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maaneet_crazy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#771

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hey kiran

amazing part!!!!!!!

d AS convo was a totally unexpected 1.........

nd so armaan is stuck now......

do upd d nxt part asap.....let's see wat nikki advices him....

Edited by dmg_crazy - 16 years ago

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#772

I swear dii no one can right the way yu do...The whole Armaan-Shashank scene was just how DMG wud have had... Yu wont understand it, but am really very proud to know a someone like yu..love yu!!

P.S. The best line of the whole part was:

Armaan: maine aaj takk kisi aur ko ussay haath bhi nahi laganay diya, kyunki who sirf ap ki beti nahi hai sir'who meri amanat bhi hai'

Please continue sooooooooooooon!!

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Wrackspurt

@Wrackspurt

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Posted: 16 years ago

#773

Hi Kiran i have been a silent reader of your FF for a long time......but i feel i should comment now..........you right really well👏.......sometimes i really wish that the original DMG was like your FF..........i really loved the way how you portrayed the transformation of Atul from a funny fellow to someone matured.........now i am feeling worried about Armaan.....hope everything sorts out.........nikki will help i guess.
............Paromita😃

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irrum

@irrum

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Posted: 16 years ago

#774

great fantabolous out of this world trust me i m out of words an excellent update wonderful it was like as if i am actually watching the whole scene take place kiran the wait was worth it- plus if u remember the scene between amitabh and shahrukh in mohabatein this part was as good as that one u truly r a great writer....loved it do continue soon

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surbhi1008sg

@surbhi1008sg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#775

hey kiran di
it was a very nice part..😊

continue soon..

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devanshi_

@devanshi_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#776

heyy! kiran!!

thnx soo much upd!!

it rocked!!!!!!

it was really good!

am really scared of armaan!!!

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hydrogurl001

@hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#777

omg great part! hmm..so armaan's problems w/ his parents are out! i hope things get well soon! plz cont soon!

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#778

haye koi shashank ko akal do

nice prt

cont sooooon

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#779

wow..so really didnt want to give him a chance at all..and was just provoking him...good thing that armaan didnt fall to the bait at fierst...but after all that shashank said abt their love...i feel proud thathe answered abck!

wonder wha twill happennext

cant wait pls pls do continu esoon pls di!

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ridzie4u2nv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#780

dii yet agen u hv dissappointed me wid not posting da part even though u had posted a lovely but very short part before but nowadays u miss 2 updates even last week u gave us one update n even dis week diii wats up huh anyways do continue on monday or tuesday as i and others will b waiting