me intead of 70%." replied riddhima who was trying very hard to stop herself.........but atlast she broke down.
" I'll miss u too di. Aapke pas to Mum hai, Da hai aur Atulbhai bhi hai but I'll be all alone there. I never even went to Mumbai before." said Riddhima , crying.
" Lekin mere pass tu nahi hogi naa."..... "Aur jagha ke liye chinta mat kar.I am sure you will adjust with the neighbours very soon. Mein aur Atul bhi jayenge na once a month tujhe milne, to itni kyun ro rahi hai? " said Anjali who was trying to console Riddhima.
" but di..." said Riddhima but Anjali interupted.
" no no no baby , no more crying . Lets change .Have to leave at 4.
Ok that was Part 1.Please comment. Next part will be soon i guess.
Part 1-Page 1
Part 2-Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww amaziin sweetie
do continue sooon
and remember to PM me hehe
veryyyyyyyyyyyy gooood
can't wait for the next part
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hey sanaya.......... superbbbbbbb
plsss continue soon n ya dnt forget to pm me
wid lov
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyou soooooooooooo much . did not expect any comment so soon. yeah i will continue soon. thanks Sanaya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey saniya
loved it...pls pm me when u continue
-ridhima
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plz continue soon your really gud for an beginner plz continue soon
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loved it

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cotninue soon
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gr8 part
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Originally posted by: swansea

awwwwwwwwwww amaziin sweetie

do continue sooon
and remember to PM me hehe
veryyyyyyyyyyyy gooood
can't wait for the next part
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thankyou will continue soon
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