*~*^IDEAL DESTINATION^*~* part 7 uptd in pg 22 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: dhruviarmaanfan

Hey Pooja... U din't remember me. Right.😭😭

I m very very angry with u😡. Tum FF likhti ho aur apni Dii.. ko bataya bhi nahi🥺. Mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni hai..😒
Apart from this, ur FF is superb, mindbolwing, u r an awesome writer.. I loved ur concept.😃. Very diff. concept from others. Woh toh aacha hai ki me aise hi surf kar rahi thi toh I found that u r write a Fanfic....Good sabko yaad rakha par mujhe bhul gai kyu???😭
Now This is my order u have to Pm me whenever u update a part....Awesome yaar appreciate ur work, I m impressed...N ya mujhe meri ff continue karne me time lagega bcoz of the situation at my home....
Ha par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki I m not angry Samji....

heyyy diiii sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry soory sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry😭................................................................................................
sach main dii apko batana chahti thi but i dont know y i was lil bit hesitant to say....................... i thought this ff is nothing before ur ff n u wont like it...............
aur aap itne din online nahi aaye tho socha it wud b better if i wont disturb u soooooooooooooo.................
aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki aap apni sis se zyada der tak gussa nahi reh sakti😛.........................
so ab aap mujhe fauran maaf kardo aur sweet si smile dedo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
WAISE MUJHE PATA HAI KI AAPKI NAARAAZGI ZYAADA DER TIKNE WAALI NAHI HAI PAR PHIR BHI.........😛😛
I M VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY SORRY😭😭😭
LOVE U DIII............ FORGIVE ME NAAA..............
ek aur baat diiii i m very glad that u liked my work............. 🤗oooooooooooh my happiness knew no bounds really🤗
Edited by sweetiecutie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Shaz_rani

Hey pooja di...........
just caught up with all teh update ...
Love it.... gr8 writing........ Im waiting for the update........
awesome ..
LOVE U
RANI

YAAR RANI THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR COMMENTING
I M GLAD THAT U LIKED IT
WILL UPDATE SOOOON N YA KEEP COMMENTING
LOVE U TOOO DEAR
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
😭

Originally posted by: sweetiecutie

YAAR RANI THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR COMMENTING
I M GLAD THAT U LIKED IT
WILL UPDATE SOOOON N YA KEEP COMMENTING
LOVE U TOOO DEAR


😭😭.. phr say thanku........... anyways u r very welcome...... jaldi update karu na plzzzzzzzzz,,,,,,,,,, desperately waiting



Edited by Shaz_rani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Shaz_rani

😭
😭😭.. phr say thanku........... anyways u r very welcome...... jaldi update karu na plzzzzzzzzz,,,,,,,,,, desperately waiting



ok ab no sorry no thank u directly update😉😉
ab tho smile kardo...............😊😊
luv yaa
pooja
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Hey Pooja when r u going to update sweety....Plz inform
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey amazing update
loved the concept
cont soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
😊heyyyy sorry guyss for late update i just hope u all dont mind for that
n i wanna say thank u (rani madam ko chodke heheheheh😃😃😃) all for supporting me
i wanna dedicate this part to all of u friends
Dhruvi dii,rani,mahima, susha, aliya, sweetaddiction, kashish, radhika, kash crazy, swansea, yamnovbloom, bradford, rhea, sakshi, teju, anupama, anjie, sujata, sreejoyee, kajal,nidha dii, kinjal

so here it goes.........

😊rahul's family arrives ridhima's home😊


(pandit jii, rahul n rahul's mom n dad (arnav[hope some of u remember this name, kitni mast hai zindagi ka karan] n sheena garewal )
sha: (moves to the enterence) namastey mr.garewaal aayeye......😊
arn: (shakes his hand) hello mr.gupta n they all enter into the house
padma serves them all with tea n after that shashank asks her to bring ridhima as she will b busy in doing make up(lolz)
muskaan n ridhima will b disintegrating steps 😛😛
while disintegrating steps muskaan looks at rahul n whispers in ridzi's ears
mus: waah ridzi dii bada handsome ladka hai...........
n ridzi😳😳 will b biting her nails........ after reaching downstairs
ri: (nervously) namaste....... n settles on the sofa n muskaan sits on the arm of the sofa
all others will b having their chit chats when rahul speaks out
ra: 😊(to ridhima) kya main aapse akele main kuch baat kar sakta hoo
ri:looks at her father
sha: haa haa sure beta ku nahi......... muskaan??? (n signals her with eyes to take them to terrace)
they will reach terrace n talk for sometime
after talking for some time they come down n rahul asks for some time to let them take some decision n they all leave after bidding bye to every one

scene shifts to armaan

he enters in to a charitable trust named "SANJEEVNI"
n settles on a chair near by as he sees that there r people already waiting to get in
after a long time receptionist calls out: Mr.Armaan malikk.........
ar:(he gets up) yup..
re: u may go in now
ar: thank u
n he enters the chair person's room
its a conference hall in which there is a u shaped table n all the board members n foriegn deligates r sitting round the table n at the open end of the table there is a big screen on one side n a small stage in the front n our armaan is gonna present his presentation
ar: gud evening every one!!!!! n he inserts a CD in the lappy whose image will b projected on the bigscreen
(he has been working on this project since many days) he starts explaining about his presentation which only n only focussed on the people who got suffered without getting the proper treatment not only due to the scarcity of medicines but also due to their poverty n also says the solution for that (he collects all the information from every place n was been very busy n may b this is the reason that he cudn't give time for nikki) n at last he concludes the presentation by saying that he will be oblidged if they supported him in establishing a charitable hospital n make it a big success n says THANK U

at first no one atters a word but later one foriegn deligate stands up clapping for him followed by the other board members
the chairperson comes to him n says: WELL DONE!!!!!!!! u have done a great job..... the project u have worked on is not at all easy n u have done a fabulous job......👏
ar: thank u sir
ch: not only that the board members r soo impressed that they are ready to help u in any manners
ar:( with a broad smile on his face) thank u thank u soo much sir n he shakes his hands....
from back a secretry comes n hands the chairman a check
ch: n this one is for u........ u have been appointed as a member of this trust n we'll b soon looking after to start the construction.....
(the chairperson gives him the appointment letter n also 1 lakh.rs check in advance)

he takes the letter n check n rushes to nikki's home

armaan holds nikki's hand n head towards terrace
ar: 😊😊nikki jaldi chalo mujhe tumse ek baat kehni hai.............
ni: armaan batao na kya baat hai.....
ar: arey tum chalo tho sahi main batata hu....... agar tum ye baat sunogi tho chakkar aakar neeche gir jaaogi aur agar tumhaare papa ne sun liya tho ye building k uper se kood kar apna jaan de denge.😆........
ni: armaan batao aisi kya baat hai.....
ar:😃😃 huh batata hu n he makes her settle down on the chair n he himself settles beside her n says pehle apni aankhe band karo n she does so n he will b in a verge of taking out the check from hiis pocket to show her wen her cell rings which will b on the table before them (the person who calls is none other than ABHIMANYU) it will be showing "abhi calling" n nikki tries to pick it wen armaan speaks out
ar: 😭😭nikki mujhe baat karne main 2 min se zyaada nahi lagenge plzz call baad main lift karna pehle meri baat suno.....
ni: do minute armaan main abhi aayee n she runs to a side n stars speaking "hey abhi (n blushes).... she talks for sometime n says "hey abhi i'll call u back later byee"...... (again blushes) "ya byee"...
she then comes to armaan n says
ni: 😕sorry sorry armaan haa ab jaldi batao kya baat hai n she closes her eyes
ar: (he listens the convo between nikki n abhi n gets more n more dishearted😭😭😭 n decides not to show her the check) nikki batao itne saalo main tum kabhi ek minute k liye kam se kam ek second k liye mujhe apna husband jaisa imagine kiya?????
ni: (opens her eyes) 😡😡😡armaan ye bataane mujhe tum yaha lekar aaye???..............ab chod do armaan abhi iske baare main baat karke koi faida nahi hai... marriage date bhi fix ho gaya hai, marriage wo haridwaar main karna chahte hai..
ar: nikki kya kare tho tumhaara decision change hoga???...... agar main 1 lakh .rs kamakar dikhaau tho chalega????
ni: armaan tum sirf bolte ho.. karte kuch nahi..
ar: sach kaha nikki tumne sahi kaha.....😕😕😕

scene shifts to ridhima:

ridhima n muski enter into a garments company
ri: (to the receptionist) hello i have a 9 'o' clock appointment
re: just a second n she calls up some one n she hangs the fone after speaking something
re: yaa ma'am u can go now
muskaan will be sitting outside n ridzi enters M.D's room
ri: hello sir i m ridhima gupta n farwards her hand to shake
M.D: he shakes his hand n holds it for quite sometime n tell her to sit
ri:(in her mind) ridhima isne tujhe fraud shakehand diya hai... be careful..
n she shows him all her collection (garments)
ri:so how do u like my collection???
M.D: yaa they are nice.... we'll meet one of these days.... ho sakta hai aaj raat ko???
ri: (she understands the bad intentions in his mind speaks) this is my portfolio (hands him over a file) n if u like it plzz call me n she stands n turns around to leave wen the man catches her hand
M.D: hey wait where r u going???? n she tries to free her hannd n in that attempt her bangles break n she gets hurt
M.D: (leaves her hand) ohh i m sorry
ridhima gives him THE look n walks out from there

mus: dii kya hua?? aap itne gusse main ku ho
ti: kuch nahi muskaan chalo yahan se

at night
ridzi, muski, shashi n paddy will b havin dinner
padma sees that ridzi's hand is bleeding n she at once stand uo n starts asking her
pa: ridhima ye chot kaise lagi???..... jab se dekh rahi hoo na kuch baat karti ho na kuch khaati ho kya baat hai batao????
ri: (angrily) maa tum baito kuch nahi hua hai.... itna scene create karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai......... aaj subah main apne kapde(garments) pack karke aate waqt ek fraud ne mujhe rokne ki koshish ki aur bangles toot gaye.............
shashank gets very angry that he washes his hand in the plate n walks from the dining table
sha: (angrily) OVER N DONE!!!!!! ab tumhe koi bhi bussuness karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.... maine pehle hi kaha tha ki doctor study hone k baad ek achi si job
karo lekin nahi karli na apni man maani ab dekho.... kya hua n just then ridhima stamps her foot n leaves from there crying
sha: huh gussa karne main tho koi kam nahi hai........ main kal hi jaake us show room ko lock karke aata hoo aur wo ladke waale (rahul) ko haa bol deta hoo ab main ek lavz nahi sunna chahta
pad:shashank aap plzz chup rehiye thodi der
sha: padma tum beech main mat bolo plzz......... aur waise bhi galti tho hamari hi hai uski har icha puri karke yaha tak lekar aaye hum ise jab ye pant shirt pehnna shuru kiya tabhi ise rok lena chahiye tha...
pad:😊 (pats his back) kyaa shashank aap bhi bacho ki tarah zid karne lage...chaliye khana kha lijiye
sha: 😡ku gussa sirf use hi aati hai kyaa mujhe nahi???? main tab tak khaana nahi khaunga jab tak wo shaadi ke liye haa nahi kahegi....

next day
ridhima 😡😡will b watching t.v making a face n shashank will be siting in front of her
sha:(very politely)😊😊ridhima beta shayad tumhe gussa aa raha hai lekin tum hamaari responsibilities k baare main bhi kuch socho............ ridhima kuch tho baat karo beta??
ridhima doesnt respond to him n continues to watch tv
sha: ridhima pehle t.v off karo...n he goes n settles beside her.... ridhima main tumse baat kar raha hoo t.v off karo (she switches off the t.v)waise bhi tum par gussa hone se mujhe khushi hogi kya tum hi batao..............
ri: (turns her face to opposite side n speaks very sweetly) maaaaaaaa pehle inse kaho mujhe sorry kahe😆😆...... bewajah gussa ho gaye the kal ye mujh par...aur beech main mere pant shirts ne kya kiya???? 😆😆
sha: (smiles n holds his ears) acha baba i m sorry ab tho mujhe maaf kardo....
ri: kisine kuch kiya tho aap mjh par ku gussa ho gaye????😭 aur kuch bhi ho tho aap mere show room aur shaadi ko ku link karte hai????
sha: ridhima beta zindigi main thodi der tak hum tumhaare saath rahenge aur uske naad wo saath tumhe baahar se milna chahiye aur wo bhi ek pati se.......
ri: wo bhi tho ek mard hi thi hai na wo mujhe support karega ya maar dalega kisko pata???😭😭😭
sha: aisi baat nahi hai ridhima...
ri: mujhe aap par kuch bhi gussa nahi hai papa....... bas aaj tak is dharti par azaadi se jeeke, har kaam sabke saath karke aaj ek ladke ki wajah se mere show room ko lock karna pada, mere ambitions ko thodna pad raha hai.....bas yahi chinta hai mujhe
sha: may be wo ek ladke ki wajah se tum apne khud chune hue carrier main aage jaao??? kya pata???
ri: thanks agar aisa hoga tho tab main haa bolungi
sha: aisa hone k liye tumhe shaadi karni hoga na beta
ri: waise bhi papa mujhe ye standard jobs karne waale bilkul ache nahi lagte...... ek job, chota sa site, bache, retirement plan etc etc.....
sha: tho beta unse kuch tho batana padega na (to rahul's parents)
ri: huh.. papa plzz n she leaves that room n enters into her room
sha: ridhimaaaaa ek baar rahul ke baare main socho beta....
ri: (sleeping on bed n thinking to herself) ridhimaaa ek baar rahul k baare main soch.........(she closes hr eyes n thinks) smile????.... ok...height?????? fine........ touch???????(she shakes her hand wen she met him) ummmm ok......... ab FINAL TEST agar main use kiss karu tho??????????😕😕 (she suddenly open her eyes) (irritatingly)huhh itna bura bhi nahi lag raha......... aur waise bhi ridhima sabko SHAHRUKH KHAN 😆jaisa pati thodi na milega we have to just adjust thats it.......
ri:(shouts) papaaaa OKK..........😊😊
shashank feels vety happy after listening this n he rushes to call panditjii
pad: shaadi HARIDWAAR main hona chahiye.......... unhone kaha ki unhone mannat maangi gui hai..........😛😛😛

thank u😊

preCAP: AR meeting
ridhima: (to herself) huhhh how dare he... usne ridhima,,, ridhima gupta ko touch kiya nahi nahi lift kiya ....😡😡😡
ri: oye hello tumne mujhe wo... waha lift ku kiya????
armaan: wo actually tum wo plank par disco kar rahi thi tho socha main help kardoo😊😊😊
ri: ahaha meri kaan main tumhe cauliflower nazar aa rahi hai kya??? ladki dikhne main achi hai agau use utaunga tho ek kaam ho jayaga ..... yahi socha tha na tumne????😡😡😡
ohk friends thats it for today
i know kaafi boring aur saddaa hua part hai but plzzzz bare with me n yaa plzz jitni ho sake utni critisize bhi kare i dont mind but leave ur siincere comments
N YAA YE MERI LAST N FINAL UPDATE HAI 😭😭😭(FEB MAIN OFFCOURSE huh aap sabne kya socha main IF se exit ho jaungi😉😉😉.... hehe itni aasani se peecha nahi chodungi main aap sabka😃😃) N I'LL B ABLE TO UPDATE THE NEXT PART ONLY AFTER MARCH 19th coz of exams 12 boards so hope u all dont mind n yaa plzzzz keep commenting
love u all❤️
Edited by sweetiecutie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
it was really gud just cant wait to read armaan and ihdimmas meeting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~edited....~

lovely update di.........
just mind blowing..........loved it
looking forward to the meeting.......
do update soon and thnx for the pm


Edited by rajorakajal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
looool u scared me leaving us!!!
lool ur updte was great feel bad 4 arman
but hey arman n ridz mde 4 eachovr lol
really nice updte grl
updte sooon n cnt wait 4 ar meeting
sounds gd lool
gd luck wiv ur exams n wil wait 4 ur updte
n thx 4 da dedicated that was really sweet
but ur wrk is great =D
nizma x

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