&time stood still:MayUr FF(Last Pt Upted ,pg.31)

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

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Posted: 16 years ago

#211

hey

excellent update.....my favorite part of was the comparisons.....the 'spongebob without squarepants' was my favorite one...that one cracked me up....great job!

Kepp Writing!!!!

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#212

gr8 one sunita yaar

awesome update once again....loved the comparison

..JOHN WITHOUT HIS BODY....

it was awesome and for a change evrythng went fine....evn i was surprised but i know sumthng is coming up for mayur aheah...and i am waiting eagerly for it...

loved the father-in-law and would-be-son-in-law interaction

mayank's feelings were soo natural ....

my fav. part was when mayank started thnking that nupur got her smile from her mom and eyes from dad----soo like mayank

loved it completely..............update sooooon

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#213

Firstly thanks for ur pm and then ur update
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!👏
Specially comparing it to the examination point of view...And yea
Mayank never fails....And his comparison to what would happen
if he couldn't get Nupur was so cute....The way u described the whole meeting part was truly so factual...Loved it.🤗
Do update soon and pm me

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#214

wow sunita....

luvd d comparisons......

mayank wil surely get distinction in dis exams too.....

mayank and nupur,.... nupur and mayank......

luvd each and evry word of d part.....

continue soon......

thanx 4 d PM......

keep PMing.......

luv ya.....

poori......

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#215

Thankss guysss.... I m glad u guys like it

Also just letting u guys kno this is one of the last episdoes i'll be writing .coz my exams are near and i need to end this story sooniesss..

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shruti

@shruti_poorva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#216

thanks for d pm....dis was aweeeeessooommme...the waiting part was worth it...fab yaar...perfectly written...i wish mjht mein bhi kuch aisa hota...do continue soon....

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: shruti_poorva
thanks for d pm....dis was aweeeeessooommme...the waiting part was worth it...fab yaar...perfectly written...i wish mjht mein bhi kuch aisa hota...do continue soon....

Thank you.. will surely continue soon :)

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#218

Hi Sunita!

Firstly Im so sorry for the late reply...😳...but hope you'll forgive me after this true from my heart comment:

Sunita you're writing makes even a simple story exciting! Such a simple tale of a guy meeting his girlfriends parents for the first time...but you described it so well and made it soo interesting to read I absolutely loved it!! I was so involved and I imagined each expression and pictured each scene as I went on. I love how you wrote this part from Mayank's perspective, it made things more interesting...you could've written it from Nupur's perspective or a neutral one but I think you rocked it with this amazing idea of yours!! I truely loved reading this part as all your other parts Sunita. I hope Mayank passed this crucial exam!

Can't wait to read on and thanks so much for the pm!!

Love you! 🤗

Pallavi

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: cute2stay
Hi Sunita!
Firstly Im so sorry for the late reply...😳...but hope you'll forgive me after this true from my heart comment:

Sunita you're writing makes even a simple story exciting! Such a simple tale of a guy meeting his girlfriends parents for the first time...but you described it so well and made it soo interesting to read I absolutely loved it!! I was so involved and I imagined each expression and pictured each scene as I went on. I love how you wrote this part from Mayank's perspective, it made things more interesting...you could've written it from Nupur's perspective or a neutral one but I think you rocked it with this amazing idea of yours!! I truely loved reading this part as all your other parts Sunita. I hope Mayank passed this crucial exam!

Can't wait to read on and thanks so much for the pm!!

Love you! 🤗

Pallavi

thnxx dearr , u always make my dayyy with ur loveli commentss

thnxx :)