Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 112

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi priya... Hiii Guglu...

How are you??? f9...aur tum kaisi ho...???😃

Fabulous update dear. Mazaa aa gaya. thanqqqq so much yaar...

Par ye kya, Naina ke confession ke baad Rajveer ne jawab nahi diya. Mujhe laga ha ki wo kuch toh kahega. Par wo toh khamosh ho gaya. bichare k dimag par asar pada hai...😆

Aditi apne bhai ki har aat bina kahe samajh jaati hai. Usne apne bhai se kaha ki use apni behen ki jidd puri karni padegi. Aur usne Naina se Rajveer ka saath dene ka wada bhi le liya. How sweet!!! sisters hamesha sweet hi hote hain...actual lyf me...lekin serial me ufff...kaise kaise char dilate hain yaar...

Par Rajveer ne Naina ko Shimla bhejne ka mann bana liya hai. Magar kyun. hogi koi wajah....

Naina ne aap aur I trust you kehkar kina kuch keh diya. Kitne kam shabdon me kitni gehri baat keh gayi. Par Adi ke saath aisa kya hua hai jiski wajah se Raj darta hai aur nahi chahta ki Naina ke saath waisa kuch ho? Jaldi se confusion dur karo. karungi na...bass thoda sa wait kar le......😃

Also, jab Naina dagmagai, tabhi mai samajh gayi ki kuch gadbad hai. Usko gli lagi hai. Mgar ye sach hai ya sapna. Please Naina kokuch nahi hona chahiye. Jaldi update karo. Mujhse aur bardash nahi ho raha. sach hai yaar...sapna nahi hai bilkul bhi...😆

Once again, a fabulous update. And congratulations for completing a year. thanqqqqqqqq Guglu........😃

And a very HAPPY MakarSankranti to you too. to u too sweety.......😃

Cont soon.

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

CONGRATULATIONS on completing 1 year. Tere Naina is now 1 year old. 🥳 Thanqqqqqqqqqqqqq Nisha...😃

Superb update👏thanxxxx a lot dear...😃

The starting was very funny. Ghaseeta prasad ka naam kaise pada was very hilarious. 😆Aur Hanuman jee was the first police Commissioner. OMG where do you come up with ideas like this. I rolled with laughter while reading it.🤣he he he...ideas toh mere dimag me aise hi ghumte rahte hain...bass land hone k liye thoda waqt lagta hai...😆

I had expected Raj to confess his love to naina then and there. But what is the worry that is stopping him to do so. Aditi can easily make out what is going on in Raj's mind..She knows dat Raj loves Naina very much. But it is only her past that is stopping him from accepting her love. But what did happen to Aditi in the past?😲sab kuch clear kar dungi dear...bass thoda sa tym lagega...😃

Naina is happy that she has finally told Raj about her feelings...She is waiting for his answer. When Raj tells her about moving to Shimla...she is shocked and feels hurt. She is unable to understand why he is sending her away ..but she trusts him completely and so does not question.😕 Naina ne Adi se vaada bhi toh kiya tha ki voh hamesha Raj ka sath degi...😊

Despite all the safety arengements that Raj had made, Naina gets shot😭...although it appears that he was the target and she was only trying to save him. Hats off to you for wrtiing the whole scene so perfectly....very differnt but Superb.👍🏼 glad u like it dear...!!! actually main thoda confused thi ki main is scene ko thik se likh payungi ya nahi...bt now i m happy😃

If raj had not thought of sending Naina aways then she would not have been hurt. He needs to understand that Naina is most safe in his house and with him.😭aqal nahi hai ladke me...tabhi toh yeh kaam kiya hai...par dont worry main kuch karti hun...😃

Please continue soon...waiting most eagerly to read more.... aaj try karti hun ud karne ki...okkkk😃

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

sorry for late reply..... koi baat nahi hai dear...tum may b bz hogi...😃

dono hi updts k reply saath mein dungi.... okkkk😃

pehli updt was awesome.....totally romantic rn wer too good....😳😳RN toh hamesha se hi too gud hain ...jab bhi voh sath me hote hain toh...😃

finally u made evry readers new year very beautiful ......too good....😳😊⭐️ sirf Try kiya hai...baki sabb kuch toh aap sab k hathon me hi hain na...😃 😃 😃

aur yeh wala updt toh bilkul hi opposite yet awesome...👏👏Thanqqqqqqq Lipi...😃

loved d way u showed d situation of two hearts and beautifully expressed der feeling.... thanxxxxx😃

loved it....👏

last part breathtaking......amazing...👏👏

aur har baar I say dis aur iss baar bhi dat d dialgues in ur fics always to look frwd too....👏
👏 Thanqqqqqq so much Lipi...😃

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

awesome update Priya, Thanqqqqqqq Maam...😃

Arjun Ghaseeta k saath apne aap ko ghaseet raha hai, jaanta hai varna kaise band bajayega Ankur un dono ki. Hanuman jee ko bahut yaad karna pad raha hai bechare ko.

kahte hain na ki jab dava kaam nahi karti toh dua karni padti hai...😛

Bhaut kuch likh diya ek hi update me tum ne. Pyaar. judai, dard, bebasi, trust aur shayad ehsaas bhi itne ki sab ko explain karna mere liye bahut mushkil hoga. Phir bhi mai koshish kar sakti hoon i think. is ka matlab tumhe achha laga na...mera kaam safal ho gaya...😃

Raj aur Naina me se Naina to sab samajh rahi hai par Raj ki shayad majboori aise hai ki sab samajhte hue bhi vo sach accept nahi karna chahta hai. bass ek uljhan me fassa hua hai...😕

Reason simply yahi hai ki shayad us ko Naina ko kho dene ka dar sata raha hai kahin na kahin. Adi ne bhi utna samjha diya jitna jaroori tha, Naina ki khushi se vo bhi khush hai. sahi kaha...Raj ko darr hai Naina ko kho dene ka...😃

Raj ka is condition me aisa faisla lena justified hai mere view se, kyounki mai jaanti hoon ki is dar me vo Naina ko jeene nahi dena chahta hai ki kal ko vo Raj se alag ho jaayegi. bilkul sahi kaha hai yaar...yahi reason hai ki Raj kudh ko dukh dete hue yeh dicission le raha hai...😊

Shimla bhejne ki saari taiyaari ho gayi hai. Mujhe Raj ki bhi condition soch k bura lag raha hai n so as Naina, dono me se koi bhi doosre se door nahi jaana chahta hai. yupe...parr mazburi hai...Raj ki bhi aur meri bhi😊

Par ye last moment pe kis ne Naina ko goli maar di? I think Vikram k hi aadmi honge, aur kaun ho sakta hai? Raj ka dekha hua day dream sach ho gaya . Raj ne nahi naina ne dekha tha...😊

I hope ki jaldi hi continue karogi. jee maam...😃

Originally posted by: vvdn

WONDERFUL update.......waise Naina ko bullet lagi usme wondeful waali koi baat toh nahi hai but ye tumhari writing ke liye tha.simply gr8.... he he he😆 😆 😆...thanqqqqq Namita...😃

last part is superb.m sure Raj ka pyaar Naina ko bacha lega par....par iska matlab ye nahi ki aap aaram se update karogi....update fast...kyunki Naina ko jaldi hospital le jana hai..aur agar update mein der hui to use hospital le jane mein bhi der hogi right !😊

dont worry aisa kuch nahi hoga...😆 😆 😆!!! aur haan...yeh koi typical serial type ka drama nahi hai...toh is ka matlab toh samajh hi gayi na😉 😉 😉...ya samjhayun...😛 😛 😛??? naaaaaaaa...next part padho...sabb samajh jayogi...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

😲 ye tumne kya kiya!!naina ko goli maar di 😭 mera yakeen karo yaar...maine goli bilkul nahi maari😃 😃 😃

abhi abhi to becharon ko pyaar hua hai aur tumne alag kar diya...hw can anyone shot shot her when raj is thr..ab us goli chalane wale ki to shamat hai..😆abb yeh toh waqt batayega...i mean mera ud batayega...😃 😆😆

u better make her alright n fine in coming nxt few updates...n tht better b soon... jo hukum sarkaar...par doc ki advice bhi toh chahiye na...😆

n u included a long part abt my sweetu 😳 yupe...mujhe laga tha ki tumhare sweethrt k bare me padh kar tum mujhe galiyaan bilkul bhi nahi dogi...par yahan toh sabb ulta ho gaya...😆 😆 😆

bt thts nt fair..i m still angry even if u hv included arjun n ghaseeta ram's conversation 😆 he he he...is ka matlab toh yahi hai na yaar...ki tum gussa toh thi...par pahle hasste hue...phir gussa aaya mujh par...hai na...😆 😆 😆

thnks bt no thanks for this update 😛 😊 arre naraz mat ho...next part me kuch karti hun...!!! lekin kya karungi pata nahi....😆 😆 😆
update asap
tc,
mehendi

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TERE NAINA 🥳 🥳 🥳

priya thank u so much dear for giving us such a wonderful n lovely fic 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Awesome part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 thanqqqqqqqq Yogitha...😃 😃 😃 😃

Ghaseeta Prasads kismat acchi thi ek flash back ne usse arjun ke hatton se bacha liye,the scene between arjun n ghaseeta is so funny,arjun sirf itna poocha ki kisne uska ye naam rakha aur ghaseeta to poora kahani hi suna diya usko free main..us fake marriage certificate main bechara ghaseeta ka koi galthi nahi hain wo tho paisa bachane ke ckakkar main tha aur arjun usko galat samjha n usko ek thappad mara ...poor fellow wo wahi pe do round ghum kar phir se wahi jagah par khadha hogaya 😆 😆 😆 😆bichara Arjun bhi kya karta...!!! Ghaseeta ne us ki jaan jo bachai thi...ab us k sath aur kuch kar bhi toh nahi sakta...vaise bhi dekha jaye toh Ghaseeta ka bhi toh koi kasur nahi hai...kyoun ki voh toh bichara bachat kar raha tha na...😆😆 😆 😆

TN fic ki wajah se my g.k also improving yaar ab dekho mujhe ye baat bilkul bhi nahi pata ki Lord hanuman is the first police commissioner...aapka bahut bahut shukriya priya jee for this precious info ...arre tumhe nahi pata maine ek G.K book bhi likha hai...parr prob yeh hai ki us ko koi publisher nahi mil raha hai😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...tumhe jab bhi jo jaan na ho na...be-jhijhak puch lena...main hun na...😆 😆 😆

Raj ko itna sad sad dekh ke mujhe bilkul accha nahi lag raha hain ,jaldi kuch karo na main kya karun...dard us ne khud liya hai aur dava bhi us k paas hi hai...😉 😉 😉

adi is a perfect sis, wo kitni acchi tarah se samaj gayi raj ki uljanon ko n most importantly us ki dil ki baat ko n adi ne bilkul sahi kaha raj se kabhi apni dil ki bhi sun liya kar .....ab tu jaldi clear karde ki adi ke saath actually kya hua ...Adi toh sweet sis hai hi...yeh toh main fic k starting se bata rahi hun...par Adi k sath kya hua tha...yeh abhi clear nahi kar payungi...!!! haan...kuch uds k baad jarur clear kar dungi...😃 😃 😃

Yaha Naina bhi pareshan hain ki uske confession ke badh bhi raj ne kuch kyun nahin kaha.. naina tu nahin jaanthi hain kya yaha pe priya madam ne izzazat nahi di raj ko apne dil ki baat batane keliye ...naina janti bhi toh mera kya bigad leti...kyoun ki maine use sign kiya hai...toh use vohi karna padega jo main kahungi...😆 😆 😆

Adi n nainas wo vaada wala part is really nice thanqqqqqq😃

ye raj dinner kare bina bahar jaate dekh ke mujhe laga kisi kaam pe jara tha shayad lekin ye to naina ko shimla bejhne ke poori tayyariyan karke aaya...ab raj ka bhi koi dosh nahin i can feel his pain from this one line "uska chehra aisa lagraha tha jaisa wo khudh ko kahi chodh aaya ho" ...kyoun ki raj ka yeh dicission lena bhi baht mushkil tha us k liye....

naina to statue bangayi when she came to know that raj is sending her away from him. raj tikhi kaha naina ne aap keh kar usko ko ek pal main dur kardiya n i trust u keh kar us ko kareeb bhi le aayi ...ab naina hurt hui thi...toh kisi na kisi tarah se toh kahegi hi na...😃

the lines u have writtenwhen raj n naina r looking at the moon .......pyar koi bol nahin......mujhe bahuttttttttt acche lage. Glad...tumhe yeh song achha laga yeh mera all tym fav song hai...😃

All r very sad when naina is leaving sasu mom bhi bahut sad hain n i liked it when she said that mera dil kehtha hain ki bahut jaldh tum is ghar main wapas aaogi ...dekha mere fic ki saasu maa kitni achhi hai...voh chahti hain ki un ki bahu ghar me rahe...😆😆 😆

lekin Tujhe to manna padega yaar naina ko jaane se rokhne ke liye usko goli ka shikar banadiya ..aur koi tarika nahi mila tujhe usse rokne ke liye ...kya karun...tumhare dhamkiyon ki wajah se daar kar yeh kar diya...😆 😆 😆

..tumpe to main is baat ke liye gussa bhi nahi hosakthi kyunki tumne us last scene beautifully describe kiya ...the way naina daud kar raj ke pass aayi n the way she hugged him n raj ki dil ki baat n the way he hugged her tightly.....the whole scene is simply superb ...👏 👏 👏 👏 thanqqqqqqqq...is ka matlab main phir se galiyaan khane se bach gayi...😃 😃 😃 😃

ye jaroor us vikram hi kaam hoga ,ab raj usse chodega nahin ...mujhe bahut maza aayega us din... ab tu jaldi naina ko tikh kardena ohk ab yeh toh doc k hath me hai na...😃 😃 😃

thank u so much yaar for this wonderful part 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗thanxxxxxxxxx to u too sweety...tumhare beautiful comments k liye...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Ek baat bata ye LRl ka joke hain kaha. bhul gayi thi...is baar😃

now i think ye kehna jarrori nahin ki waiting for the next part eagerly ...nahi yaar...kaho na...mujhe achha lagta hai...😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Abey nautanki, naraaz nahi hun..but bahot irritate hota hai when updates late ho jaate hai just because you guys dont save them...Mostly sab writers ke saath yeh hota hai...!!!!