Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147

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Hima

@k_anjali12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1131

hai dear😊

sorry for the late reply😳about the part I just loved it😊n AR part is really very cute one yaar😊hope he will cook for her at the net time😍thank u so much for the pm😊continnue soooon😍

Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago

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@guggu

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1132

*Reserved* : )
Will comment soon now!!

*Edited*

I said na in my last comment that I will comment super fast now, so here I am, ecstatic about being so early for the first time in my life. And the similar reaction was when I read the very first line of this part. Here pops again the Scarlet Pimpernel! I only hope that you could have stretched this part a bit because like Ridhima even I seem to be fascinated by the character after I read the book, thanks to you I didin't miss the great novel and I love reading how you put it into your story!! I was really grinning as I read this Scarlet Pimpernel part, believe me and due to this very reason, this portion was the best among the others!!! And finally every one jumped on the boat 'Armaan Ridhima Teaser'. I was expecting this! And I am happy to see this specially when that 'oooohhhh' part came!!

Muskaan... great to see her chirpy again like she always used to be. The way character has been portrayed, I can never imangine her to be sad and subdued at all. And I hope her 'desi munda' who she refers to here is none another than Rahul himself even if she does not realise this. Oh God! What I am talking? It has to be him! And I bet that she and Rahul can prepare a constitution like thing about how Ridhima is and whatever she does. Going on and on as if Armaan is going to marry her the very next instant and they are warning him to back off when there is time! 😃

The meal was a hilarious part really when the dessert was delivered. I was laughing as I imagined the look on Armaan's face when he was not able to find the dessert! Heheheh... All through the other part of the meal, it was very formal and yet very lovable seriously! By the way, I wanted to ask you one thing. From where did you get the idea of naming the restaurant as 'Shatranj Napoli'? It was very different not to forget humourous as well!

I am glad that Armaan finally talked it out with Anjali even if the conversation couldn't possibly reach its end. I admire Armaan and anjali's relationship. Very real and the friendship, I hope, is strong enough to stand the test of time. All in all a treat to read again, I repeat!

The AR poblem, I hope you solve it soon in the next part now. I think that all the matters will be resolved. And please please please don't wrap it up so fast. I mean it's just the second thread na, let it complete at least the full third thread as well. I think the next part will be in the next thread. I wait for that as well!

And you know what, you are by far the most intelligent being I ever came across really. I mean, how much do you know? Every time after the part I sit reading the note you put up, I sigh not because it is boring but beacuase of the fact that how mych that brain of yours can contain. I wish to read all the wonderful novels you mentioned in this FF but unfortunately I wasn't able to find them in the library. I am so into novels that I can't wait to get my hands on these! Enjoy your stay in Egypt!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1153520/ar-the-sense-of-infinite-spring-note-imp-pg-96
This is the link to my FF. The sense of infinite Spring. Though it is nowhere close to your league of writing, I have put my best efforts into it. I just hope you like it and I will eagerly wait to see what you say about this!! Update as soon as you can!

Love you!
Swati... 🤗

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shriya

@shriya12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1133

reserved..

here i m..yeaaa!!finally we get some quality AR scenes..the teasing part..i love it whr atul muskaan try n corner riddhima..n the date part..haha..i was jus thinking armaan was being a lil too gentlemanly(if thrs such a word) n now we know y...armaan capable of doin smthng to impress his lady love..grt .i was beginning to think he was the ideal,seriously in love kinda guy...grt idea armaan..but poor guy had to get caught😆..i may hv said ths b4 too,i simply adore riddhima's char..shes the ideal one here wth her adorable flaws as well as mature undstnding..atul was a real sweethrt here..smtms while reading i wish they had actualli made atul's char like tht in the show...like mature n undstnding..if not tht atlst.his char cud hv been taken a lil seriously....abt anjie i think i wudnt say much..i cn jus make out hw she mus be feeling but then avoiding a situatn doesnt help either..hope she tries n undstnds tht..shes like trying to hold on to armaan...all in all it was a gud update but i wud also add thr was smthng lacking in the AR part..like u said nt overtly romantic..but its nt tht..jus tht they seemed too formal for bng in love wth each other..if u get wht i mean..but i seriously liked the part..n the fractal thing..thanks for giving us such infos...lik smbdy said..evn i wud hv to refer to a lexicon jus to get the meanings of the words u hv used...grt update indeed!

abt alexandria,u get to knoe such amazing things whn u travel,isnt it??m like always scrolling to the bottom to read the foot notes abt the different places u been to..love 'em...keep writing...c ya!

shriya

Edited by shriya12 - 16 years ago

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Janvi Sehgal

@dazzlingstar

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1134

hey sam di, not the first one to reserve but the first one to comment so YAYYI YAYYI YUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway coming to the part it was awesome as usual( i need to open the dictionary to find new words to appreciate ur work!!) the teasing session, the cooking fiasco, rahul n muskaan convo as well as anjali breaking down all were very well described. di plz update next part real soon plz plz plz luv ya loads

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Lavender21

@Lavender21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1135

Hey awesome part!! When anajli waz breaking down that waz very well wriiten and the convo between rahul and muskan waz awesome. Plzzz do continue soon!!!

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smriti

@smriti.tweety

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1136

Hi!!!!!!

Guess I should get habitual of writing about each part being the best so far; but truly the fan fic keeps getting better with every part!⭐️

Loved each and every part of it! The highlight of the part was definitely the Armaan ' Anjali conversation for me. I totally loved the way you've articulated her reactions. Beautifully written and realistically portrayed! I actually felt like reaching out and hugging her. Stupid of me considering its fiction; but I guess thats the power of ur writing! Kudos!👏

The whole restaurant scene had me in splits!🤣

Gr8 to see an entire AR scene! Didn't realize I was missing their romance so much till I read that bit. This one had me splits again!😃

Good to see that at least Rahul's taken the initiative if not Muskaan. Again a wonderfully written scene! Looking forward to Muskaan's confession.

Finally, I kind of missed Ankit's presence in this entire scenario. i mean maybe an insight into how he thinks he should take his relationship further with Ridhima or maybe something on a similar track.

Eagerly awaiting the next one!😊

Love

Smriti

Edited by smriti.tweety - 16 years ago

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1137

yayyyy u updated :D

reserved!!!

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superb..wonderful...amazing..and a beautiful update sam!!!

the teasing session was soooo fab...atul and muskaan being down-right devils...but was extremely happy to have the chirpy and fun-loving muskaan back...and armaan teasing her back and rahul intervening and alll...really good sam...

muskaan and rahul listing out riddhima's likes and dislikes...and armaan piping in the one of them...i was actually surprised to read it coz my likes n dislikes are sooo very similar...and some of them exactly the same...

armaan showing her his study and planning the future...armaan's antics just to please her was cute and funny...i knew there was something fishy and aaaha, it turns out that he didnt cook it at all...armaan's description of her reaction was fantastic...they are sooo very cute :D

atul and armaan's talks...and atul's advice over anji was really good...hope its sorted out quickly...

RM...finally atleast somebody confessed...their fight and her shock when he expressed his feelings was well-written...hope she confesses soooooon as well...

armaan and anji most awaited talk which is still not finished was nice...anji's state of mind was damn well-described...i agree she needs time to sort it out herself...but hope she does talk to armaan once atleast...

great part once again :)

awaiting the next one...

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1138

hey sam
amazing parts yaar
read 2-3 together
had a lot of fun reading them
feeling bad for angie
but loved AR moments
the restaurant scene was hilarious
loved RM too
sorry for short n late comments
my exams had got over last week only

will comment in detail later

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1139

*reserved...forever late as i am.

Kiran

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#1140

heya sam!

tons of AR yeah....but like u said....lacks the romance...not in the terms of their jolly gathering but the depth of their doing....cuz as i know it ...romance is much more than temptations, kisses and hugs.. :)

i think i liked rahul n muskaan..not my favorite.....but considerably well taken...maybe i dont like how u underplay muskaan....or maybe i like how u let rahul have the last call :D i am confused!

anjali-armaan...like someone told me ...its become a drag...but hopefully this is it for them...next time you bring them up....i am hoping teyll be in better terms...:D

overall it was a update well liked by me...cheers!

~nijaL