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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#301

Awesome Nikki! Jaldi continue kar naa yaar. Itna wait kyun karvaati hai?Ab toh main regulary check bhi karti hoon updates ke liye. lol. I still don't see why Ridz would think that it was right to read Muskaan's message. Even if she was sleeping, it's not right of her to read someone else's message. Whatever. Anyway, kaise hai tu? Haven't talked to you in a while. Continue soon!!!

-Komz

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Awesome Nikki! Jaldi continue kar naa yaar. Itna wait kyun karvaati hai?Ab toh main regulary check bhi karti hoon updates ke liye. lol. I still don't see why Ridz would think that it was right to read Muskaan's message. Even if she was sleeping, it's not right of her to read someone else's message. Whatever. Anyway, kaise hai tu? Haven't talked to you in a while. Continue soon!!!

-Komz

komzii i was waiting for ur comment! arrey main kya karoon? im out of ideas! im writing the part and will post it today HOPEFULLY! haan check karti rehna kabhi na kabhi main update karungi, dont worry.

yeaa well if she didnt read the msg then how would she know??

main theek hun tu kaise hain?? i knoww rite its been quiet long. Anywayss will post my part soon.

Thankss for the comment

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#303

Part 23:

Ridhima: Muskaan uth

Muskaan: mmmm

Ridhima: Abhi Muskaan, humme bhar jaana hai.

Muskaan: mmmm

Ridhima: Jaldi uth na, sab tera wait kar rahe hain.

Muskaan: mujhe sona hai..

Ridhima: Lekin humme bhar jaana hai.

Muskaan: Toh tum log jao, aur mujhe sone de.

She said this and took a pillow and covered her face.

Ridhima: Fine as you wish.

She went out and left Muskaan alone in the room. Muskaan fell back asleep but not for too long. Suddenly there was a loud noise from the tv.

Muskaan: Ridhimaaaa tv ka awaz band kar please!

The volume went down.

Muskaan: Thank u! Tujhe bhar jaana tha na??

Rahul: Tu joh nahin gayi, main kaise jaata?

Muskaan immidiatly got up when she heard rahuls voice. Rahul was sitting on the bed next to hers.

Muskaan: Rahul! Tu mere room mein kya kar raha hai?

Rahul: tujhe dekhra tha, tu apne bal ko kabhi brush nahin karti muskaan?

Now she noticed that her hair couldn't get any worse, they were all over the place, half of it covering her face. She roughly just ran her hand through her hair and tied it up. Muskaan got up and went to sit next to Rahul. She rested her head on his shoulder.

Rahul: Teri tabiyaat theek hai Muskaan?

Muskaan: hmmm, sar mein bahut dard hai. Tu sab ke saath kyun nahin gaya?

Rahul: Tere sar mein joh dard hai, main kaise jaata? Aa main tumhare sar ka dar theek karta hoon.

Muskaan: Nahin, theek hai.

Rahul didnt listen to her, he just grapped her arm and made her lay down on his lap and slowly started massaging her head. Muskaan closed her eyes, she felt like she never had a headache.

Rahul: Tune mera msg ka jawaab kyun nahin diya?

Muskaan: Main sogayi thi. Oh shit!!

Muskaan jerked up to sitting.

Muskaan: Main toh bhul hi gayi!

Rahul: Kya???

Muskaan: Rahul, Ridhima ko sab kuch pata chal gaya.

Rahul: hmmm

Muskaan: hmm kya? Ab hum kya karen? Woh sab ko bata degi.

Rahul: Nahin woh sirf Armaan ko bata degi.

Muskaan: Then Armaan will tell everyone.

Rahul: mujhe lagta hai ki hummhe he sab logon ko batana chahiye, acha nahin lagta agar unko Ridhima se pata challe.

Muskaan: Haan tu sahi keh raha hai, lekin abhi nahin, sahi time aana de, main Ridhima ko bolongi ki kissi ko na kahen.

Rahul: Yea do that. Anyways ab in sab baaton ke bare main bhul ja, aur bata ki aaj ka plan kya hai?

Muskaan: Hmm I dunno.... sab toh chalegaye

Rahul: Toh kya hua? Main hoon na tumhare saath.

Muskaan smiled and layed back down on his lab and Rahul started to caress her hair. Suddenly Muskaan stomach grumbled really loudly.

Muskaan: Oopss...

Rahul: Someones really hungry. So plan 1: Lets go eat, uske baad dekhte hai kya karen.

Muskaan: As you wish.

She got up but Rahul held her arm and pulled her back on the bed.

Muskaan: Kya hua?

Rahul: Uhh Muskaan.... Tu aise jayegi?

He pointed towards her hair.

Muskaan: sorry, no.... main abhi aati hoon.

Rahul: Lekin mere paas hair brush hai.

He said with holding a hair brush in his hands.

Muskaan: Tu mere hair brush ke saath kya kar raha hai? Deh idhar de.

Rahul: Nope.

Muskaan: Rahul yeh kya bachpana hai, brush deh, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, jaldi deh na.

Rahul: Aaj main tumhare baal banaunga.

Muskaan: Kya? No ways.

Rahul: Yes ways.

He pulled her closer to him, and let her hair loose. He started to comb her hair gently trying not to hurt her. He finished combing her hair and Muskaan stood up.

Muskaan: Theek hai, ab khush tune mere baal bhi bana diye, ab chalen?

Rahul: Ek second.

He stood up and walked closer to Muskaan. He took a strand of her hair and tucked it behind her ear.

Rahul: Perfect.

He slid his arm around her waist.

Rahul: Let's go darling.

There was a open buffet in the restuaurant downstairs, Muskaan took a plate and filled it with everything that was there. After all she didn't eat anything since the morning, all she had was that milk in the plane. Rahul on the other hand didn't take anything. They found a table for two and sat down.

Muskaan: Tu kuch nahin khayega?

Rahul: Nahin tujhe dekhar hi mera pet bhar gaya.

Muskaan: Okay okay ab yeh filmi dialogues bolna band kar aur yeh le.

She took a piece of pizza and put it in his mouth.

Rahul: Mmm yummy.

Muskaan: Ohh yummy, mujhe toh laga tujhe bhook nahin hai, kya keh raha tha tu.... haan, tujhe dekh kar hi mera pet bhar gaya.

She said imitating his voice. She smiled and fed him another piece. Muskaan was about to put one in her mouth when Rahul stopped her. He took the piece in his hands and fed her.

Rahul: Kehte hai, jab koi aur tujhe khana khilata hai, toh aur bhi maza ata hai.

Muskaan smiled. Soon the whole big plate of food finished and both of them realized that if they eat any more they stomach would burst.

Rahul: Ice-cream?

Muskaan: Rahul no, maine bahut kha liya, tujhe chahiye toh tu kha.

Rahul: Okay

He got up and got ice-cream for him. He ended up getting a huge cone with even more ice cream on it.

Muskaan: tujhe isse chohta ice-cream nahin mila?

Rahul: nahin yaar, ab main kya karoon, please Muskaan mere saath share kar na.

So they shared the ice-cream and finished it.

Muskaan leaned back on her chair.

Muskaan: Rahul ab bas, ab tu khane ka naam bhi lega na, main phirse vomit kar lungi.

Rahul: Agar main aur kuch bhi khayunga na, toh main bhi tumhare tara vomit kar ke, pura time room me so jayunga. Pheww, maine aaj tak itna khana kabhi nahin khaya, agar roz itna khayunga toh jab tak hum wapas Bombay paunchege mein ek bara sa kadu ban jayunga. Ey Muskaan, mere pass ek idea hai, chal na beach pe jaake walk karen?

Muskaan: Abhi?? Abhi abhi toh khana khaya hai, thodi dekh rukh na.

Rahul: Abhi hi khana khaya hai isiliye main khe raha hoon ki chal walk karen, khana jaldi digest ho jayega.

Muskaan: Theek hai chal.

And so they go to the beach.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#304

Heyy guyss! Sorry for updating so late, i was just out of ideas, i didnt know how to continue, and plus i didnt have much time.

Hope you like the part!!

Do comment!

😃

~Namrata~

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#305

Heyy Namu!!!!
awesome part!!!
it was soo cute and sweet!!
awww..rahul stayed back just for muski!! hehe!
and soo cute...he brushed her hair!! =]
lolz...they ate sooooo much!!!! hahahhaa!
can't wait till the walk on the beach!! plz cont soon!!!
<33333
Mahima

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Nice part!!!!!!!!

Thankss Radhika!

Omgg where have u been??? still busy with exams??

havent spoken to u since soo long.

I thought u wouldnt comment but u did and u were the first one 😃😃

Thankk u!

😃

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: cutie_mahima
Heyy Namu!!!!
awesome part!!!
it was soo cute and sweet!!
awww..rahul stayed back just for muski!! hehe!
and soo cute...he brushed her hair!! =]
lolz...they ate sooooo much!!!! hahahhaa!
can't wait till the walk on the beach!! plz cont soon!!!
<33333
Mahima

Mahimmaa!! Thankk u!

Rahul is alwaysss sweet rightt???

Hahaha i can just imagine muskaan eating so muchh! lollzz

Thankss for the comment again hun! Will try to continue soon.

Hopefully i wont take as long as i did this time

😃😃

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#308

hye nam!!!! it was absolutely an awesome part!!!!!! tooo cute and sweeeet of rahul to stay back for muskan then brushing her hair...man he's soo sweeeetttt!!!!!! i wish i get someone sweeet and hot like him😍..lol...but it was amazing part!!!!! u made my day..🤗 loved ittt!!!!

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

Mahimmaa!! Thankk u!

Rahul is alwaysss sweet rightt???

Hahaha i can just imagine muskaan eating so muchh! lollzz

Thankss for the comment again hun! Will try to continue soon.

Hopefully i wont take as long as i did this time

😃😃

No problem Namu!!!!😃
yesss!!!!!! he iss!!!! i wish i culd be with him!! hahahah😉😉
lolzz!! yaaaa....and i bet she could eat more after an hour!! lmao!!😉😉😛

hahah....kk! will wait for the next part!! 😃

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul
hye nam!!!! it was absolutely an awesome part!!!!!! tooo cute and sweeeet of rahul to stay back for muskan then brushing her hair...man he's soo sweeeetttt!!!!!! i wish i get someone sweeet and hot like him😍..lol...but it was amazing part!!!!! u made my day..🤗 loved ittt!!!!

Thankk u sooo muchh dipiii!!!!!!!!!!!

hahah everyone wishes to get someone like rahul, but i guess there are really noo sweet and hot guys in the world for us rightt??

thankk u!

😃