~Dil Dosti Etc..AR...UPD! Part 32 and 33 Pg70 5/4 - Page 9

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Krani thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey I am updating now!😃
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@Apoorva: awww thank you so much!...I am glad you liked it!
@kvn1983: Hey!...thanks!...yes, she decided to gain his trust, now let's see how she does it!
@santhideepu: Hey! thanks for your comment...about Rajeev...his character will be revealed as the story moves on....whether he will be good or bad, will be revealed slowly...😛
@riddhima1 : Hey!...thanks for your comment!...don't worry you will get AR scenes soon😛...about Rajeev, he is going to be there for a long time...so he is not going to go anywhere soon...😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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alright...so this is a rushed part...I have LOADS of h/w to do...so sorry!...can't send out any PM's...wil try and do it later....but please comment!!
Part 8
RidhimaArmaanRajeev


Ridhima glanced at Armaan from under her lashes...there he was, standing with a patient's file in his hand, smiling and joking with the patient.

Sighing, she placed the file back in its place, and turned towards her patient...Amrita.

"Um...so you health is improving, just keep taking your medicines on time, and you will be out of here in no tiime" Ridhima said smiling.

Looking towards Armaan, she saw him placing the file back in its, place and saying some parting words to the patient.

This is my chance Ridhima thought, and started walking towards Armaan.

She saw Armaan look up, and gave him a hesitant smile. However her smile faltered when she saw his eyes going cold and hard.

He immediately turned around and started walking away from her...towards the door.

"Armaan!" Ridhima called out, her hand raised halfway.

He didn't turn around....he walked outside the door of the General Ward, and turned the corner...disappearing from her view.

Ridhima sighed, and rubbed her forehead...a headache was coming, but she just ignored it and went on with her work hoping to catch Armaan again...and this time she will make sure he doesn't escape.



Armaan looked down at his patient...Mr Rasoi.

"So Mr.Rasoi...how are you today?...any aches or pains?...any nausea?" Armaan asked, looking at the file in his hand.

"Hai Ram...ab hum apko kya pataye?...meri biwi ne toh mera jeena mushkil kar diya hai!...kal raat ko jab woh khana leke aayi...tabhi ek nurse bhi khana leke aa gayi...ab toh aap hi soch lijiye ki kitna sun na para mujhko...abhi bhi mere kaan goonj rahe hain" Mr Rasoi said, rubbing his ear for the extra effect.

Armaan laughed and patted Mr. Rasoi's arm.

"I know sir...ladkiyon ka...ab kya patayein?" Armaan said, with a smile.

"anyway, your reports look pretty good to me, just keep taking your medicines on time" Armaan said, putting the file back in its place.

Putting the stethoscope back around his neck, he was just fixing his collar when he heard the quick clicking of heels, coming towards him.

Glacing up, he saw Ridhima walking towards him, with a small smile on her face.

His heart skipped a beat...but suddenly memories flashed through his face of the time she had pulled that prank...his eyes narrowed, and all the warmness in them disappeared.

He saw her smile falter, and he quickly spun around, before he could see her hurt face.

He quickly started walking towards the door, and prayed to god that she won't follow him.

He still heard the loud clicking of heels...now even faster.

He almost stopped when he heard Ridhima shout out his name.

He started walking faster and almost ran when he turned the corner....He leaned against the wall when he walked into the fire-escape.

He knew he was being a jerk...he had heard from Anjali that last night Ridhima had stayed most of the night thinking of something.

He was dying to know what had Ridhima worried....he wanted to be there for her...to comfort her...but those memories would always come back...to haunt him of the pain he had endured.

It was very tough to trust someone once they had broken it...he had told Ridhima he liked her...he had trusted her as his friend...but she just threw it away like it was nothing important.

Fury grew in him....he pressed his hands to his eyes to stop the tears that were threatening to spill. Taking a deep breath, he composed himself, and went on with his work, hoping not to have another interaction with Ridhima.

I am sorry for the short part...I will try adn update another part tomorrow!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!!

I did not get whats happeing between AR.. why did they fight???did I miss anything hope things will get well soon...continue when its possible for u...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😛 so he want to know why she is in tension😳😛 but its nice he cares for her lot😍 and i wish soon she catch him😎👍🏼 plz continue it soon😛😉


"You remind me of a balloon,
Happy and bouncy,
Someone people can have fun with,
Enjoyed by all.
You remind me of a lot of things,
But nothing can compare to the real person,
A friend I can look up to,
Cherished by me."


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: santhideepu

Hey!!

I did not get whats happeing between AR.. why did they fight???did I miss anything hope things will get well soon...continue when its possible for u...

as you know, my story starts off from the point where Ridz had played that prank on Armaan about being raped by Vivek...so that's where the story starts off from, and how she now realizes what a terrible mistake she did, and she wants to apologise to Armaan...but Armaan is very hurt...hope this helped😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😛 so he want to know why she is in tension😳😛 but its nice he cares for her lot😍 and i wish soon she catch him😎👍🏼 plz continue it soon😛😉


"You remind me of a balloon,
Happy and bouncy,
Someone people can have fun with,
Enjoyed by all.
You remind me of a lot of things,
But nothing can compare to the real person,
A friend I can look up to,
Cherished by me."


https://www.streetdirectory.com/img/florist/chocolate_lover_IV575_enlarge.jpg

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awwwww🤗..thank you so much!!!😃....update will be tomorrow...if I get time😳
Edited by sweetdamage - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i hv jst caught up with ur f f nd i must say yaar it ws awesom hm ridz had played tht prank which he had been hurtd him soo mch nd now ridz wntd 2 tlk 2 him nd he ws ignoring her nd she ws also crying she had lost sch agrt friend cnt wait fr d nxt prt plz do pm me whn u gonna update nxt prt
cont sooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdamage

awwwww🤗..thank you so much!!!😃....update will be tomorrow...if I get time😳

its ok no problem i can understand
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Posted: 16 years ago
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